Rantara SS-THE WAR OF LOVE..(chapter 4 @ page 6)

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rantaraTanisha

@rantaraTanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello..

My yedis..

I m tanisha..I want a start ss on rantara..but I don't get any title..but my chamkili..my hina..help me..see suggested me the title..the war of love..

An see edit this for me..

Mumbai..

Antara woke up from her bed..she was so sad..Antara held her family photo in her hand..Antara said "papa..why..aap muje chod ke kyu chale gye..Aaj papa ka birthday hai..aur aaj main bahot derd mahesush kar rahe hu..aaj mamaa bhi aap ke bare main puche ge..main kya kah ge.."

Suddenly Antara looked out from the window..rain was starting slowly wetting the soil..

Antara said "nahi..aaj nahi..bhagwaan ji aap itna siyaapa kyu de te ho..ab main kya kar sakte hu.."

Antara came out on the terrace..

Raghu was on his terrace..

Raghu said "pahadan..kya hua..?..aaj tera interview hai kya.."

Antara said "padosi tuje kaise pata chala.."

Raghu said "WO kya hai na..bole to jab tare ko interview de ne ko jana hai..then barrish aa te hai.."

Antara said "pata nahi..ise barrish ko muje se kya problems hai.."

Raghu said "pahadan..barrish musibat nahi pyaar le kar ate hai.."

Antara said "chod padosi.."

Raghu said "pahadan..chal apun tare ko chod ke ata hu.."

Antara said "but main bheeg jayoge.."

Raghu said "but interview ke liye pahoch jayege.."

Antara said" OK.."

Antara came with Raghu..

Raghu and Antara sat in the jeep..

Raghu started the jeep..

Antara and Raghu came to the hospital..

Antara went for her interview..

The nurse came and called Antara..

Antara went to her

She said "are u fine?..I mean aap bheeg gye ho..I think aap ko job ki nahi medicine ki jarurat hai.."

Antara said no.."WO barrish ho rahe hai..achi..achi.".

The nurse said please ..

Antara came outside..

She look that Raghu was waiing for her..

Antara feel so sad..she needed someone..she ran to Raghu

..Antara hug Raghu..Raghu was shocked..he try to hug her an put his hand on her..but Raghu can't hug Antara..Raghu said "pahdan tu theek hai"..Antara realized that she hugged Raghu..she broke the hug..

Raghu said "pahadan..kabhi kabhi aise ho jata hai..koi Banat nahi.."

Antara said "WO muje.."

Raghu said "tare ko job nahi mili na..koi baat nahi.."

Antara sat in the jeep..

On the road:

Raghu said "pahadan..apun ko ak baat samaj main nahi aka rahe..bole to jo ye tare eyes se aa raha hai..vo tear hai ya rain.".

Antara said "ye barrish..sirf derd de te hai.."

Raghu said ye barrish..derd ko le jate hai..derd ise barrish main kho jata hai.."

Antara said" padosi..main mamaji ke help kar na chahte hu..aaj mare papa ka birthday hai..aur ye derd muje aaj tod de ga.."

Raghu said |pahadan..bole to tod to apun bhi sakta hai..tare haddi.."

Antara was angry..

Antara said "padosi..tu mari haddi tod ga.."

Raghu was smiling..

Raghu said "ye pahadan..mari pahadan.."

Antara looked into Raghu's eyes..

Suddenly the jeep stopped.

Antara's mind:"ye padosi ne jeep kyu rok de..kahi ye jungle main mare sath.."

Raghu's mind "ye pahadan..kya soch rahe hai..main ise ke sath kuch karuga.."

Antara said "aise nahi ho sakta.."

Raghu said "aise nahi ho sakta.."

Antara was smiling..

Antara started to fear

Raghu said "jeep kharab ho gye.."

Antara said "ab"..

Raghu said "ab apun use jungle ka maza le ga.."

Antara said "aur sher aa gya to.."

Raghu said "tu hai na..sherni ko dekh kar bhaag jayega.."

Raghu ran..Antara followed him..

Antara said "Raghu..I'll kill u.."

Raghu said "are ye pahadan..mare piche padi hai..pata nahi ye kya soch rahe hai..ak bechara larka.."

Antara said "gunda.."

Raghu was turn..he was angry on Antara.."gunda?"..

Antara said "yes..gunda..jo sab ko paresaan kar ta hai.."

Raghu held Antara's hand..

Raghu said "acha..to gunda sirf paresaan kar ta hai.."

Antara said "Raghu..Mera hath choro..muje dard ho raha hai.."

Raghu left Antara's hand..

Antara said "I'm sorry.."

Raghu was turn..Raghu opened his shirt buttons..Raghu took off his shirt..

Raghu feltl the rain..

Antara said "kya kar rahe ho.".

Raghu said "ye pahadan..jyaada soch mat..tare cloths bheeg gye hai..ye shirt pahen le.."

Antara said "but Raghu..tare cloths bhi bheeg gye hai..tuje thand lag jayege.."

Raghu said.."ye pahadan..jid mat kar..apun larka hai..tuje ise ke jarurat hai.."

Antara hold the shirt..

Raghu said "apun bonfire lagata hai."

Antara said "Raghu WO..muje.."

Antara and Raghu sat near the bonfire

Raghu said "theek hai..?"

Antara said "WO muje bhukh lage hai.."

Raghu said.."ye pahadan..tuje kya lag ta hai apun ne hotel se khana mang va ya hai.."

Antara said" gusaa mat kar..main kudh khana dhoond le ge.."

Raghu said "jungle main mat jaa..sher dar jayenge.."

Antara said" I'll kill u.."

Antara was gone..

Raghu said ye pahadan..jungle main chali gye.".Raghu got up..

Raghu said "Antara.."

Antara was lost in the jungle..

Antara said "Raghu.."

Antara ran..suddenly Antara collided with someone..it was Raghu..

Antara hugged Raghu tightly

Antara said" tum kaha chale gye the..pata hai main kitna dar gye the.."

Raghu said "muje maaf kar de..main kabhi nahi chod ga..nana tuje na tera sath.."

Raghu hug Antara..

Precap"

Antara was walking on the road

She gets a lift from satya an his gang..satya is Raghu's bro..and Antara's friend..

Satya said "Antara WO.."

Satya hold Antara's hand..

"Satya leave my hand.."

Raghu came onto the road..

Antara came outside..

Antara ran..

Antara hug Raghu..

Satya said" Raghu tu mare aur Antara ke bich main mat aa.."

Raghu fights with satya's gang..

Raghu Antara an satya lost in the jungle..

Satya said "pata nahi..ye Raghu ke galte hai..hum jungle main lost ho gye.."

Antara hold Raghu's hand.

Edited by rantaraTanisha - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

hope no one copies this story

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rantaraTanisha

@rantaraTanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22
Yayy you posted it
I loved it soo much
Always ready to help
Waiting eagerly for the next one
Pls cont asap

Yas..hinu..

My chamkili..

I pm u about next part soon..

Hinu ji..

U add magik in my story..

Love u..

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rantaraTanisha

@rantaraTanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians
lovely start.😊

Tnx..ria ji..

Next time main aap ko long cmnt le kar rahe ge..

Love u..

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Sushmitha

@.sushmitha.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Tanisha...
That was an awesome update dear...
I loved it...<3

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rantaraTanisha

@rantaraTanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.
Tanisha...
That was an awesome update dear...
I loved it...<3

Tnx for cmnt..

My baby doll..

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rantaraTanisha

@rantaraTanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever
thanks for the pm

tnx for cmnt..

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rantaraTanisha

@rantaraTanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Raghu and
Antara were walking on the road lost in thoughts.

Antara suddenly
said "WO dekho..raghu koi car aa rahe hai.".

It was
Satya.

Satya said
"Antara chalo..WO tare mamaa ne muje bheja hai..itni raat ho gye hai..aur tu
gar nahi aye.."

Raghu said
"apun tare sath nahi jayega.."

Antara
looked at raghu..

Raghu said
"tu jaa.."

Antara sits
with Satya.

Satya
start the car..

Satya's
friend said "Antara ji aap itni raat ko aise jungle main.."

He held Antara's
hand..

Satya
hold his hand..

Satya said
"Antara ka hath chod.."

He held
the gun..and put the gun on Antara..

Satya said"
kya kar rahe ho.."

He said"
muje yahi kar ne ke paise mile hai.."

Suddenly
his other friend stopped the car..

Raghu came in front of the car.

Antara
came outside..

Satya
also came outside..

Antara ran..

Antara
hugged Raghu tightly snuggling into his neck

Raghu pushed
Antara behind him to protect her from
those evil guys and their filthy eyes.

He
started to fight with satya's gang..

And gunde
bhaag gye..

He held
satya's Collar

Antara said"
raghu satya ne kuch nahi kiya.."

Satya and
Antara went to the bonfire..

Antara
was sleeping on raghu..raghu said "ye so gye ise bhukh lagi the:..satya said "mari
car main chocolate hai.."Raghu went to this car to get that chocolate for Antara.

Satya
came near Antara he couldn't take his
eyes of Antara..he tried to touch Antara's lips..suddenly raghu came..

Raghu said
"satya kya kar raha hai.."

Antara woke
up..

Raghu said
"tera dimag nahi hai na..aise kahi bhi so te hai..ab na main tuje kabhi akela
nahi chodo ga.."

Tears
brimmed in Antara's eyes..

Antara ran from there..

Raghu
followed her..

On the
Road..

Antara said"
mare papa bhi yahi kah te the..'

Raghu
look Antara's lips..rain started pouring..

Rain
drops were brimming on Antara's lips..

raghu
kissed Antara..