**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
sry ria again replying late 😭
what a dhamakedar meeting
ruhi and antu bonding awesome

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Sorry for being late to comment

Antu- Raghu pov coming out clear...confusion too getting also lessen..

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Chapter Nine

"sukhe huye asoon o ko roj pi rahi hoon...

Dil mein chpayein gham aaj bhi has rahi hoon.."

Antara's pov

Pushing the door hard without even caring the fact that the sound could make mama- mumy awake, I closed the door and rested my back on the wooden frame. My whole feature was shaking, burning in despair, in anger. I didn't know from where did I get the power to hide my anger, frustration, turmoil and hatred while I was standing in front of him!! Yes, that person who shook my world snatched away all happiness from my life. The mercenary of Daya Naik, who brought the gift of death to my family, Raghunath Naik!! My palm balled into feast thinking about the moment just a sec ago. I couldn't describe how much painful it was, standing in front of the man who had killed your family making an ignorant face. But I couldn't do anything at that moment! I couldn't let rise a single bit of doubt in those peoples mind that, I had come to expose them. I had to hide my tears, my anger, my frustration from them. If I had to trap those cold blooded murderers in their own trap, then I had to be calm and took very step with caution. When I would snatch away their mask from them and see them all behind the bars that will be my ultimate revenge. Till then I couldn't show a single glint of the fire roaring inside me and making me burn. Tears were about to flow down my chicks, but I stopped them. I Couldn't flow down my sadness with my tear. I had to make my despair my strength. I bite my lips hard and threw away the duptta which had touched him. The duptta fell on the floor like useless piece of cloth. I rushed inside the washroom and stood near the wash basin. Opening the tap I splashed water on my hand. The hand of mine which he touched! I wiped them, wash them till I got over the last ounce of his touche's feeling disappeared from my fibers, from my mind. I looked at the mirror to my hardened face. I wouldn't let them go so easily. The matki was just an alarm tone to them, I would not stop till I destroy daya naik's whole dark empire and I was ready to give away my each and everything, my life for that!

Raghu's pov,

The piece of dupatta was still joined to my leather belt while I moved inside Naik Sadan. I was smiling like a fool without any reason. "abey s**a raghunath naik!! Daant dikhana bandh kar.. koi tujhe iss halat mein dekh liya naa too bomb foot jayega!!" I said to myself and ruffled my hairs. I was feeling so excited and happy. I moved upstairs to my balcony and soon rested my body on the cot. Slowly I let out the cloth piece from my leather belt. Holding that in my hand I continued to stare dumbly towards it for a long time. I didn't know why but that cloth piece seemed so important to me. The cloth was slowly waving in the window. I took the cloth piece near my face and smelled them all of sudden. Ahhh!! It was still containing her exotic smell. So pure and natural! Not a smell of artificial perfume. I kept the cloth piece on my face and didn't remember actually when I dozed off smelling her sweet smell.

Antara's POV...

"Good morning sarru darling!!" I said cheerfully as I moved down. Mummy ji was I kitchen preparing for our breakfast. "good morning!! Bari nachari too uth gayi, choti nachari k. ahan hain?!" she asked. "still with rahul in her dream world!!" I said. "RAHUL?!!!! Who is rahul?" mummy almost jumped in fear. "relax relax mummy!! Don't worry... this rahul is none other than but Kuch Kuch Hota Hain film's rahul aka shahrukh khan!" I said with a smile. "god!!" mummy stroke her head, "you and your sharukh khan! I can't get you know,... what's so special about him that both of you are gaga over him. seriously, I am fed up. Pata nahin kya chhez hain yee sahrukh!!" mummy said. "mummy!!... he is not a cheez... he is shah!.. the one and only shahrukh khan!!... god!! What a charisma, what a charm... kya dialogue bolta hain... kya romance karta hain!!..." I started my fangirling. Seriously, when it came to shah... me and rhea both were head over heals for him, never get tired of drooling on his romantic scenes. Ufff shahrukh shahrukh shahrukh!!! We both were really mad for him... the kind of mad you could ever imagine!! "ohh hello madam, get out from your shahrukh dream world and get ready for office! It's your first day..." mummy said. "mummy.. it's only 7 am. And my office will start from 11 am... Also the office is just 10 mins away from hear.. even if I start at 10:30 I will reach at time... so please don't disturb and let me drool on my shah!!" I said. "Oh god!! Pata nahin... main inn larkion ka kya karoon... tv mein aa ke koi thora sa romance kya kar leta hain... sab ke sab flat ho jatein hain... kya hain yee!!" mummy said with a bit miffed voice. "sarru darling!!!..." my very own mama ji came out from his room in his usual dramatic way, "romance pein sari duniya kayam hain... iss liye aaj kaal tv screen bolo yaa real life bolo har jagah bas romance hi romance chaya huya hain!!" he said. "Lo aa gay eek aur romance ke dewanee... he maa kali bachaoi mujhe, in pagalon se bachao!!" mummy said in frustration. "Sorry sarru darling... hum logon se tumhe koi nahin bacha sakta! Kyun antara!!" Mama ji said. " yup mammu!!... you are great!!.." I throw a flying kiss towards mammu and he hold it... "my gratitude seniorita!!... chalo sarru darling.. hum bhi taazi tazi subha ke chayein ke sath thora romance kar le" mammu said towards mummy. "Samajh gayi main... aap ka dimag fir se kharap ho gaya hain... gaye sab ke sab iss ghar mein kaam se.." mummy said. "sab ke barein mein to pata nahin darling par jab se hum ne aap ko dekha hain tab sse hum too kaam se gaye..." mamma said leaning towards mummy making her flush. I was silently enjoying the scene at side. I heard a yawn at side. "wow di!!... you didn't wake me up and enjoying the picture all aoone." I heard rhea's sleepy voice from side. "hey when did you wake up?" I asked. "Just a moment ago..." rhea said yawning. At that moment a huge knock on the door startled all of us. Our head shifted towards doo in unison. "now who is here in this early morning?!" mummy wondered. "abey ohh uncle jii darwaja khollo..." someone's harsh voice came from outside. "margaye... pakiya!!!" mama ji almost jumped and hid himself on mummy's back. "arey kya kar rahe hoo aap?!" mummy ji said in irritation. "Ye pakiya idhar kya kar raha hain?! zaroor hafta mangne ayya hoga... mar gaye... sarru.. tum ja ke darwaja kholo naa... aur kahena ki mera pet kharap hain aurt main latreen mein hoon.." mama ji said quickly and was about to rush towards bathroom but mummy ji stopped her, "kyun ji?! Abhi too bare herogiri dikha rahe thee... pakiya ka awaz sun ke hi sari hawa nikal gayi?!" she asked. "arey sarru darling samjha karo...main romantic hero hoon... action hero nahin..." mamu said shaking all over as the huge knock continued on door. "arey aap itne darte kyun hoo unse... kabhi too kuch bigarte nahin woo log aap ke.. bas kiraya lete hain aur chale jate hain.. fir bhi aap kabhi bathroom mein ghuse rahete hain ya too kabhi bimari ka bahana karke bistar pe late rahete hain... paheli baar mein hafta kyun nhin de dete aap?!" mummy asked. "arey darling.. main kya karoon agar mere kharoos boss payment kar ne mein itna late kare too.. udhar mere boss aur idhar yee log.. arey mahina khatam to hone do yaar... sarru darling tum samhalo inhe.. main latrine mein chupne jaa raha hoon.." mama ji said.

While mamma and mummy was arguing on who was going to open the door I turned towards rhea with clueless face. she understood my condition and opened her mouth. "That's pakiya di... daya nailk's one of the men... more prominently... you can say he is one from that janglu's companions. They came every month to get the rent... but you know naa... pata nahin kyun inke atein hii pappa ke hosh urr jate hain!" rhea informed me. On the other hand mamma and mummy were still continuing their argument. "dekhiya.. aap humesha aise nahin kar sakte.. aur latreen wala idea pichle mahine flop ho gaya tha jab raghu khud aa ke aap ko commode se utha kar le gaya tha... iss baar mujhe koi tamasha nahin chahiye..." mummy ji ordered. "Sarru darling... nahin yaar samjha karo.. ye log pure Mumbai mein famous hain haddi torn eke liye... aur mere body mein siwayein haddi ke too kuch hain hi nahin, naa biceps hain na triceps hain.. agar ye log haddi hi tor de too mera kya bachega mera?!!" mama ji made a poor face. "arey jaiyen aap... kuch nahin hoga... sidhe jaa ke sach bata dijiye naa... sidhi baat bata debe se woo log aap ko chor dengey... aap itne drama karte hain iss liye woo log bhi aisa karte hain..." mummy said. "hey mummy... chill... mammu don't worry you stay here.. I am opening the door..." I said. "oww thank you meri pyari bhanji.. you are a life saver." Mammu said. "kaun tu?!! Ekdum nahin... aap bhi kya hain?! Apni bhanji koo un gundoon se bhirne ke liye bhej rahe hoo... nahin antara tu ekdum nahin jayegi.. jana too inhe hi parega.." mummy said angrily holding mama's collar. "it's okk mummy I can manage... just believe in me..." I said and moved towards the door. "arey antara..." mummy said from behind. I opened the door. A man was standing outside. He was abit startled looking at me. "yes?!" I asked. "eee tuu antara hain naa?!!" that man asked. "haan..." I said with a confused tone. "Woo tere ko apne sath chalna parega.." he said. "par kahan?!" I was all surprised. Looking at the situation mammu, mummy and rhea came near the door. "pakiya kya huya?!" mummy asked. "arey aunty ji... woo antara koo mai ne naik sadan bulaya hain.. milna hain unhe iss larki se.." pakiya said. "kya?!!" mummy was a bit startled and mamam ji huffed. "thank god!!! Iska matlab tum hafta lene nahin ayein hoo?!" mammu asked with relief. "Arey kya uncle jii.. samajhte kya ho humein haan... aap agar sidhe tarike se pichle mahine bhai ko bata dete too humein yee sab humgama kar ke aap ko bathroom se uthaana nahin parta... abtoo bhai ne kahe diya hain ki aap ka bhara ekdum last mein lene kaa... woo aap ki office mein late payment karta hain naa..." pakiya said. "dekha maine kahan tha aap se.." mummy rolled her eyes to mama ji. "par uncle ji... iss larki ko aap logo ne kuch kahan kyun nahin?!! Samjhao ussey... satya naik ki matki for di isne... naik sadan ka hawa bahut garam hain... Mai ne bulaya hain issey... milne ke liye... pata nahin kya karengay..." pakiya said. "kya antara ko bulaya hain?!!" both mama and mummy said in unison. "haan aur nahin too kya?!! App ko kya laga ki iss larki ne jo kiya uske baad mai chup rahega?!" pakiya asked again. looking at pakiya's face with an odd eyes suddenly mama and mummy both burst into laughter giving pakiya a huge shock. Not only mama-mummy but rhea also started laughing. "eee uncle... ee aunty... pagla gaye ho kyaa?!! Hash kyun rahe ho?!!" he was hell confused. "antara ko bulaya hain naa mai ne... le jaon.. saukh se le jaon... ek baat bato pakiya... unhe kaun si dukh aa pari joo meri bhanji ko invitation de ke bulaya hain?!" mama ji asked laughing like hell. "eee uncle kya baat kar raha hain?!!" pakiya asked. "woo too tumhe khud samajh aa jayega pakiya... antara tuu jaa... dikha dee apna dhamaka... yaad rakhna tujhe humare kasyap aur kaul family ka naam roshan karna hain... jaa antara jaa.. tere mammu ka ashirwad tere sath hain..." mamma said in most dramatic way I ever saw. I was smiling gently. "aur meri bhi antara... maa kali aur bappa ka baam le aur jaa... wpoo kya kahete hain... haan... viajyi bhava!!..." mummy also back in mode. "mama ji... mummy jii... ashirwwad doo..." I bend down and took their blessings also in dramatic way where pakiya was standing with all shocked face. "di main bhi jaa rahi hoon... waiseey bhi main too aap ke sath har jagah free pee ati hoon naa?!!"rhea said from side. "jaa beta saukh se jaa... Antara mate ki leela ka anad le..." mummy ji said. "I looked towards pakiya and said, "chaliye...".. pakiya got out of trance and moved towards naik sadan followed by me and rhea. Pakiya was so much confused that why any one of us was not a little bit worried about me. That poor guy really didn't know that how much confident my parents and elders have on me, specially my momma- pappa and mamma- mummy who supported me all the way.

Raghu's pov...

Mai was seating over the couch on the visiting room surrounded by the servants. I was as usua; standing at her side. My heart was pounding in worry. When buntiya told me this morning that Mai had called antara I almost jumped out of my bed. Damn it... why didn't I consider the fact. Mai would never leave her easily after that matki for. That matki was on;y meant to be for satya all those years and suddenly she came and broke the tradition. GOD!!! What had she done? While I rushed at ground floor buttoning my shirt I found mai at the visiting room. "raghunath?!! Kahan jaa raha hain?!!" mai asked as she observed me hurrying towards the door. "kuch naii maii woo machmach se milne garage jaa raha tha.." I said scratching my head. "garage baad mein ja naa... abhi tu yahan mere pass aa.." mai ordered. "jee mai..." I slowly moved to her side. "woo larki yaad hain tujhe?!! jisne kaal matki fori thi?!" mai asked. a shiver ran down my spine. I just nodded slowly. "hmmm.. maine pata kiya uske baarein mein... antara kaul naam hain uska.. kaal hi basti mein ayi hain.. govind kashyaap ki bhaanji hain... Kashmir mein raheti thi... ab mumbai ayya hain naukri karne.." mai informed me about those things which I all ready assumed. Only the thing was not known to me that her full name was Antara Kaul. "maine, pakiya ko bheja hain ussey bulane ke liyee.. ati hi hogi..." mai said. Damn why didn't pakiya told me before going?! When he would get some brain, I thought in frustration. From that time I was waiting for her with anticipation and worry. I didn't know what mai was going to do with her! But one thing I was sure that after everything happened with satya, mai was not going to leave her so easily. I badly wanted to save that girl who was not at all known about mai's power. But that was the only thing where I couldn't do anything. I couldn't go against Daya Mai!! "Chintu..." I heard ajji's voice. I twitched at side and saw her standing near the corridor at some distance. I moved towards her. "kya ajji?!!" I asked. "kya chal raha hain idhar?!!" she asked. I explained in brief. "hey bappa.. yee daya bhi naa... kya zarurat thi uss bachi ko yahan bulane ki... bas ek matki hi to fori hain usne.." ajji said with frustrated voice. "arey ajji... woo fatichar itna chilla raha tha... mai koo bhi usi ne fuslaya hoga..." I said groaning. "tu ruk.. main baat karti hoon daya se..." ajji was about to move towards mai when suddenly the door of the naik sadan got opened. I saw pakiya near the door. "aiyee..." he said to someone. At first rhea moved inside and then I saw her. Wearing a light blue and white combination full sleeve salwar with light orange embroidery she came inside with her confident steps. She didn't seem nervous or freaked out a bit, rather than her curious eyes were gauzing each and every corner of the room. The sunshine came along with her gleaming eyes as if like removing away the darkness from every corner of the house. I stood steal there, captivated by her presence, her charm. Everything about her was so unique and no doubt mesmerizing. I loved the little confident smile was attached to her face. She looked so much different than other girls of her kind and that's what make me think about her again and again. she didn't looked at me. It really pinched me a bit. "eee nachari sun..." ajji called towards rhea. "hey grampy..." rhea rushed towards us leaving antara's side. I didn't know why rhea had given that odd name to ajji.. what was that... something... gram... forget it! "eee nachaari... tu idhar kaise?!" ajji asked. "arey grampy main too apni di ke sath ayi hoon.." rhea said. "teri di?!!" ajji was a bit confused. "haan woo meri di hain.. antara di.. meri buya ki beti." Rhea indicated towards antara. "hmmm antara!!..." ajji looked towards me and I moved my gaze here and there scratching my head. "ek baat bata nachari, govind aur saroj ne roka nahin ussey?! Ane de diya.." ajji was a bit confused. "nahin!!... mom dad kyun rokengey?!" she asked. "arey ohh nachari.. tujhe pata nahin kya daya ne ussey kyun bulaya hain?! kacha chaba jayega ussey.." ajji said. "ewww grampy... meri di ka taste itna bhi acha nahin ki koi unhe kacha kha jayega..." rgea said in teasing tone. I couldn't hold my frustration anymore. "eee nachri... Itna uchal kyun rahi hain?! Mai ko jaan ta nahin kya tu?! Tujhe pata nahin ki woo kya kar sakti hain?!" I was frustrated due to my worry. "Well tumahari dayan... I mean daya mai ko to hum achi tarah se jaan te hain aur paheechan te bhi hain... but unfortunately tumahari dayan... I mean daya mai meri di ko nahin jaanti.." she said looking at front. "ayeee... kya kahe rahi hain tu?!!" I was hell confused. "dekh te jao..." rhea just said with small smirk waving her ponytail.

Antara's POV...

I looked towards the woman seating on the couch at the middle of huge hall. Wearing a black saaree she herself looked like the darkness. Her hard face, dark eyes everything emerged devilish aura. Daya mai! The woman who was behind my all suffering, the almighty daya mai! I felt the fire inside me emerging with full speed. Composing my frustration and anger, I stood in front of her with a firm gaze. she gauzed from my top to bottom with her cold gaze and her eyes fixed on mine. For the whole min we stared on each other silently. I felt like she was trying to read me with her narrow eyes but she couldn't. her eye brows were creased in confusion. a small smirk appeared on my lips. Just try it bitch, try it!! you would never get to know what's going inside me instead I show you. After a huge moment at last she sighed and opened her mouth. "to tu hain ANTARA KAUL?" the sheer hardness could be notice by anyone while she took my name. I nodded silently. "tune hi kaal sahib ki matki fori thi naa?!!" she asked. I frowned a bit and utters, "maaf kijiye... par janmastami ki matki too bhagwan shree Krishna ke naam hoti hain... uspe kissi ek ka haq thori hi na hoti hain.." I said and heard silent gasps coming allover form the every corner of room. I sensed thaty each and every eyes present on the room looked to me with shock. Perhaps theey never saw anyone talking to their so called daya mai like that. I saw how daya naik's hand balled into feast on the handstand of couch also her jaw hardened. She closed her eyes and gave up a deep breath hiding the deep frustration which I sensed that. she opened her eyes and looked towards me, "itne saal bit gaye... janmastami ki matki sirf aur sirf sahib ke hahon se fori jati hain... mera beta sahib... basti ke kissi bhi zurrat nahin ki uss matki ko chune ki..." her voice dangerous and drenched with poison. I stood there calmly watching straightly in her fiery gaze. "tujhe yee sab pata nahin tha kya?!! Nahin kahan tere mamma mummy ne?!!" she asked. I stood there silently. "bola b chup kyun hain?! kya mujhe ab teri mamma mummy ko bulana parega?!" she asked again. I was thinking silently about my next step. Obviously I couldn't involve my mamma mummy in the matter. The thing would be more complicated for me. I had to do something which could maintain every way. Back in kasghmir cornel uncle used to say that, A battle could not only be won by powers, arms and techniques. To win a battle you need to use your brain and plan. You have to understand each and every trap of enemies and make them prison in their own trap. Sometimes, you must have show yourself as weak and feeble in front of your enmies so that they think of themselves as the ultimate power and comes out of their protective self. And strike on them when they are not cautious. At that moment your single strike is enough to defeat your enemy.' Daya Nail was looking to my face silently. Taking a full breath I git ready. there was a huge silent all over in the room. Suddenly I cried out with all my noise making all of them almost deaf. "AHHH!!!!... AHHH.. AHHANNN... AHHH!!!!..." I remembered all the old and black n white heroine and latest saas bahu serials heroine and screamed loudly so that my scream could reach the last corner of basti. All of the people present at the room was holding their ear ear. I covered my face to suppress my laugh and peeped to them through the holes of fingers. Daya naik's condition was worst. "eee,.,, eee larki kya kar rahi hain!!" the man who was standing at data mai's side wearing a round cap and glass asked me. His Charlie chaplin type whisker looked so funny... "UHHH UHOON... AHHHAAN..." I increased my crying rate and dramatically screamed, "NAHINNN... MAINE YE KYA KAR DIYA... NAHIN... NAHIN...!!!NAHINNN..." I screamed out of my breath. "eee larki arey baat kya hain ye too baata.." the same man asked me. I sat on the floor increasing my fake cry determined to make them deaf. "nahinnn... mujhse itni bari galti kaise ho gayi... maine staya naik ki matki kaise for di... nahin... bhagwan ji yee tumne mere sath kaise kiya... Bhagwan ji!!!..." I screamed. "manohar issey chup karao... mere kaan ke parde fat rahein hain... waisey bhi puri basti mein batein fail jayegi ki naik sadan mein koi aise ro raha hain... badnami ho jayegi humari..." daya naik said to the man. "arey oo larki... dekh dekh ro mat.. shanty se baat karte hain... dekh dar mat hum kuch nahin kahengey... pahele ti chup ho jaa..." Looking at that man called manohar's face I suppressed my huge burst of laugh coughing a bit. I shoved away my fake tears slowly. "ab bata baat kya hain..." Daya naik asked me.. "wooo.. wooo... wooo aunty ji... Wooo..." I stammered intentionally. "arey ab hakla mat aur bata..." daya naik was so frustrated. "woo aunty ji... baat yeeh hain ki... wooo.. main jab bhi maatki dekh ti hoon naa... too... wooo.. mujhse rahan nahin jata.. humari familly buisnes hain yee..." I said making a nosy voice. "kya family business?!! Woo bhi matki forne ka?!" manohar was shocked. "haan bilkul... app ko pata hain..." I jumped up from ground and started to say, "mere dada ji... woo brindavan mein das salon se matki for tea a rahe hain... fir mere chacha ji nasik mein... aur mere bare uncle too America mein matki forte hain..." I said. "kya AMERICA!!!" all of them said in unison. "haan kyunn nahin... aur woo bhi white house mein..." I said. "white hous?!!! Matlab president ka ghar?!!... wahan pe matki for kahan se.." the man who was standing at mai;s back asked scratching his head. "arey bhaiya.. aap ko pata nahin... matkifor kitna famous hain... jahan bhi Indians hote hain wahan too matki for zarror hota hain... kyun aunty?!!" I snapped my finger and asked towards daya naik who was looking to me all dazed. "matlab?!!" she was startled and trying find out the reason between my odd change. I smirked inwardly. Just wait and watch lady. I would make your whole naik clan confused. It was just a trailer. "aap ko pata nahin..." I gasped holding my mouth popping out my eyes, "aap ko pata nahin white house mein matki for hota hain... maine too suna tha aap ki jaan pahechan America tak hain.. America ke president aap ko jaan te hain... itni bari baat aap ko pata nahin..." I asked. "haan haan.. hota hain naa... sab oata hain mujhe..." daya naik let out a dumb smile. "haan dekha mai ko bhi pata hain... to boliye meri galti kya hain.. pura khandaan matkifor expert aur unka khoon mere rag rag mein daur rahiye,,, dekhiyee..." I said dramatically and showed my hand to them. "haan part mujhe khoon nahin dikhayo diya..." Another one said from side. "kyaaa?!!! Itni bari be izzati?!!" I said loudly. "manohar yee larki itni chilla kyun rahi hain?!!" daya naik closed her ears. "nahin dikhayi de raha hain... rukiye main hath kaat ke dikha deti hoon..." I was about to grab the knife from fruit tray when everyone stopped me. "arey nahin nahin beta humein dikha gaya... agey batao..." manohar said quickly. "haan... too bataiyen... itne sare champion matki for mere family mein hain... uni ka advice hain... antara... tujhe apni family ka naam roshan karna hain... iss liye jahan bhi matki dikhe for de... ek bhi bachni nahin chahiye... Warna mere atma ko kabhi shanty nahin milegi... Batayein... main apne marte huye dadaji ki atma ko kaise ashant rahene doon... bataoo zalim duniya waloo batao..." I asked with my highly dramatized peech. "ufff... mere kaan... acha acha... antara.. cchup ho jaoo... hum samajh gaye... maine tumhe maaf kar diya..." daya naik said quickly. I jumped from the ground in excitement with a huge grin. "aap ne maaf kar diya naa... ab main jaooon..." I said. "eee ruk..." I heard another dark scream and saw satya naik coming towards the hall. "sahib tu yahan kya kar raha hain?! doctor ne tujhe chal ne se mana kiya hain naa?" DM said worriedly. "nahin ayi.. jis larki ne mujhse mera hak chin liya uss sey bina mile main kaise rahe sakta hoon..." satya looked at me angrily. I smiled a little and suddenly rushed to him. "UNCLE!!!!!..." I screamed and caught his feet. "uncle!!! Uncle mujhe maaf kar do..." I again started my special fake scream startling satya. "arey arey yee kya kar rahi hoo... choro meera pair... choro..." satya said loudly. "nahin uncle ji... jab talk aap mujhe maaf nahin kar dete main aap ka pair nahin chorumgi.. I said and pinched badly on his leg. "OUCH!!!!" he winced in pain. "sahib!! Sahib kya huya tujhe?!ffir se tabiyat kharap ho raha hain!" DM said worriedly, "buntiya issey lekar kamre mein jaa.." she said. "nahin ayi... abhi nahin..." satya said madly. "eee larki mera pair chor... aur ye UNCLE JI KAUN HAIN?" he asked madly. I secretly made a face and looked up to him making a puppy face. "kyun respect kam ho gaya kya?!! Aur jyada respect dena parega... thik hain... DADA JI... DADAJIII... MUJHE MAAF KAR DO... MUJHE PATA NAHIN THA WOO AAP KI MATKI HAIN DADA JI,... MUJHE SACH MEIN PATA NAHIN THA.. ISS DUKHIYARI AURAT PEIN DAYA KARO... DADAJIII!!!!!!!..." I said loudly and continued to tickle in his leg. "DADAJI??!!! MAIN TUMHE DADA... HOWAA... HAHA!!!..." his voice chocked due to his laugh as I tickled harder on his feet. "sahib kya ho gaya tujhe sahib?!!" Dm was hell worried. "ayi tu chup kar ayi... haha ha ha..." he again burst out in laughter. "margaye... Ye sahib pagal ho gaya hain..." manohar said from side. "manohar kakka... Shut up... haha ha ha..." satua couldn't control himself abd I started again. "kya hain haan?!! Ekabla nari ki durdasha per has rahe hoo aap? Nari o pe atyachar... NAHIN!!!... DEKHIYE SAB YAHAN AIYEEE... SATYA NAIK EK ABALA NARI PE HAS RAHA HAIN DEKBIYE..." I screamed loudly. "eee larki chup kar... " dm said loudly. "sahib ko leke andar jaon sab aur doctor ko bulaon... iski dimagi halat thik nahin hain sayad!!" dm said. "ayi no way... I am feat abd fine... HAHA HA HA HA!!!..." he laughed like hell. I was watching DM and her concern for satya. So I got a weak point of DM. SATYA NAIK!!! hmmm!!!... two of the servants came and brought satya naik inside. satya looked back at me with fiery eyes. I suddenly smirked to him secretly and showed my tongue. Satya's eyes widened and two servants drag him inside.

Raghu's pov,

From the corner of the hall me, ajji was watching the scene with wide eyes. What was that girl doing. On the other hand rhea was laughing like hell holding her stomach. "eee nachchari itna has kyun rahi hain aur teri di, woo aisi kyun kar rahi hain?" I asked in utter surprise. Rhea hold her outburst for a while and said, "arey tumhe samajh nahi aa raha hain?!!! sab fake hain..." she said giggling. "KYA?!!!" my eyes moved towards antara. Till in that cry, I could see the naughty glint on her eyes. "God!! Tumhe samajh nahin atta kya?!! Tumne kisi normal insaan ko dekha hain aise behave karte huye jaisa di kar rahi hain!!!" rhea said. I looked back at antara. for the whole time me and ajji was shocked and watching her drama. Mine god!! What a girl!!! I almost stroke my head looking at her caricature. Even I was smiling holding my mouth looking at other side. specially when she called satya DADAJI. I just coughed to hude my laugh. "kya solid naam rakha hain uss gadhe kaa..." ajji said from side with a smile. after the whole drama when satya was gone. Antara stood up. "thik hain, ab tu jaa sakti hain... aur haan ainda se dhyabn rakhna aur... Thotra kam chillana..." mai said weirdly. "thik hain mai... app ke charan..." antara was about to bend down and mai jumped up from couch. "nahin iski koi zarurat nahin... tu jaa ab..." she said quickly. Antara moved back and I saw the hidden victorious smirk on her face. she really won the battle without any blood and foul!! I saw the hard determination in her eyes when she shived awy those fake tears from her eyes. strange!! I should be angry on her for fooling mai. But I was happy!! What's going on? Daya mai moved inside the house and all the visiting hall was empty. Antara looked here and there sheepishly and suddenly jumped with a huge grin. "yes!!!! yes yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!!..." her huge grin was so childish and innocent. I never saw her smiling like that. my heart fluttered like hell. I almost leaned my head on the pillar with a small smile adoring her face. she suddenly noticed us and let out an embarrassed smile. she moved near us and gave a hi5 to rhea. "So didu... I didn't know that you are also champion in melodrama like ur studies..." rhea teased, "mama ne kahan bomb for do.. lekin aap aise bomb forogi that's I don't know.." rhea said. "yeah I know I was a bit oTT... she said with a naughty smile. par kya karoon bata... agar main woo sab nahin karti too yee mama mummy ko bhi yahan le attain.. min unhe kaise involve hone deti in sab mein.." she said and her eyes moved towards ajji. Ajji was miling widely and moved near antara, "too kishan kanhaiya ke oair par hi gaye iss ghar me..." ajji said caressing her face lovingly. "kishan kanhaiya?!!" she looked confused, "hey rhea!! Meri sakal larkon jaise hain kya?!!" she asked making such a funny face that I looked away to hide my laugh. God I never wanted to laugh out loud in my whole life like that. But I was known as the rough and tough guy so stopped myself for the sake of my ego, while ajji amd manjari laughed out like hell. "arey bewakoof!!.. kishan bhagwan to sab ke dilon mein baste hain... jis ke dil mein khot naa ho naa.. wwoo wahin rahete hain..." ajji said. "di!!! Meet my one of the best friend... my dear grampy!!!" rhea said from side. "ohho!!! Too aapp hi hain rhea ki grampy!! Rhea aap ke barein mein bahut bata ti hain!!" antara said. "yee kya re nachahri... tune mera intro dene ka mauka bhi chin liya..." again they laughed in unison. I stood there silently like a dumb adoring her smiles which were increasing my each and every heart beat. Suddenly antara bit her tongue and looked at her watch. "gosh.. I forget about my office... come on rhea.. bye grampy..." Antara said and suddenly rushed towards the door my hand stretched out automatically towards her but I resisted myself. She didn't even look at me. My heart was really paining due to her ignorant. I looked on her back going far away from me and soon she vanished from the corner of door.

ps: guyzz i don't know actually what i have written...😆.. cracking ideas coming on my mind all along...

as usual ready for ur bomberding juta chappals🤣

@purple

yaar rhea and me are not same.. if i have to include myself in the story then why should i change my name... rhea is much more bold and crazzier than ria...🤣

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Res 😆
Unres 😉

Riyu riyu riyu mein kya bolo yar mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha but bolna to pareyga hi. .
Ok now let me start. .

Sab se pehle mujhe bohat bhura lag rakh hai Antara ki nafrat Raghu ko ley kar is ne mujhe pareshan kar diya hai, I can't see Antara to hate Raghu to that extent
Raghu to full lattu hogaya hai hamari yedi pe 😳 😳
Sorry to say riyu but mujhe SRK bilkul bhi pasand nahi han uski kuch movies achi hai but uske ilawa I dont like him at all. . 🥱
Yar mama ko kya hogaya hai itne flirty type woh kabse hogaye hai. .
OMG mujhe nahi pata tha mama ji pakiya se itna darty hai 🤣
Oh God latreen yeh word sunnty hi mein has pari 😆 😆
Mama ji aise ideas kaha se ley aaty hai or yeh kya Raghu ne unhe latreen se I mean commode se utha kar che che che
Yeh Raghu bhi nah kya kya kar deyta hai yeda 😆 😆
Antara ka bulawa aaya NS se hehe mar gaye sab ke sab
Oh God yeh antu darling ne kya kar diya ro ro kar sab key kaan phar diye or to or itne bara natsk oh god sach mein nautanki queen hai 😆

Satya ko uncle or phir dada ROFL
Riyu riyu bus kar yar hasa hasa key pait mein dard kara diya, Antara ne Satya ko tickling hehehe cant control my laughter yara 🤣
You rocked it yar
But Antu ignores our Raghu koi bat nahi
Continuee soon yar
And aise funny funny scenes laty rehna please
I loved it so much
🤗
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ROFL 🤣
Amazing episode Ria
Love ur writing
Your 1 of d bestest writers in dis forum
Nevr evn imagined Mamaji 2 b so funny n romantic bt teri soch toh hum sab se aage hai...
Love Mama ji's character n Mami ji's character is also nice
Rhea has bcum my favourite, she's so crazy n funny!
This chapter started wid antara's pain which beautifully transformed into a funny n comical update
D best part was antara calling satya dada ji... That was simply hilarious 🤣
The whole update was mind blowing
Love you yaar
Keep writing sch fab updates
Thanx 4 d pm 😊
N a bigg sorry 4 commenting so damn late
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no words to describe this update..wahhh
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Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Res 😆
Unres 😉

Riyu riyu riyu mein kya bolo yar mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha but bolna to pareyga hi. .
Ok now let me start. .
okkk leet me concentrate🤓
Sab se pehle mujhe bohat bhura lag rakh hai Antara ki nafrat Raghu ko ley kar is ne
mujhe pareshan kar diya hai, I can't see Antara to hate Raghu to that extent

oye don't worry niki ji... nafrat jitna gaheri ho... pyat bhi ussey jyada gahera hota hain.. kahete hain naa kisi se itna nafrat naa karo ki ki pyar ho jayein..😉😆
Raghu to full lattu hogaya hai hamari yedi pe 😳 😳
haan...😳
Sorry to say riyu but mujhe SRK bilkul bhi pasand nahi han uski kuch movies achi hai but uske ilawa I dont like him at all. . 🥱
kya karrron yaar.. antu ko sahrukh khan hi pasand hain..😆
Yar mama ko kya hogaya hai itne flirty type woh kabse hogaye hai. .
OMG mujhe nahi pata tha mama ji pakiya se itna darty hai 🤣
Oh God latreen yeh word sunnty hi mein has pari 😆 😆
Mama ji aise ideas kaha se ley aaty hai or yeh kya Raghu ne unhe latreen se I mean commode se utha kar che che che
Yeh Raghu bhi nah kya kya kar deyta hai yeda 😆 😆
yera raghu ke ajib kar namee... jo cheez apniu hain ussey wasooli karbe mein woo kahin bhi pauch jayega... comode to bahut choti si cheez hain🤣
Antara ka bulawa aaya NS se hehe mar gaye sab ke sab
Oh God yeh antu darling ne kya kar diya ro ro kar sab key kaan phar diye or to or itne bara natsk oh god sach mein nautanki queen hai 😆
antu darling best nautanki queen...😆
Satya ko uncle or phir dada ROFL
Riyu riyu bus kar yar hasa hasa key pait mein dard kara diya, Antara ne Satya ko tickling hehehe cant control my laughter yara 🤣
i know... guess what... even i was laughing like hell while penning down the chapter😆
You rocked it yar
thx😳
But Antu ignores our Raghu koi bat nahi
Continuee soon yar
And aise funny funny scenes laty rehna please
I loved it so much
🤗

i love you too yerii🤗
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Riyu aj meine pehli baar itna jaldi unres kiya q 😆 😆

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