hehe sab res lagate hai take they can read ur updates with peaceful minds hehe.. we need a clear mind to think before we read nai to asya legega ke laptop screen pe ants chali bharat lke.. it would seem messed up haha
DDEJ mein too torture hoo gaya tha yaar... even sadness and depression could be portrayed beautifully... seperation koo bhi khubsurati see dikhaya jaa sakta hain without including any crap... but unlogon nee to torture bana diya tha,...🤢... don't worry even if it is depressing it won;t be torture like that...😆... uss torture sey too kafi acha hain that i am damn sure about tera sukkon... lets see how it comes out... ab baki sab pee depended hain.. .pata anahin yaar sab res laga key bhag jate hain... yaar ek line kaa bhi coment kar doo too i am khus... aur res karte hain too unres karna kaa naam bhi nahin lete... thats why i was having guts feleing that people are not liking the stuff...slow... i am now going in snails speed for that FF... pta nahin kab speed pakar paungi!!😆
par unres bhi to karte haina
dont worry ddej se way better hai tera ff.. nothing can be compared to it hehe
dont worry if u keep writing as u planned it then the story would surely pick up pace on its own tu bas likhti ja😉