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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.



Even I have a problem with that hinu...
I am finding very difficult to get adjusted with this new format...

sab kuch garba kardia unhone
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres
Hello riu jii..hum aa gaye phirsey apna bakwas sa reply leke..read kartey kartey so mat jaana jii..๐Ÿ˜†
To shuru kartey hai..
Itni lambi umra ki dua mat maango huamere liye,

Kahin aisa na ho ki tum bhi chod do aur maut bhi na aaye
Wow..kya shayri hai riu..i loved it..
Nw comingto the update to kya bolu yaar..wonderful,fantastic..boleto ek dam jakkasss update..totally loved it..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Us kaka ki to..๐Ÿ˜ก.karamchand jasoosh banney ka bada saukh hai..uski to raghu ek din achhe se band bajayega..
Thank god woh kajal ki dukaan niche nahi aayi warna pata ni kyaa hota..๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Kahin na kahi unknowingly antu raghu pe trust karti hai..t way c was holding his shirt..aww..
Yeh dekh ke raghu ko antu ke liye protector wali feeling aa rahi hai..woh antuko har danger se har evil eye se protect karna chahta hai..hayee mera raghu..๐Ÿ˜ณ <3<3
Is situation may bhi mr.raghu ki aankhe apni antu se hatney ka naam ni le rahi..oye hoye..
Raghu ne antu ko billi kahan woh bhi nochti you..hehehe..waise antu jungli billi ki tarah hi gusse wali hai..hehe ๐Ÿ˜†
Raghu ne 1st time kajal ki dukan se juth bola woh bhi antu ke liye..chalo choti si hi par achhi shuruaat hai bagaavat ki...๐Ÿ˜Š
Kaka ko abhi bhi doubt ho raha ta..achha hua rasika usey aake le gayi...chalo more or less kisi kaam ki to aayi..๐Ÿ˜†
Yahan ragu ji chance pe dance maar rahe hai..antu ke soft lips apne haat may feel kar rahe hai..hehehe...hayee..is ladke ka kuch nahi ho sakta..๐Ÿ˜‰
Thank god raghu ne antu ke muh se apna haath hats liya warns bechari faint ho jaati..๐Ÿ˜•
Antara's pov was superb yaar...
Antu observed t different tender look in raghu's eyes n c gt confused...antu ji woh aap ke liye uska pyaar hai..kuch to samjo yedi..
Antu kya soch rahi thi yeh raghu ko kaisa pata chal gaya..lagta hai dono may Bluetooth connection hai..i wish raghu ko baaki sab bhi pata chalta hota..
Bechara raghu antu ko khidki se kalti Marne ko bol raha hai..aur yeh woh yedi soch rahi hai ki raghu user double crossing kar raha hai.bahar lejaake kuch aisa waisa karega..is yedi ka na kuch ni ho sakta..๐Ÿ˜ก
Riu aap ka sense of humour kamaal ka hai yaar..aap jo raghu ke funny dialogues likhtey ho na..koi ni likh sakta.U r 2 good ๐Ÿ‘
That diary wala scene was Superb yaar..i loved It
Yeh story aur bhi interesting hoti jaa rahi haii
Abhi antu ek jale hue phool ki tarah hai ..bt raghu ka pyaar is jale hue phool may bhi jaan daalega...mera raghu hai hi aisa..
Sorry for late comment dear..thodi busy thi..
Thanks for updating...continue soon...
Okk..bye dear.. ๐Ÿค— lv yaa..mwuaah...
Edited by Ajju15s - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..
Riu..
I m sorry..I have no time for long cmnt..
really nice..
Love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 26

Ye manohar kaka kuch kaam nahi hain kya? Iss kajal ki dukhaan ko bhi utaadiya aur ab vo bhi niche aana chahti hain? Bade aaye chor ko doondnewaale. Khud toh apni cheek ko rok nahi sakte chor ko kya khaak pakdenge?

Antara Raghu se nafrat zaroor karti hain but uspe bharosa bhi hain. Raghu miya muskuraarahe hain Antara ko darte huwe dekhkar. Antu why fear when Raghu is near?

That was romantic & also funny when Raghu was scolding Antara not to open her mouth n move from tht place. Antu kab Raghu ki baat maanegi? Vo toh apne mann ki karegi.

Ye cheek ki dukaan toh Raghu ko shaq ki nazar se dekhne laga? Teri toh!!!! Raghu ne kya mast poocha kaka se ki kyu chilla rahe ho? Raghu feeling bad for lying to DM but at tht time he was only thinking abt Antara. Raghu ko khud samaj main nahi aaraha ki vo kyu aisa karraha hain?

Billi? Ha ha ha. Raghu Antara ko billi kehdiya tumne? Aur ye More or less Rasika chachi humesha beech main bolti hain? Gussewaali aur nochti bhi hain. Ya right humne bhi dekha hain uss billi ko.

DM toh Raghu pe bharosa karti hain uss manohar kaka ko more or less kuch nahi hain Raghu ke saamne. Oye kaka ab bahut hogaya investigation ab jaavo aur cheekna shuru kardo apne kamre main jaakar.

Raghu miya phir Antara land main khogaye on feeling Antara's lips under his palm. Arrey baapre kitna zor se pakad liya yaar Antu ko vo toh saans keliye bhi tarasne lagi

Antara was confused ki Raghu jo DM ka sabse bada wafadaar hain usne joot bhola usse bachaane keliye. She ws nt ready to accept the fact tht Raghu is not a bad person. Circumstances have made him rough but he is tender in his heart.

Raghu phirse mazaak karne laga? Billi kaha toh buraa mane lagi Antu. Kyu na mane? Ek khoobsurat ladki ko billi banadiya tumne?

Raghu hamesha Antara ki soch ko padleta hain. Raghu was trying hard to save Antara from everyone's evil eyes but Antu ko tho sirf apne badle ki chinta hain.

Raghu ab Antara ke hoton pe se apna haath nikaalbhi do. Kab tak bacchi ko sataavoge? Kitchen ki kidki se baahar? Seriously Raghu tu na ek book liksakta hain. Darwaaze ke bagair ghar se baahar jaane ke 100 tareeqe. Ha ha ha

Raghu tu na English math bol. Warna hum sab English bhool jaayenge.Antara na chahte huwe bhi Raghu se apne dil ki baat keh hi deti hain. Isse dil ka rishta kehte hain. Humaare dil ke kareeb jo hote hain usse hi toh hum apne dil ke saare baatein kehte hain.

Aankhon ki tanki toh leek hota rahega hi na Raghu. Jis ladki ne apna sab kuch khodiya ho uske zindagi main rone ke siwaahi kuch rehta hi nahi.

Raghu was confused at her hatred words. He was shocked beyond expectation.

Uff dediya comment. Ab kush haina tu?

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Posted: 10 years ago
OHkk Ria ji...main aa gayi...๐Ÿค—...comments dene..๐Ÿ˜Ž...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
Sorry toh pehle hi "deposit" kar liya tha...๐Ÿ˜†...k late ho jaongi...๐Ÿ˜Š...

Oh ji... Congrats 25 th Chapter paar karne k liye...๐Ÿฅณ......

Ok nw straight to d chapter...

Madamji...Kya updates hain aapke *bowin down* as usual...๐Ÿ‘...Heratangez n ab toh thoda sa zyada Khaufnak bhi ho raha hai...aap DM k DARK character ko aur DARKNESS k saath pesh jo kar rahi ho...๐Ÿค”...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...really superb yaar...

Antu-Rhea's convo...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...Main toh heraan reh gayi...aaapke explaination se......k kaise chalaki se saare saboot mita diye...Raghu k Kashmir mein hone k......aur saath hi unn innocent boatmen k bhi hatya kar di...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...jinhone Raghu ko ferry kia tha...๐Ÿ˜ฒ.........

Gosh...mujhe toh goosebumps aaane lage...๐Ÿค“...aur DM ka Khatarnak side dekke thoda darr bhi lag raha hai...*shiverrr*...coz ur giving a close view on it...BRAVO girl..๐Ÿ‘...Brilliantly portrayed...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

Ab batao...aise mein toh yahi lagega k Raghu is also so-sooo involved in all dis......agar Antu k pov se dekhe toh...kaise Raghu k innocence pe believe kare...IMPOSSIBLE yaar....Dayans karastaani..๐Ÿ˜ก..all coz of her KAALE KArtooth...๐Ÿคข... KAALI KAAJAL KI aur kabhi-kabhi kapdon k bhi DUKAAN...๐Ÿ˜ก...arey woh total kaali hai re...Dialogue yaad aa gaya.."Koyla bhi uske saamne gora dikhe ga..."...๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ...

And also dat angle... were u mentioned dat... Rhea wasnt in d Basti...rather she was in d train...travelling back to Mumbai...else she wud testify against Raghu..of him not being in d basti...๐Ÿ‘...ONCE again a BRILLIANT point portrayed...๐Ÿ‘...AAP K LIYE HAR TAREEF KAM PAD RAHI HAI....YEDI BEHNA...๐Ÿ˜ณ...its just so par excellence...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

n yeah...i also 4got to mention...
Ruksana aur Arshad miya ko Bahi-behen bana liya...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ‘...Aisa khayal toh shayad hi kisi ko aaya ho...sivaye aapke...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

Mainne toh pehle hi warning de diya k reviews mein chapters k khicdi milegi...๐Ÿ˜ณ......๐Ÿ˜†...

Ok gtg nw...๐Ÿ˜Š...jaise k maine kaha tha...Reviews aapko kishtho mein milege...Sorry again 4 d inconvenience m causing...๐Ÿ˜”...

tc...n Keep writing n surprising us ๐Ÿ˜ณ...with ur twists n turns... which r accrding to d story-concept n justify d plot...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...๐Ÿ‘......๐Ÿ˜Š...


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Posted: 10 years ago
dammm so exciting...
spcly the kaaka was nearing rantara...hrt beat was fasting up...

right timing

first time raghu lied to DM... :o

finally antu on her house...

the lines she said to raghu...befr death she will return ths favor... :o
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part two
Subhanallah
Mashallah

Very emotional and well written chapter
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
M back Ria ji...๐Ÿค—...
OK m going to give a take on mostly our hero - Raghu......๐Ÿ˜ณ...โค๏ธ...

HHaaye......Kya transformation hai... ๐Ÿ˜ณ...Raghu d Gunda se direct Raghu d Romeo k taraf...๐Ÿ˜ƒ......๐Ÿ˜Ž...ok... not fully though but on the threshold...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜‰...n cant deny on dat...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜†...

Seriously Yaar...Kya intensity hai Bande ki......๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜Š...kya se kya ho raha hai yeh...๐Ÿ˜‰......๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ......too good yaara...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...just terrific...๐Ÿ‘......

Antu chupte-chupate, Naik Sadan mein gus rahi hai...aur saavdhaani barakh rahi hai...k Dayan aur uski Haveli ki Rakhwaali karne waala...sabse wafadaar aur tez banda...soya ya nahi...usse kuch harkat mehsoos huwi ya nahi...๐Ÿ˜ณ...
...aur is bande ka dil uchal -uchal k dance maar raha hai.........k itni khoobsurat chorni...๐Ÿ˜‰...use check-out kar rahi hai...๐Ÿคช...๐Ÿ˜‰...sach mein Raghu bhai toh gaye kaam se...ab kuuuccchhh bhi nahi ho sakta iska......๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜›...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜†...

Aur kya bachaya Antu ko...๐Ÿ‘...aur saath mein daraya bhi......par koi nahi Bande ka apna style hai...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜‰...Waise Antu bhi toh kuch kam nahi hai...Takkar k hai dono...ekdum barabar---equal-equal...aur jaane kaha jaake phooteinge.........waise bhi sparks toh utthe hi rehthe hai inke takrane se...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ..๐Ÿ˜†...

Sach mein yaar... jab pichli baar bhi Antu ka peecha kia tha...toh ek pal k liye main bhi darr gayi thi...k Shetty ya phir uske log toh nahi...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...
Lekin jab Parth aur uski colleague ne suggest kia..(...Sorry uska naam bhool gayi...๐Ÿ˜›...*holding ears*...)... k woh station k raaste se jaaye...n Antu felt d unknown followers gaze getting stern...๐Ÿ˜ณ...tab jaake nakki hua...k Yeh Apna on d way... honewala...Raghu d Romeo hi hai...๐Ÿ˜†......๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜ณ...

aur last mein kya daraya yaar aapne......ekdum GOOGLY pheki aapne toh...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...
Mujhe khudd bhi laga ki woh phool - dried tulip hai...par Burnt Flower niklega......yeh toh socha hi nahi......totally stunned...Kya jhatka dia aapne Yedi Behna...๐Ÿ‘...full Top-to-Bottom i mean Bot-to-Toppum...๐Ÿ˜‰...(...Raghu issStyle...๐Ÿ˜Š..๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜ณ.....)...n Antu k last scene k dialogue se bhi...๐Ÿ˜Š...

Keep it up...๐Ÿ‘...Continue writing...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..n keep giving long-long updates ๐Ÿ˜ƒ n long-long replies too...๐Ÿ˜ณ..tc...n keep smiling n b Happy always...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿค—...โค๏ธ...


Edited by RaNtara4vr - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was amazingly fascinating ...loved it... waiting for the next part ...whn r u going to update dear ??? and dear am truely sorry for showing my face so late ... but i hope everything is fitting into just the right places ...i wll gv u a better review later ...don mind plzzz๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey ...!!!! where r you Ria ...missing u lik hell๐Ÿ˜ญ ...r u on holiday ????? whats up ???? u hv not updated so looong ...bhoot bheju kya ??? how r u dear ???๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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