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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Dear Ria ...i cant giv a review of this update ... its beyond my capasity ...

am truely in search of words n sentences appropriate for this update then i wll give u review ...

if u can listen to my heart ...then plzz listen to it ...as u know silence is more powerful than words ... how much i loved this update how much i adored it ...i can never ever express it to you ...sorry dear ...

just listen to my heart ... am overwhelmed by ur writing skill ...sharabi hoke Raghu ne jo propose kiya ...hatts off to you ...Antara toh kya koi bhi ladki haan kar degi yaar ...kash agar mujhe raghu mil jata khain ...but alas in this real world ...its next to impossible to find such a gem ...am not that lucky ...anyway mera dukhra abh bandh karti hun 😕

...yaar aajkal na teri story jitna padrahi hun utnahi main Raghu ko chahne lagi hun ... pata hai nahi milsakta😭 ...firbhi ...abh iske liye main terepe gussa nahi hun bilkul ...atleast tere karan Raghu dream mein toh mila ...reality mein nahi mila to kya hua ????😆😉

yeh jo khushi mereko mila hai tere karan ...iskeliye i can only giv u my love dear cos nothing else is worth matching to what u hv gifted me in the form of ur stories ...

love u Riaaa God blessyou dear with every happy things of this world .😃😃😃

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Ria...Ria...Ria..😳😳😳

This update was Phenomenal...!!!!👏

This story is a Masterpiece!👏👏

Well even I can't give any review for this update...😕

But I can dedicate some lines... which got refreshed in my mind while reading this update...

" He intertwined our fingers and pulled me in close to whisper...I'll show you How I can grow flowers in the darkest parts of your broken heart "

I can't tell you Ria...how happy I'm today...🥳

This update is such a bliss 😳😳😳

I can't say anything more...bcuz this update has expressed everything itself 😛😛

pls do update soon as I can't wait anymore 😃😃

love ya...Mwah 🤗

P.s :- I forgot to thank you for using those lines in your banner for previous update.

So thank you sooo much 🤗

It was a very overwhelming gesture from you and I can't thank you enough for that.❤️

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

When are you updating??? 🤣 😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset
When are you updating??? 🤣 😆

same ques. as of purple..when r u updating ?😆

holi pe mast update to banta hai...😉😆

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

amazing update my behena...🤗

sorry for commenting late...i was not well

u described each scene so perfectly..it was as if i was watching a film..😳

u described raghu and antara's emotions n state of mind so beautifully😳.. i have no words to describe that...u r a great writer👍🏼...hats off to u 👏

waiting for ur next update now 😃

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Rachna

@richurachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

awww I love d way Raghu broke in front of antu...

precap- naughty...

lovely yaar

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

dat was such a awesome update loved it

the way raghu opened his heart in front of antara dat was so touching

so finally antara got answers to her question

nd precap shows a naughty antara

waiting for the next part

do update soon

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nbw16

@nbw16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Eekkks Ria... I am blushing like hell re... 😳
How dreamy and adorable..!!

Atlast Raghu let his heart out .. Ahh this burst out was must for him ... Kitna dard chupake rakha tha apne seene me... ! 🤢

He wil feel lighter now.. And even Antara.. Now She knows exactly what is our Raghu made up of..

Take a bow .. You have fabulously portrayed the emotions of them.. This update of urs is worth to read times in loop...
waiting for the next...

Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Afy10
Unres
wow what an amazing chapter 👏
loved it
Raghus emotion were so beautifully described 😛
finally d wall broke
aww rantara scene was emotional yet so adorable 😛
he kissed her 😳
precap:she is teasing him 😉 he wil b so happy tht she is not going
i wish nw antara confess her love 😊
It was Awesome update 👏
pls continue asap
Thnx for pm
happy holii 😊

thx

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic
OMG YESSS I KNEW SOMETHING LIKE THIS WAS COMING!

YES YES YES! I AM SOO HAPPY! & SHE REALISES THAT HE ISN'T AS BAD EEEKSSS

HE KEEPS HIS HEAD ON HER LAP...HOW CUTEEE N ROMANTIC!

AND THE PRECAP..."NAHI JAUNGI" ISHHH 😳😳😳😳😳

thx my yeri ishu😃... yaar control...🤣

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
ria!!!!!!!...superhit update yr..👏
it really shows different colors.pain,anger,love,passion...colors of emotions...i loved this update a lot!!!!😃
atlast raghu burst ouit his all feelings infront of her...while resting his head on her lap😳..raghu jab bhi bubbly aunty leta hai tab tab bhut achche moments mil jate hain..🤣thanks to bubbly aunty.🤣..agr wo nhi leta to gusse mein pta nhi kya bol deta antu ko aur naya panga khada hojata🤣...ab antu ko koi problem nhi hona chahiye yede ne pappu romeo nhi🤣..bilkul sweet n innocent yeda banke sab keh dala😆...
precap is so sweet...waiting for next part😛
tfpm..nad happy holiii!!!🤗

thx suchi... happy holi to u too...⭐️

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
OMG OMG OMG I can't believe it yar
Ria such a wonderful upfate I felt like dancing [:D/]
Superb mindblowing update
Finally bubblyaunty ne aj kam bana diya Raghu ka 😃
Awww Raghu sleeping in Antara's lap scene 😳
Precap is outstanding yar
Mujhe samaj nahi araha mein tujhe Thankss bola ya Rantara ko
But still I love you soo much my yedi
Continue soon 🤗

bubbly aunty zindabad😆😆

thx nikku...😳

Originally posted by: ankusanu
Eksss ria it ws tooo emotional update..😭
Loved whatever raghu said to antu..dat ws
Really really emotional...beautifully written👏..
N yes finally antu got to knw d real raghu
Whose a gem of person..😛
Thank god Dr laul.ka signal sahi tha😆
N made antu reakise raghu is d rite guy
Fr her..yeah have to see how she
Make him a better person by her love..😳
N yes finally raghu kissed antara on
Her cheek dat ws so cute n totally
Unexpected.. n raghu lying on
Antus lap...hayee i ws like wowww dat ws lovely
Yar antu cldnt have resisted d charm of
Our hero..totally worth reading update
Lovely n thanks fr d update..i loved it
Precap is also grt..rantara back to
Normal.yeahhh...
P.s loved ur dp
..

thx priyu.. yup they are normal at last😳.

Originally posted by: nazi786
What a update mindblowing
Finally antara got to see the glimps of the real raghu
I have no words for this update it was outstanding
Thanks for updating please update soon even doe u do lol
Thanks for the pm

thx a lot...

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Oohhh raghu...he is really very innocent boy...
Now antu also know that...
I loved raghu's all dialogues it's come from his heart...how much he loves her...thank god antara ko pata chal gaya...
And precap was superb...antara teasing raghu...now everything is alright...kitne dino baad antara or raghu k bech sab theek ho raha hai...

!!!! Lafzo ki banavat muje nahi aati...
Muje tumse pyaar hai seedhi si baat hai...!!!!!

Happy holi riaaa...

aww thx ridzy😳

Originally posted by: honeybees22
wow ri
best one ever

thx hinu😃

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata
amazing update my behena...🤗
sorry for commenting late...i was not well
u described each scene so perfectly..it was as if i was watching a film..😳
u described raghu and antara's emotions n state of mind so beautifully😳.. i have no words to describe that...u r a great writer👍🏼...hats off to u 👏
waiting for ur next update now 😃

behena... u are back...🤗

Originally posted by: richurachna
awww I love d way Raghu broke in front of antu...

precap- naughty...

lovely yaar

thx richu...😃

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
dat was such a awesome update loved it
the way raghu opened his heart in front of antara dat was so touching
so finally antara got answers to her question
nd precap shows a naughty antara
waiting for the next part
do update soon

thx

Originally posted by: nbw16
Eekkks Ria... I am blushing like hell re... 😳
How dreamy and adorable..!!

Atlast Raghu let his heart out .. Ahh this burst out was must for him ... Kitna dard chupake rakha tha apne seene me... ! 🤢

He wil feel lighter now.. And even Antara.. Now She knows exactly what is our Raghu made up of..

Take a bow .. You have fabulously portrayed the emotions of them.. This update of urs is worth to read times in loop...
waiting for the next...

yup antara indeed came to know what is our raghu made up of😳

thx neha

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: pampz
Dear Ria ...i cant giv a review of this update ... its beyond my capasity ...

am truely in search of words n sentences appropriate for this update then i wll give u review ...

if u can listen to my heart ...then plzz listen to it ...as u know silence is more powerful than words ... how much i loved this update how much i adored it ...i can never ever express it to you ...sorry dear ...

just listen to my heart ... am overwhelmed by ur writing skill ...sharabi hoke Raghu ne jo propose kiya ...hatts off to you ...Antara toh kya koi bhi ladki haan kar degi yaar ...kash agar mujhe raghu mil jata khain ...but alas in this real world ...its next to impossible to find such a gem ...am not that lucky ...anyway mera dukhra abh bandh karti hun 😕

...yaar aajkal na teri story jitna padrahi hun utnahi main Raghu ko chahne lagi hun ... pata hai nahi milsakta😭 ...firbhi ...abh iske liye main terepe gussa nahi hun bilkul ...atleast tere karan Raghu dream mein toh mila ...reality mein nahi mila to kya hua ????😆😉

yeh jo khushi mereko mila hai tere karan ...iskeliye i can only giv u my love dear cos nothing else is worth matching to what u hv gifted me in the form of ur stories ...

love u Riaaa God blessyou dear with every happy things of this world .😃😃😃