Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Wow...antara ki mom hai ya best friend...she is everything sharing with her...that was so good...I love there bonding...Wowowo antara you said him directly shadi karoge mujse...abhi...waah antara really you love him a lot...isiliye usse khone nahi chahti...chalo ek kaam to complete hua dono k rishte ko naam mill gaya...they become a legal husband and wife...ab DM jaye bhaad me...and precap was si romantic...Please update soon yaar...can't wait...otherwise electrifying update...amaizing...

Do hi lafzo ka hai afsana jo suna ke khamosh baithe hai,

Ibtedaa ye ke tum ko Chahte hai, inteha ye ke khud ko kho baithe hai...❤️

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

"You scatter my heartbeats. These are not just butterflies. There are entire galaxies swirling in my chest."

ohh...my...my...what an update babe???

You literally killed me...🤢

never expected such a thing..."marriage"...WOW! what a surprise!!!

Ria...this update was marvelous and beyond any perfection.

very subtle...and beautifully drawn 👏

the simplicity made it more worth 😃😃😃

I could visualise everything so clearly...

and it couldn't have been better than this.😊

loved the way Antara proposed Raghu😳...

so intense emotions flowed through them in the same moment...😊

it was their 'moment of love' 😳

I'm amazed by the way of your writing...you are such a terrific writer 👏👏👏

i'm literally at loss of words today

while reading this update It reminded me these lines...

"You've delicately repaired the irreparable me."

well Raghu did handle her his own way...making heal her wounded soul 😳

all the memories of them being together got refreshed when Antara narrated the whole story to her mother...😊😊

loved it on the whole Ria...👏

do update soon...😳

love ya...mwah 🤗

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Unres at 86 😆

maine dekh liya ...😆

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: ifians

maine dekh liya ...😆

But still i was making sure key tune dekh liya 😆

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#675

RI tu kite e?

mera update kite e???

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#676

sorry for commenting late behena...

coming to ur update...😃

it was awesome as always...u write so well...👏

geeta is so sweet n understanding...she accepted rantara's relation

loved each n every lines of raghu...

yippeee...finally they got married legally..

"Mr and Mrs Naik" that sounds so amazing...😳

waiting for ur next part 😆

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

RIII😡😡😡😡😡😡 WHERE ARE YOU WITH MY UPDATE#??????????😡😡😡😡

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gargi21

@gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

hey ria soooryyy for not commenting on d previous updates...

i was quite busy...

but now i read them all..

they r simply awesome...

even im excited for dat saare stuff...

will antara wear it n den raghu will go drooling on her n den their romance...in which u r perfect...

coming to d last update it was seriously out of world...

i enjoyed it to full...

superb yaar...even i was shocked wen antara asked raghu for marriage ...

wat n update yaar...

n now finally dey r married...

do update soon... :)

im loving this story a lot...

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Riyu riyu riyu riyu tu kya hai yar "Romance ki Queen"
Meine pehle bhi keha hai or ab bhi keh rehe hoon key tujhe DDEJ ka writer hona chaheye tha 😆
What a brilliant update yar
Im so so so happy key mera to dil kar raha hai balle balle karo or sare dance forms jo nahi aatey woh bhi karo heheh like this
Waise mujhe yeh dance kam or aerobics zyada lag raha hai 🤣
Aww thank God geeta itne understanding nikli 😃
Waise geeta ji ko kafi kuch nahi pata hai about our Rantara 😆
Hayyeee again Mandir wala scene yaad agaya
Arey wah wah yaar geeta ji to bari smart nikli, kya idea diya hai 😆😃
Cour Marriage ab duniya ki koi bhi taqaat Rantara ko alag nahi kar sakty 😉😳
Hahahahah Raghu pagal latto hai Antu pe love you geeta ji 😆😆
Oh God yeh dono kab larna band kareygy pehle to mujhe doubt tha but ab yaqeen yeh dono nahi sudhreygy ab mein bol sakty hoon Miya Biwi key jagre start 🤣
Hahahahah Damad ji hayeee I loved it so much and ear pulling was too good
Hayeee Rantara romance
Aj tak Antu ney kabhi kuch nahi manga but aj to manga wo duniya ki sab se bari khushi hai Raghu key liye it was a wow movement
Raghu ko to yaqeen hi nahi howa key Antara ne usse Court Marriage mangy
Wah wah kya proposal, sweet and simple but heart touching yar
'MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGY ABHI OR ISSI WAQT" it made me blush thousands time
Awww shivani and machu witness 😆😆
Waise riyu tu shivani or machu ki setting kyun nahi kara deyty 🤣
"Mr & Mrs Naik" hayeee mar dala rey riyu
THIS IS FOR YOU

Precap: Just one thing UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE

Lastly, one gift for giving such a beatiful update and dhamedarr update