(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 14

prerna dat ws short bt cute update 😊
raghu bh na ab antu us se puch k job kregi 🥺
mast hai limit ka gunda...bt poor antu had to do
work to support her family
hopefully she succeds in dud..well dine yedis..
keep posting 😉 update soon n all d best 😊

raghu bhi na..kya mast line maar raha hai antu par..ya u reed thet artical..na raghu pata nahi use job vale ko kya karega..antu ko paresaan kar ne..

raghu miya antu ka pich hi nahi chodta..kaha jati hai pahoch jaya hai..

Awesome updates 👏
part 8
Raghu nd mm convo 😆 🤣
raghu got to know abt satya behind antu 😃
he is worried abt her nw
satya 😡 is so cheap idiot
poor antu
raghu is there to rescue antu 😳

Part 9
Rantara tashan started 😃
raghu warned antu abt satya
antu didnt like tht
Raghu vil take care of everythng 😳 vil protect her

read all the episodes in one go...

Part 10
Awesome 😃
antu on mission to earn money 😊 nd help her family
raghu followed antu 😛
antu got irritated
Loved last line 😳
continue soon 😊

EPISODE 11 : PLZ GO TO Gangsters Daily Adda after reading..

Antara's POV :

Shaam ho chuki thi . Waqt bhi kitna ajeeb hota hain na? Udhar main Kashmir mein kaam se occupied raha karti thi. Kabhi mere singing classes toh kabhi mera college . I was always doing something. Idhar aake, I keep roaming from place to place thinking on what to do. Aur idhar ke log bhi alag hain. Woh Raghu, pata nahi woh hamesha meri help kyun karna chahta hain. Hum kuch din pehle hi toh mile the. But now, I have other things to thin about. I have to search for my job. Mujhe idhar ke college mein toh easily admission mil gaya hain due to my high marks. Summer vacations are going on now and I will be joining the collge from the next academic year . Uff !! But now , I need to find a job to support my family financially. My family is going through so much and I need to contribute my bit. I will go and start searching a job from tomorrow. So here I am , wandering here and there in mamaji's house. Wait .. Papa ka blazer idhar hi randomly pada hua hain. Main isse fold karke cupboard main rakh deti hoon. I was folding it when I saw that a pen drive fell out from the pocket. It was a very small pen drive which I had never seen before . I handled many of dad's records so I knew alot about his pen drives and all sort of data containg instruments.. Which one was this? Aur papa ne usse apne blazer ke pocket mein kyun rakha tha..

I gotta check it out on my PC. Just then papa came and snatched the pen drive. "Beta , yeh pen drive ko mat lo. Its very important. It contains alot of my data which is confidential. I will be needing it for my new clinic . Please dont use this pen drive as I dont want any data to get lost or something"said papa . I felt so wierd !! I used to handle all of papa's records and pen drives and now papa doesn't trust me. He thinks I am irresponsible enough to handle the data !! God !!

"Theek hain papa, jaisa aap chahe "I said with a smiling face.

Ashok Kaul's POV:

Sorry Antara beta, you are my responsible girl !! I am not giving you the pen drive because I dont trust you. Its because I dont want you to see that information. It contains pictures, videos, documents all related to terrorist activities. I want my sweet little daughter to stay away from all of this. The spark of the evil shall never reach you !!

Few moments later (Basti):

"abey bhai ye sample kidhar se aa gaya?!" pakiya looked towards the road as he saw the old and meek postman entering into the basti. Pakiya, chotu and raghu were hanging out on the garage. Machmach was not with them as he had to be with DM. "lagta hain tere laila ka sandesha leke aya hain.." chotu said patting his head. "abey chotu.. tu apni sambhal.. dekh meri laila kitni achi hain..chithi bhej ke apun ka paisa bachata hain.. aur teri wali to bas SMS kar ke mobile ka paisa khatam kar deta hain aur tujhe hi paisa bharna padta hain..." pakiya said. "ee khabardaar.. meri shalu kebarein mein mat kahena..." chotu said folding his collar. "abey chup ho jao tum dono..." raghu said a bit loudly, "koi kaam dhanda nahi aur suru ho jate ho apni laila aur shalu ko le kar..." raghu said in miffed voice while he was fixing some parts of his bike. "sorry bhai.." both pakiya and chotu said in unison. "theek hain.." raghu glared at them and got busy into work. "maaf karna beta..." as they heard a low voice their eyes moved towards the entrance of garage and looked the old postman standing there. "arey mishra ji.. bare dino baad idhar ayein... kaise ho.. badiya naa?!" pakiya asked. "yahan aa ke kaun badiya reh sakta hain?..." postman said weeping his sweat. "kya bola mishra ji?" chotu frowned. "kuch nahi beta.. arey woh... iss basti mein miss kaul kahan raheti hain tum logo ko malum hain?! letter mein pata thik se likha nahi hain!" mishra ji said. "kyaa?!!" pakiya and chotu made a face. "haan... agar miss kaul ka pata bata dete to bari meherbani hoti.." mishra jii said. "oye mishra ji... yee kaisa ajeeb naam hain?.. misscall?!! Dekho aaj woo... 1^st april nahin hain.. too abhi apun logo ko budhu nahin bana ne kaa.." pakiya said. "arey nahin beta... letter pe yahin naam likha hain miss kaul." mishra ji said. suddenly pakiya and chotu laughed loudly and mishra jii fixed his glass awkwardly. "arey mishra ji.. sahi jagah ayein ho aap.. abhi phone nikaloon.. apun aap ko misscall ka pata bataa deta hain..." chotu said chocking a laugh. "arey beta par.." mishra ji tried to say. Raghu nodded his head in irritation looking towards pakiya and chotu and moved towards mishra ji.

Meanwhile antara was going out on her agenda to seek a job. Then she heard a huge sound of laughter from the garage's side. she looked towards the garage and saw pakiya and chotu were laughing like hell and an old man was standing near them with meek face. that man must be postman. antara jerked his face in disappointment. They were making fun of that old person. But what else could be expected from those street smart ruffians? Suddenly antara heard that the old man was asking about some miss kaul. she became curious and moved towards the garage.

"MIshra ji kya baat hain?! kiss ko dhoond rahe ho?" raghu moved near mishra ji giving a glare towards pakiya and chotu which made them silent. "wohi to kab se bata rahi hoon.. main miss kaul ko dhoond rahi hoon..." mishra jii said. "misscall?! Ye kaisa ajib naam hian yaar?!" raghu asked scratching his head. "excuse me!!" suddenly they heard a sweet voice roaming around. They all looked towards the source of the sound. Raghu was surprised to find antara standing at the entrance of the garage. The white salwar with green and pink threadwork looked really lovely on her. she looked fresh like early morning rays. his eyes immediately get stuck to her face. "maaf karna uncle.. par kya ye letter antara kaul yaa ashok kaul ke liye hain?!" antara asked. "haa haa.. yahin too naam hain.. antara kaul.. kya aap hi antara kaul hain?!" mishra jii asked. "jo haan.. main hi hoon.." antara said. mishra jii huffed. "ye li jiye maam Kashmir se aap ki letter ayi hain.. pleae yahan sign kar dijiye.." mishra ji said. antara signed the paper. "to yahich hain misscall?!.. wahh kya naam hain.." chotu and pakiya giggled silently. Antara heard that and glared towards pakiyaa and chotu. "jii shukriya.." antara said as mishra jii handed over the letter to her. antara saw komal and nargis' name on the pad . a huge smile spread on her face shinning her gloomy eyes so radiantly after so long. Raghu's heart thudded loudly and hos breath hitched. He never saw her smiling so brightly and beautifully. Her eyes were gleaming in utter happiness. He never saw her like that before. The cloud which was covering the sun was drove away by sudden heavy winds and the sun was again shinning with its warm rays. Antara kept looking at the letter and moved towards her house. Raghu's gaze kept following her. "OYEEE!!!..." antara heard a loud sound from behind and looked back curiously. She found raghu looking to her with unreadable gaze. She looked at him in confusion. "MISS KAUL!!..." he suddenly said in a very teasing voice and smirked. Pakiya and chitu burst out into laughter. Antara nodded her head in disappointment. Why did she stop to listen to his words. Before her mode went worse, she moved inside with a quick pace. Raghu's pleasant eyes continued to follow her till she moved inside. A small smile was playing on his lips all the time.

Written by Ria and Prerna

Sorry for the delay , actually there was some confusion..

so postman uncle rgahu ki basti mein..ms kaul mskaul pukaar rahe the😆...aur raghu samjh nhi paa rha tha ki ye ms kaul ms kaul kya hai..ye mskaul mskaul...🤣

preru yaar wonderful work... u written ur part so beautifully and with ease

Originally posted by: ifians

preru yaar wonderful work... u written ur part so beautifully and with ease

and antara's pov and along with dr kaul was so wonderfully writen😳