**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 92

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oye Riyu this update was as usual fantastically spellbinding for me ...it is a real treat always for me to read the inner voice of Raghunath...awe...i loved it.

the whole situation u hv drawn in such a wonderful way i cd literally see the whole scene in front of me. The unavoidable excruciating pain not giving Antara a bit chance to understand this mystery guy ...why he is after her so much ??? So Raghu has now accepted that he loves to watch his misscall...haha

i loved this line so much ..."As if my eyes were drinking her visually and quenching its thirst"
you know u have created a huge thirst among ur readers ...thirst for seeing Raghu diminishing the pain of Antara's life in his hathke style ...thirst for seeing them together though i know that will not be loving togetherness at present ...and finally i think this kind of thirst is blazing only in my heart ...i wd love to see Raghu being a bit dominating on her (though by character Raghu is already a dominant char...but i want him to show a bit more) ...hows that possible i don know at this stage ...but in every update i get a bit of triumph on Raghu's side which i really cherish a lot ...😳😳😳

i think am not able to express myself properly ...but whatever it is Riyu u r fulfilling my wish thoda thoda in ur every update 😳 ...thanx somuch dear ...😉
and i am so glad that my scoldings has done the miracle...ziddi ladki maan gayee ...hum sab ko update mil gayeee...YEEEHHh😆

🤗keep on writing ...u r a fabulous writer. luv u 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: liana2304

Very nice .

Loved it .
Thank you 😊


THx😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: liana2304

Lovely . Missing already .

Thank you very much .
Fantastic . 😊 🤗


thanks 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
riu darling...happy to see u happy...and ur extremely happy happy happiest to see another dhamakedar update...
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Posted: 10 years ago

sure
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasika9

riu darling...happy to see u happy...and ur extremely happy happy happiest to see another dhamakedar update...


Thx di... sorry for making u people worried... thanks to psmpire the vampire...her vampiric act made me come back...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

most emotional part... from raghu side n rukhsana side...

raghu each words...pricked me...

felt like i want to cry

tat much real visual was thr in those writings...

hats off to u darls to make us feel the impact of reading...

i m just waiting for my raghu's SorrY ...

the scene which made me flat for ddej


aww thx darling...😳
i know that was your favourite scene naa..😉
here also raghu have to do lots of papad belna for sorry..🤣
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

Oye Riyu this update was as usual fantastically spellbinding for me ...it is a real treat always for me to read the inner voice of Raghunath...awe...i loved it.
He he... main kya kahoon ji... i know aap.. infact we all know ki how much pampu loves raghu.😆. Its actually difficult for me to draw raghu;s inner voice... we can't think as the same level of him.. only u among us can do it flawlessly... thats why u are raghu PHD specialist!!👏
the whole situation u hv drawn in such a wonderful way i cd literally see the whole scene in front of me. The unavoidable excruciating pain not giving Antara a bit chance to understand this mystery guy ...why he is after her so much ??? So Raghu has now accepted that he loves to watch his misscall...haha
The loss is huge in antara's life.. i already told u that surviving this lost won't be easier for her... she is now surrounded by the peach darkness of night, she won;t be able to see the lights surrounding her till the black cloud of sadness passes from her life and the dawn reached..

and well for raghu.. yes he admits somehow in his mind that he loves when she was around him. for him the feeling is going deeper day by day.. at first it was just some mesmerizing feeling and now it is changing into fatal attraction and it is now going towards the way of passion aka junnon... and as i belive in the proces of falling love gradually... 'love at first sight' thing doesn't really looks believable for me.. so i showed the events like that

i loved this line so much ..."As if my eyes were drinking her visually and quenching its thirst"
you know u have created a huge thirst among ur readers ...thirst for seeing Raghu diminishing the pain of Antara's life in his hathke style ...thirst for seeing them together though i know that will not be loving togetherness at present ...and finally i think this kind of thirst is blazing only in my heart ...i wd love to see Raghu being a bit dominating on her (though by character Raghu is already a dominant char...but i want him to show a bit more) ...hows that possible i don know at this stage ...but in every update i get a bit of triumph on Raghu's side which i really cherish a lot ...😳😳😳
i think am not able to express myself properly ...but whatever it is Riyu u r fulfilling my wish thoda thoda in ur every update 😳 ...thanx somuch dear ...😉

I know re pampu what u are indicating for... not just you but me too like raghu seieng that dominating avatar..😆.. though i can't describe that state of him like u do always.. even i thought to put some scenes here but refrained for now as i think a bit deeper... yep as u mentioned that raghu is a dominant character... but would it be good if he again shows the same dominating attitude to antara at that state just when he came to know about the huge loss of her life... and mostly he could connect his loss with her... now both are in adversity and craving for love... although raghu is not totally broken or disappointed, and wouldn't act like some defeated person... nope.. its not his character who get disappointed so soon... he is the one who will always be firm and hopeful in any situation, he is not the one who will be broken down by situation... But being so harsh with someone with whom we could connect through pain.. becomes a bit odd to me...its true that he is dominant.. but also he is not someone who is always driven by angry instinct or trying to dominate every people around him when he knew that it may cause worse... rather than he is pretty intelligent and acts exactly as the situation required...here he also did so.. he controlled his angry side and let antara burst out her inner pain which was really needed for her...
so i refrained to show that side of raghu here.. that's what i thought, i didn't know my line of thoughts were right or wrong!... i really need ur opinion in this matter... if possible reply me about my view... pretty please...😳.. i want to know what u think about my above thoughts...

and sach kahoon too... i am storing them for the future... i already told that the story will have some dangerous turns in future... for those moments i am saving ur fav angry raghu from now on.. 😆.. kyun ki abhi sab reveal kar diya too future mein kya likhega yaar?!😆... so sorry to disappoint u now a bit... bare it for future...😆


and i am so glad that my scoldings has done the miracle...ziddi ladki maan gayee ...hum sab ko update mil gayeee...YEEEHHh😆
Oye tu mere koo dant pila rahi thi?? really?!!😲... mere koo too laga tu mere koo bahut pyar see samjha rahi hain.. tu bhi naa yaar... itni sweet li scold karte huye maine paheli baar kisis koo dekha..😆
i told u already that whatever happens i will cont this story only for u... till u wanted to read this story u will get update of this story... nd i mena that.😊

🤗keep on writing ...u r a fabulous writer. luv u 😃


Love u too..❤️
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oye Riuuu...🤗...u updated......Thank Goodness for it...😳...n Pampy too...😃...
b4 u loose hope on me......i'll tell only this...that whenever i want to login...a lot of hurdles come n i cant do it...i wud b just waiting wen i wud b able to...bas itna hi...aur nahi sunaoungi apni ghissi-piti kahaani...🤢...mahaul ko bigadna jo nahi hai...

hawww...yeh humari Forum ki RaNtara specialised seasoned writers ki story padthi hi...hayee itna sukoon milta hai na...just a goofy smile spreads across my face...will b in total bliss...

Chapter ka review detail mein doongi...abhi k liye nahi balki hamesha yaadd rakhna...just love the writings...dont ever doubt it...

n dont let the inability of not posting...overpower ur capability of writing...its more than super hit one...Beyond words...

gtg...samne k job deadlines meet karte-karte...kahin baar lagta hai ki moon khudh dead na ho jaon...

lekin poori tarah "OFF" (Raghu style..😉) ...hone se pehle...har baar comment karne zarrorr aongi...basss u dont loose hope n pateince...😊...luv ya all...❤️...😳..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for updating ria 😃
It was beautiful! 😳
Raghu's dialogues...I have no words...it was fabulous! 👏
Like I said before, no one can write Raghu's dialogues as you do ⭐️
Superb update,it was written beautifully. 👏
The conversation between rantara,I just loved it. 😳
"Pay back" I loved it when Raghu said that 😆
Very nice,can't wait to read more. Thanks for entertaining us with your stories.
Keep writing,hugs 😉

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