**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 51

Res 😉
Omg im so lazy yar im so sorry yar couldn't review it bczof my assignments m very busy these days. .

Btw i really liked it very much
Antu Raghu sath sath jeep mein too cute yar 😳 😳
And their hugg it was Awww moment 😃 😳
Very nice and again sorry
Love you 🤗

Loved it!
Loved ajji's convo..she's calling Antara radha raani..how sweet!
Antara grasping Raghu's arm and their proximity was spine chilling! 😳 😳
Ria ji once again a fabulous update.
Loved it from the bottom of my heart dude!
Continue soon darling. 😉

Very nice .

"Sidhe sidhe nahin lee sakti thi... itna akar kyun rahi thi...

Arrey, Yeh apni antu hai...Koi kaam sidha nahi kar sakti...

arey raghubhai aap bhool gaye... aaj ajji koo hospital lee jana tha unke woo ayurvedic massage center mein... har mahine too lee jate hain aap.." buntiya remembered. Shit!! I forgot.

I will only say that" antara effect on chintu"

Yeh yeda toh gaya...

"Eee.. nahin ayegi matlab... har roj awaz anni chahiye... samjhe tum dono... agar awaz nahin ayi too main tum dono kee kamre mein ja kar awaz kar ke aungi..." ajji said almost scolding them. they looked towards ajji with bewildered eyes for a moment and then bursts into laughter. "Grumpy you are too good!!.." rhea said pinching ajji's chick...

Awwe, I miss this lively nature of Aaji...

u have penned the character as it is...I loved the originality of the writing.

U are truly a stunning writer Riyu...

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I twitched my head with a frown and found antara trembling badly hugging my left arm tightly with her two hands. her forehead was kept on my shoulder and her open hairs were ruffled around her face. Peeping through those hair locks, I could see her tightly squeezed eyelids and her heavy breaths were brushing on my arm. A sudden chill ran down my fibers. On my whole life I never found myself in such a situation. I never expected that the girl who always showed her disgust towards mine so clearly would seek her security from me. Being in such a close proximity with her while there was not at all a slight distance between us, the feeling was too strange for me, still it felt amazing. She was still unaware of our positions. She squeezed my arms with her cold hands more tightly and I felt my arms brushing slightly on her chest. Unknowingly a deep breath escaped my chest as I could feel her pounding heart on my arms. I never noticed that she was so tender. That tenderness reminded me about flower. A flower of unknown valley where human couldn't reach! "Eee... Antara!!.." I called her softly. Her feature squirmed a bit but she didn't open her eyes. "Akhein khol... dar mat... sab thik hain..." I said in low assuring voice.

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Deadly part...Hayee, it's so awesome.

Mast...Ekdum zordaar tha.

The selection of words kept in mind while writing this is wonderful.

Kabhi hume bhi aisa likhna sikha do pushpa...

Mindblowing update.

Ab aage kya hoga...update fast

loved it honey, keep writing and rocking...

u always amaze me by ur writing skills. With every update my hopes are getting higher along u too are always proving me by giving me updates above than my hopes...

Keep it up.

I can't tell you how gracefully u write riyuuu.

Overall, again a superb chappy by u.

Love u for this update

muahhh

lovely update ria...

wow..

uff emotions in this update always give me goosebumps yaar where do u get such imagination from its amazing..

phewww!!!!! im really sry fr dis damn delay..
plzzz i cldnt really earlier...
lovely chapter y u calling it crap??? ...
so fibally cupid aji is here 😉..
here she cuns ...hopefully...she vl
help our rantara 😊...
last part ws d best..antu holding on to
raghu 😳...one day she vl realise d real
worth of him... raghu lost in antara..
kya kare bechara ...cnt help na 😃 😛...
so cute...always antaras behaviour makes
him think what wrong has he done to her 😭..
grt one..lovely thanks fr updation dear