Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

eksss what ws dat...omggg fat ws super duper hit..
update ria darlinggg u rock babes...
loved d update...sooo gd...hayeee ria u gave
us sareee romance ...n SR bhi...*blushingg*..
grt...yaar raghu is raghu..my fav part was when..
raghu asked antara fr her permission before doing
anythingg...hayeee sooo cute...seriously hes bestest
husband..awww...really dat ws wonderful... perfectly
written...hatts off to u...
love u dear...hugsss 🤗

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

How lovely hubby raghu is...I loved it...

Finally antara aapne apne pyare hubby ki wish puri ki...I love saari romance...it was so romantic and breathtaking...I m blushing...ria...darling you are a fabulous, fantastic writer...me tum se aise hi pyaar nahi karti hu...baat hai tuj me...I love you...and thank you humare liye itna accha likhne ke liye...👏🤗

Meri mohobbaton se tum wafa karna

Muje dill se na juda karna

Meri har saans me bas jao tum

Khooshboo bann kar tum mila karna

Bhula dun tere pyaar main duniya

Fhir tum bhi pyaar ki inteha karna

Zindgi ki har khushi ka tu sahara hai

Tum ko mumkin nahi dill se juda karna ❤️

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

omg!! ria inna lamba update..😲read krte karte kafi time gujar gaya.🤓.i can undertsand tujhe type krne mein bhi time lagta hoga..😆..btw..

veerryyy swweeettt,rrroommmaannnttiiccc and lloovveellyy update..😳

aww Mr n Mrs. Naik..are so adorable..😃.sari wale scene ko read krke"sari ke fall sa"..😆..song yaad aa gaya...🤣bt seriously that scene was penned downed so nicely ⭐️

very very very nice update,,..especially the way antu shared her feelings in front of him was just awesome😛..it was pure n diviine..such a beautiful relation of rantara...thank u so much for giving such a romantic update..😊

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Afy10

@Afy10

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Wow it was Amazing 👏 superb update
Their pure nd true love 😳
finally they r do dil ek jaan in everyway 😃 Mr &Mrs.Naik
was smiling throughout reading this update 😛
really u wrote it so beautifully 😳
ty for updating
thnx for pm 😛 😊

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

**commenting from heaven as m dead after reading this update**🤢🤣

no words to describe this part...😃⭐️

u r a great great great writer ria..👏

hats off to u...👏

finally Rantara got married n their first night..OMG 😲

kitna hot tha☺️...uff..i can't get over it...☺️

so romantic n passionate n hot...☺️

mindblowing...awesome job 👍🏼

m dead...hehe 😆

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nbw16

@nbw16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

I am dumbstruck at how pure and innocent their love is...

Not even for a second they can leave without each other... Awe

I could imagine Antara in that awesome looking saree.. And how Raghu becoming all latoo over her... 😳

I am just out of words..

Its serene and beautiful update Ria...

You have penned it down very ecstatically... 👏

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

ahhh RI

am vi dreaming or was this real?

am I alive or dead?

which world am I in?

eksss this chapter is like a dream come true for me

I have high demands now after this

this is the best update ever

u left me speechless yaar

I don't know what to say to u right now

I open my mouth but nothing comes out

this was so beautiful fantastic actually I have no words

u made my day yaar

I love you for this update

I don't know how many times I have fallen in love with this story

loved it

pls cont asap

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: honeybees22
ahhh RI
am vi dreaming or was this real?

am I alive or dead?

which world am I in?

eksss this chapter is like a dream come true for me

I have high demands now after this

this is the best update ever

u left me speechless yaar

I don't know what to say to u right now

I open my mouth but nothing comes out

this was so beautiful fantastic actually I have no words

u made my day yaar

I love you for this update

I don't know how many times I have fallen in love with this story

loved it

pls cont asap