DDEJ Chit Chat Thread # 21- * YEDI's CLUB - Page 84

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

haan yr..bhut depressing papers hote hain uske🤢..bole to koi coma mein hi pahunch jaye😆
main to dungi + kya kr legi?...😡😆
haan ye baat to hai...😆
but u know..it was simple n very realistic😊...agr kuch jyada excitement hoti to over lagta..but it was so perfect.😳...both were happy,excited...n full of emotions...😳

Originally posted by: ifians

haan yaar... sach mein coma wala papers🤢

actually u know i was totaly clueless about the reaction part..😆... actually aisa kuch maine kabhi likha hi nahin... mummty pappa ad bache wala seq🤣... aur waisey bhi aur koi couple hota too thik hain.. but when you are writting in rantara... bahut samhalke likhna parta hain yaar... kuch bhi jyada ho gaya too OTT ho jayega... which i hate most🤢... too maine uss part koo short kar diya... 🤪... ab pata nahin... joo hain jaisa hain... tumhare samne hain🤣

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

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main samjh sakti hun yr..u know lack of experience..🤣🤣🤣...its very typical yr.😊..ye baat to sahi hai..rantara ke liye thoda track pr hi lena padta hai..😆.nhi to sab gondgol ho jaya hai...wo short nhi tha it was very sufficient..😳...haan mere samne hai aur maine sabse pehle read krke comment bhi kr diya..😉😆

Originally posted by: ifians

thx re,... 😆... just hope kii abb jiska demand tha rantara ki bache kiii at least woo khus ho jayein too everything iss fine... pata nahin kahan hain meri nikki no 1...😎

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

nikki bhi hojayegi khush...aati hi hogi...😆
achcha ye batao ab kaun si story pr focus karogi..GAG over hone ke baad?😃

Originally posted by: ifians

main too dono pee hii focus karna chahti hoon... but syad tera sukkoun pe jyada concentrate karna poarega... it;s gonna be trickier. but occassionally main paroshan bhi update kar ddoongi for change.. cause paroshan it's not gonna be long like this stories... it will be a SS...😊

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

okay...we r waiting fr both😳
ek baat bolun...GAG over hone wala hai...to mujhe sajda ki yaad aagayi..😭..main GAG se jayda sajda ki fan hun😳...mujhe bhut bura laga tha jab sajda over hua tha.😭..i am deeply attached with it...😭but each story has its end😊..kabhi na kabhi to ye hona hi tha.

Originally posted by: -abhi-pundir-

hello guys.

Originally posted by: ifians

hello nishu ji😉

Originally posted by: -abhi-pundir-

hayy ria 😒