Rantara FF: Laal Ishq||Chapter 29 Pg. 148 (Complete)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: liana2304
Aww .
Really nice update .
Loved it .
Thxs for the PM .
Continue writing .

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

orry for the late comment Kiret ...couldnt manage to read it up earlier ...i read this from chap 8 to 12 all in one go ... its really really going very very interesting .👏👏👏...still the mistery is not out ...why raghu is so weird ...but there is something very fishy no doubt ... i am loveing this story too much ...cont soon dear

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#553

Originally posted by: pampz
orry for the late comment Kiret ...couldnt manage to read it up earlier ...i read this from chap 8 to 12 all in one go ... its really really going very very interesting .👏👏👏...still the mistery is not out ...why raghu is so weird ...but there is something very fishy no doubt ... i am loveing this story too much ...cont soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
A little note

Most people are asking for a long update but you guys need to realise that each chapter has it's own point that it has to reach and the update will only continue until that point. Once the point that I want to make in the update is reached, there isn't a need for the update to get any longer than that. There is a reason that it's split up. I hope you all understand.

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Okiee 😆😆

I hope I am not the only one asking for long updates 😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Okiee 😆😆
I hope I am not the only one asking for long updates 😆😆

Your not but it's annoying. I mean, I've gotten my point across so there's no need for me to drag in random stuff that makes no sense at all.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

lovely dear...

rantara will dancing together

suspense continue...

pls update soon

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#557

Originally posted by: richurachna
lovely dear...

rantara will dancing together

suspense continue...

pls update soon

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Will update asap.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Beautiful Kiret really loved it😛👍🏼

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Beautiful Kiret really loved it😛👍🏼

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~Laal Ishq~

- Chapter 13-

I step out of the house as it was loud inside. I was just walking, wanting to relax my mind for a bit. I was confused. Like really confused. What was up with Raghu? This wasn't the first time I had seen that silver thing. I still remember the consequences last time I was so curious. At least nothing like that had happened this time. But still, I felt like Raghu was hiding something from me. Not just something, a lot of things. I wish that he would let his walls down around me at least once, just once and tell me something about him. I just wanted to know why he behaved with me like that and-

"Woah!" I let out a scream as a car zooms by me. The car had come to a stop at the parking spot and stormed up there, ready to unleash my anger.

"What do you-" I get cut off again when the door opens, startling me. The driver gets out of the car and faces me. I think I could feel my mouth opening wider in the shape of an 'O'.

"Krrish..."

He takes his sunglasses off and my eyes meet his beautiful blue eyes. "Antara, I'm so sorry. I didn't realise that it was you. I'm really sorry," he says. "It's... It's okay," I say, slowly coming out of my shock.

"Are you here for Aditi's wedding?" I let my curiosity get the better of me. After all, I was really curious to know why he was here.

"Yeah, she invited me." I look up. Really? She didn't tell me that she was going to to invite the heartthrob of our high school.

"I think that we should head inside." I nod. "Ladies first." He still had that irresistible charm that every girl in our high school used to love, including me.

We walk inside in silence. As soon as we walk in, we meet Raghu. "Where were you?" he asks. He notices Krrish next to me and slowly slips his hand around my waist. "I was looking for you."

I look at Raghu's warm hand resting on my waist. I was wearing a lengha for the occasion so my waist was bare. His touch spread warmth throughout my entire body. It felt right to have his hand around me.

"Antara." His voice is soft, the softest it's ever been with me. I look up at his eyes, contemplating on how to answer his question.

"I just went out for a little walk and ran into Krrish. Oh, um. Raghu, this is Krrish, a high school friend and Krrish, this is Raghu, my..." I was confused what to say. "Friend," I finally say.

"Nice to meet you," Krrish says, offering his hand to Raghu. Raghu shakes his hand, without his other hand ever leaving my waist.

"I should go meet Aditi," he says. "Yeah. She's over there with Maasi," I say, pointing out a group of ladies.

"Seems a lot more than just 'friends'," he whispers in my ear before he leaves. His words got me thinking again. Why was Raghu doing this? Was he by any chance... Jealous?

A/N: Good, bad? And what do you guys think about Krrish? Let me know in your comments! Also, if you haven't already done so, please do read the note on pg. 74. (:

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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