Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147 - Page 29

Originally posted by: honeybees22

RIII this update was totally unexpected

the kiss was wonderful m still dreaming about it

RII I cant stop blushing after reading this update

it was soo magical yaar

I love you for this update

the cute rantara moments

finally the sadness is gone away from their lives

after reading this beautiful update I am totally speechless right now

the night on the roof hayee so cute and romantic totally made for each other

m loving this story soo much right now and will love it even more in the future

I cant explain my feelings right now

ur a great writer RI

this was soo romantic

everything happened to quickly

but u ended so soon

precap OMG what happened now

pls cont asap and make it even longer next time

the first thing I wanna read tomorrow is ur update samhji??

cont asap and make it longer

Originally posted by: ifians

thank you baba... i ate lots of prasad today... and thats the result😆

and about precap...don't worry.. wait and watch..😉

hinu yaar i got very little time while writting down this so couldn't make it longer yaar... but i will try to make longer next time.. releatoves ayein huye hain gharmein.. itne chillam chilli mein likhna thora muskil ho jata hain..😕

Originally posted by: honeybees22

good girl keep eating it and now I gave u more so u cant complain now 😆

chalo koi gal nai

enjoy its ur bday! I want a party🥳

Originally posted by: ifians

mere liye to aap ke pass free mein prasad hain..😆

aap aona prasad bhejte rahiye😳

party okkk... kaal sab ko party doongi...😉

Originally posted by: honeybees22

yes and always will be ask anytime😆😉 sure sure why not

yippee cant wait for it

I will write u an os as a gift *Rantara at RIIS Birthday party*😎

Originally posted by: ifians

hayla main too soch ke hi faint ho rahi hoon...🤢🤣

Originally posted by: honeybees22

abhi fanit mat ho u stil have to read my long boring and quiet odd random of cuz m writing it just for U😳😆

Originally posted by: ifians

arey tu likh rahi hain na... to jitnaa bhi long hoo, boring hoo yaa luch bhi hoo i am damn sure ki bahut acha hoga...😆😳

Originally posted by: honeybees22

haan😎

hmm well lets wait and watch how it turns out to be😆

Originally posted by: ifians

i am waiting 😳