(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir

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harshita gangwani

@harshita1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Hey firstly nice concept ek baar fir...

Aaahh loved it totally...though i m commenting for first time..

I loved it...Love d way Raghu stares at Antara..

Nd Lol love d convo of Rasika n Raghu..I wish yehi hota..Anyways😊 U guys r doing grt work keep going..Thanks for pm..Keep writng..<3

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

EPISODE 10

Antara was just going to step outside the house when she heard her mamaji and mamiji debating about some issue. "Toh ab hum kya karein. Ghar mein ab didi aur jiju bhi aa gaye hain. Hume unka bhi toh dhyaan rakhna hain. Unse hum idhar rehne ke liye paise thodi le sakte hain!"said her mamiji. "Nahi, hum unse paise nahi le sakte. Woh kya paying guest hain? Par yeh ghar kaise chalaye? Upar se tumhaare jiju ki toh saare savings ab stable hone mein lag rahi hain. Itne bade bomb blast ke baad unko kaaphi paison ki kami mehsoos hoti hogi. Unse toh nahi le sakte"said her mamaji. "Mamaji, aapne mujhe yeh baat pehle kyun nahi batayi?"asked Antara. "arre beta tu.. Nahi beta, hum kya batate? Ki hamaari family aur teri family dono crisis mein doob rahi hain? Yeh ghar chalaana mushkil hota jaa raha hain beta. Par tu chinta mat kar hum sab sambhaal lenge"said her mamaji. "Mamaji, main ab badi ho gayi hoon. I know ki papa apne saare savings ek naya clinic banane mein daal rahe hain. Aakhir unko bhi apna job continue karna padega. But that doesn't mean ki main kuch contribute nahi kar sakti . Im gonna look for a part time job"said Antara. "Beta, please don't make us feel ashamed. Mat kar aisa !"said Mamiji. "Isme sharam mehsoos karne waali ko baat nahi hain. Hum chaaron aapke ghar mein reh rahe hain, aapke expenses obviously bad gaye hain. Upar se Ishaan ko bhi school mein bharti karvaana hain"said Antara. "Par phir bhi beta..."said Mamaji. "Mamaji, please . Karne di jiye mujhe yeh job"said Antara. "Theek hain Antara, jaise teri marzi. But please don't exhaust yourself along with your studies."said Mamaji. "Jee Mamaji, waise bhi abhi mere summer vacations shuru ho gaye hain. That means college se chuti!"said Antara smilingly. "Jhalli hain tu"said mamiji hugging Antara..

In the garage :
Raghu was using his mastermind brain in fiddling with a bike. Pakiya and Machmach were just staring at Raghu looking at him in wonder."Hamare bhai ne jyaada padhai nahi ki hain par uska jo dimaag hain na, kisi padhe likhe waale se bhi bahut yaada hoshyaar hain"said Machmach to Pakiya. Just then Raghu saw Antara going somewhere. "Kaha jaa rahi hain yeh ladki?"he whispered. "Oh woh job dhoondne ke liye gayi hogi. Maine aaj usse apne mamiji aur mamaji se iss baare mein behas karte hue suna tha. Aapne kaha tha na ki main uske ghar ke window ke saamne aapka jasoos bankar khada rahu. Isliye, maine yeh suna"said Pakiya. "Kya ? Hey Bappa !! Aapko meri kasam, sambhal lena isse."said Raghu.

Raghu immediately started following her to which Antara turned back. "Yeh kya kar rahe ho tum?"asked Antara. "Road pe chal raha hoon"said Raghu smirking. "Mera peecha kyun kar rahe ho?"asked Antara. "Dekh, apun ko tujhse zyaada baat karna nahi hain , par ek baat samajh le , tu job mujhse pooche bina nahi karegi. Agar tujhe job karna hain , toh main tujhe ek acchi jagah job dilwa doonga"said Raghu. "Kamal hain? Kya tumne mere aage peeche spy's laga rakhe hain? Godd !! This is freaky ! Aur tumhaari problem kya hain? Jab se main aayi hoon, tabse tum mujh pe aise haq jatate ho jaise tum mere pati ho"said Antara in a single breath. "Bilkul Chup... Tujhpe haq hai mera"said Raghu sternly not knowing what he just said...

By Prerna , sorry for the mistakes, I wrote this update very late that I couldnt send it to the editing team... Sorry once again ..

Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Love u Prerna
Kya episode tha!
Wow!
Feel lyk dancing!!
Raghu ne Pakiya ko spy karne ko kaha 😆
Aur Antu asked Raghu if he was her HUBBY 🤣 🤣 🤣
N end ka dialogue ne toh maar dala
"Bilkul Chup... Tujhpe haq hai mera"
hayiii...

Prerna thanks yaar 4 such an amazing episode i would love 2 c niyaz enacting d last scene!

-Niki ❤️

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: niki28
Love u Prerna
Kya episode tha!
Wow!
Feel lyk dancing!!
Raghu ne Pakiya ko spy karne ko kaha 😆
Aur Antu asked Raghu if he was her HUBBY 🤣 🤣 🤣
N end ka dialogue ne toh maar dala
"Bilkul Chup... Tujhpe haq hai mera"
hayiii...

Prerna thanks yaar 4 such an amazing episode i would love 2 c niyaz enacting d last scene!

-Niki ❤️

hey thx niki,

glad u liked it

even i want to see niyaz enacting all the scenes from our show

Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

uff !!..raghu is so caring n possessive for antu..."job wahin karogi jahan main kahunga"😎...sooo fantastic update Preru ..

antu to bilkul yedi hai...directly hubby bol diya raghu ko...😆..zara sa bhi control nhi hua...😆

yr ye dono jab bhi ladai krte hain..mujhe to bade cute lagte hain...

tfpm dear...🤗

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
uff !!..raghu is so caring n possessive for antu..."job wahin karogi jahan main kahunga"😎...sooo fantastic update Preru ..
antu to bilkul yedi hai...directly hubby bol diya raghu ko...😆..zara sa bhi control nhi hua...😆
yr ye dono jab bhi ladai krte hain..mujhe to bade cute lagte hain...
tfpm dear...🤗

Thank you suchi,

Love you 🤗

Antu yedi toh hai hi, isme new kya hain 😆.Jaane anjaane mein dono yeda aur yedi kya kya bol dete hain !!!

Thank you !

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

What an update preru👏

raghu kuch jyada hi care dikhane laga hain antu pein...😳🤣

OMG he followed antu... job karogi to mujhse puchke.. wah re wahh😆

wonderful work..👏

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ifians
What an update preru👏
raghu kuch jyada hi care dikhane laga hain antu pein...😳🤣
OMG he followed antu... job karogi to mujhse puchke.. wah re wahh😆
wonderful work..👏

hey, thx 😊 raghu to hain hi yeda, antu ki kitni care larta hain plus sorry I didn't send the update for editing, I wrote it late..

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron
hey, thx 😊 raghu to hain hi yeda, antu ki kitni care larta hain plus sorry I didn't send the update for editing, I wrote it late..

it's okk yaar... it was really good... no need to editing... 😳

and when u will give reply to the new chap my ff tera sukkon..😳

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjaliAnand

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Hi Prerna, fantastic update dear👏
Raghu following Antara like in ddej serial,I can visualize it while reading the lines
Pakhiya,the spy😆
Rantara conversation was really nice
Antara"s family in crisis😔
I like the last part very much😊
Thanks 4 PM

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