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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

res unres

ATLAST ME FIRST...
😆
what a mast update Ria and what a funny update ...😆 ... loved it n enjoyed it completely ... haha ... yaar tune hum sabko bhukhi machli bana diya ?????? but agar party mein yeh Raghu sach mein mil jaye na toh ...😳😳😳
Antara chillake bolegi ke yeh mera boyfriend hai ...tabhi hamari group uski nahi sunnewala... hum sa to Raghu ko kidnap hi karke le jayenge yaar ...
and what did u say ... Pampi ka book Jaan best seller?????? ...LOLLLZZZ haste haste pet dard ho gaya ...
oh my God Ria ...really thanx atleast FF mehi sahi Raghu se mulakat to hui ...chalo yehi sochke dilko chain mil gaya ...in Reality yeh to kabhi nhi honewala 😭
Suchi aur Hinu ka halat to sabse buri thi Raghu ko dekh ke ...lolllzzz... but Ria this is not fare haanh ...tu khud bhi drool karti hai na Raghu pe ... aur story mein sirf icecream chus rahi thi ???? ye galat bat hai ...chup chup ke tubhi drool kar rahi thi for sure ...haha
Overall it was a wonderful funny and entertaing update dear and am eager to know how our beloved Raghu Antu ko propose karta hai ...and then Antu ka out of the world Reaction...u already made me a PAMPIRE ... pata nahi Ria tera story aur Raghu ke pyar mein main kya se kya ban jayun ...😆

ajja meri PAMPIRE... teri reply ka toh har roz wait laga raheta hain mujhe🤗
haan yaar maine chun chn ke forum ke best yeris ko nikala hain reception ke liye jisme no doubt tu bhi ek hain... but agar acha lage to creidt goes to suchi... after all uska plan tha😆
haan yaar tera book to bestseller hain hi... iss forum ka bestseller no 1 FF pami ki JAAN..
thx nahi kahene ka.. dosti mein no sorrry no thx..😎
suchi toh hain hi bindass, aur hina to raghu ke pyar mein humesha khiyi raheti hain.. to maine ussey sab se jyada blush karwa diya..
yup main maan ti hoon ki i like raghu main kabhi kabhi uspe drool bhi kar leti hoon.. but occasionally... i admire him but mera crush koi aur hain yaar😉
and lastly.. love you muahhh🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u 🤗

ria!!!!!!😊
mindblowing update dear!👏
MAINE KHUD KO INVITE KIYA BLACKMAIL KRKE...OMG!!!!😆
BHUT ENJOY KIYA RAGHU KO PARESHAANI MEIN DALKE...😉😆
not fair yr...khud to chup chap maze le rahi thi...aur hum sabko bhooki machli bna dala...😆
bt mujhe bada maza aya yr...😃
antu phir ho gayi naraz..raghu ne gf.bf jo bol diya...😆
thanks fr pm...😊


if any one got hurt with this idea..jo mere dimag mein aaya tha..i AM EXTREMELY SORRY FOR THAT..PRIYU,HINA,HAYA,PAMPZ😊.

bole toh welcome not suchi baba😆
haaan yaar tujhe maine blackmailer bana ddiya..🤣
maine ek toh apni sari screen space tum logo ko de kar bas icecream chusti rahi aur tum kahe rahi ho main maze le rahi thi... not fare😭
koi hurt nahi huya yaar... tera plan superhit hain..🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Wah wah wah wah kya update tha yaar.👏

M toh lga k m if ki kissi party m phunch gy hun..
omg hurt what r u talking ria i was
Blushing n laughing like hell ...😳
What an update dear ria...😛
Uff yeh suchi hi aise idea de skti hai i lnw😆
Cmibg to update😊
Ria seriously mazedar tha yar..😉
Reception m phunch gy rantara ..
Grt to ab rachna ayan help krenge
Rantara ko milane mein...wowww
Huggs



Kya bhukhi machaliyon m daal diya..
Dis line cracked me yaar..
Mast tha..
Thanks raghu antu see milvane k liye



thx yaar priyu..😆
raghu ko dekh ke sab bhookhi machli hi ban jate ho..🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
guys here is the next chapter. sorry it became long again.🤢.. kya karein ek pura dance sequence jo daal ddiya ismein..😎


Chapter 45

Antara was talking to some girls of her batch. They were asking her about her wellbeing. Antara excused herself and went to a quiet corner of the lawn. She was again feeling so frustrated. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes. "Idiot!!..." she said slowly. "nodoubt he cares for me so much but why don't he understand? These kinds of talks really hurt me raghu! I don't care that you are... gunda or whatever.. I know u are a good human being! Samajhti hoon main tumhe ab. Par tum kab samjhoge ki mujhe bura lagta hain ye sab sun na... jab tum mujhe aise tana maar te ho.." antara felt heavy in her chest. she felt her eyesight was becoming blur. Was she crying?! Why his words hurt her so much?! She silently brushed the nape of her eyes with her finger. "Excuse me miss?!" she heard someone's voice and lifted her eyes. Two or three boys were standing there and looking at her with some odd look. Antara felt uncomfortable with their gaze. "miss you seemed alone. Would you like to join our company?!" one of the boy said. "no thx.." antara refused genuinely. "ohh miss don't be afraid. We are all gentlemen." Another boy came forward. "BTW, I am akash. I am the son of mr malhotra, Ayan's dad's business partner in Mumbai." He said in a flirty tone. "nice to meet you, but pardon me, I can't join you people." Antara said in genuine voice. "Come on babes.. Why are you so afraid. And also a young girl like you doesn't look good in a huge party." Akash was about to reach to her when suddenly a fig came and stood between them. akash became a bit startled and lifted his head to look at his face. his eyes widened looking at his hard gaze fixed to him. "akeli nahi hain yee... apun hain iske sath.. samjha?!" he spoke. "rrr... raghubhai aap?!! Yahan shrinagar mein?!" akash started to tremble. "haan apun idhar... aur tu uss malhotra ka pilla hain na?!" raghu asked in firm voice. "sss sorryyy.. raghubhai... mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye aap ke sath hain...sorry sister!!" akash said and just swept away from the place with his friends. Raghu looked back and saw antara standing there. she was looking to him with a very irritated gaze. Without saying a word she started to walk angrily. "ee miscall, sun too.." raghu as usual followed her. but that time she didn't responded to him. "miscall sun na yaar!" he came and stood in front of her blocking her way. Antara looked at him with a very irritated look. He understood that she was really mad that time. "yaar dekh... pata hain apun baar baar yahin ghisa pita dialogue bata ta raheta hain.. par sorry yaar.. apun ka wo matlab nahin tha... wo to... kya kehete hain.. haan wo tongue sliping ho gaya tha." Raghu said quickly. "who slip of tongue hota hain.." antara said in a firm voice. "haan yaar wohich... dekh yaar... haan apun maan ta hain ki mere se galti huyi hain.. par tere ko bhi aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.. kyun un larkiyo ko mere piche bhag rahi thi?!!..." he asked. "haan sari galti toh main hi karti hoon.." she said in a very low voice lowering her gaze. Her voice seemed chocked. "ee kya huya?!!" he sensed something wrong. She lifted her eyelids and looked to him. silent tears were flowing through her chicks. raghu's heart ached like hell. "ee tu ro kyun rahi hain?! kya huya?!" he moved his hand to touch her chick and shove away those tears. Antara pushed his hand away. "choro tum, don't even try to touch me!" she said in angry voice. he was hurt by her words but that time he was not angry at all. Rather than he was feeling guilty to make her cry. "tum humesha mujhe aise tane kyun maar te rehete ho?! Mujhe bahut bura lagta hain..." she said in broken voice, "main jaan ti hoon main tumhe gunda mawali ye sab keheti thi. Par mujhe apni galti samajh aa gayi thi. Main baar baar try karti hoon ki tumse jhagra na karoon. Wo galtiyan na karoon jo maine pahele kit hi.. par tum baar baar mujhe majboor kar dete ho ki main jhagra karoon!.. kyun karte ho haan?! Main tumhe itni buri lagti hoon to kyun meri madad karte ho?! Kyun mere pichee piche Mumbai se shrinagar aa gaye?!" she said in broken voice as tears nade their way down her chicks. he became hell frustrated. "arey naiii re... aisa kuch naii hain... teri tank humesha lick kyun ho jati hain?! arey miscall. Shhh!!.. chup ho ja.. aise ro kyun rahi hain yaar?!" he again moved his hand to her but that time she didn't resisted him. He gently cupped her face and gently brushed her delicate chicks to remove her tears. She looked at him with hurt eyes. The look on her eyes almost burned his heart. "kyun aisa karti hain haan?! Jab se mili hain bas roti reheti hain.. itna kyun roti hain yaar? Itna royegi to akha country ka pani ki samasya door ho jayegi!!" he said in a very tender voice. antara laughed quietly. He felt relieved. At last she was smiling again. her face was still in his hand. He looked at her cute smile in a very adoring look. s**a raghunath. Dekh tune fir rula diya issey... bappa ne kitni pyari si gift di hain aur tu hain ki humesha issey chot pauchati reheti hain..' he thought. "haan bilkul, aise humesha battisi dikhake smile maar ne ka samjhi na?!! waisey bhi tu rote huye achi nahi lagti." He said and slowly left her chicks feeling the warmth of her skin. "aur khabardaar jo tune jhagra karna bandh kiya to.. agar miscall jhagra nahi karegi to mujhe to lagega ye miscall nahi miscall ki duplicate hain.. samjhi?!" he said with a huge grin. "raghu!!..." she lightly pushed his arm. "aur haan... kisne kahan tu buri hain?! meri misscal jaisa bhi hain bahut achi hain... best hain! aur agey se ye baat dimag mein ghusa lene ka..." he said in a bit teasing voice but there was huge intensity in that speech. Antara suddenly felt her heart skipped a bit by her words. Her chicks caught a faint glow of pink. What did he said just at the moment before?! She couldn't afford to lift her face and look in his black eyes. He was looking at her in a very adoring way. His eyes were so tender and full of some deep emotions. She always get attrackted to those eyes. It said so many unspoken words of his heart. She always felt so calm, so safe with him. she didn't know that she was slowly drowning into those intense black eyes. Both of them were looking towards each other silently for a long pause. A cute smile was playing on both of their lips. raghu, main chahke bhi tumse gusa nahi ho pati hoon. Tum ho to lagta hain jaise sabkuch thik hain, sab sahi hain! aue tum na ho to kuch acha nahi lagta hain. aisa kyun ho raha hain raghu?! kyun tumhara sath itna acha lagne laga hain?!' antara questioned in her mind. God knows if his heart could get the message of her heart. But then suddenly someone's voice approach. "antara...!!" both of them got out of trance in jerk. Antara looked away hiding her slightly red face while raghu keep staring at her. antara looked at the source of sound and saw rachna and other friends calling for her. "hey what are you two doing there?! come here! Wahan pe couple dance suru hone wala hain jaldi aa jao..." rachna said and went away with others. Antara looked at raghu with a smile. raghu never looked away from her. "chaloge?!" antara asked. "chalna!! Tu jidhar jayegi apun to tere piche pichee udhar pauch jayega... Mumbai se idhar aa gaya..." he said in teasing tone. "pagal ho tum.." antara said with a small laugh. "tune hi to bana diya hain..." he spit out all of a sudden. "kya Kaha tumne?!" she asked in confusion. "kuch nahi... chal!" he said with a huge grin. It was becoming impossible to control for him. both of them moved towards the center stage. rachna and ayan were also there. all couples were getting ready for the dance. The music didn't started yet. Antara smiled looking at the scenario. "ee miscall!!" raghu whishpered from the side. "hmmm!!..." antara said keeping her gaze towards the stage. "tune kabhi pehele aise kisi ke sath dance ki hain?!!" he asked all of a sudden. Antara moved his gaze towards him with a slight frown. "kyun?! Tum jaan ke kya karoge?!" she asked. "kuch naii.. tere pe movie bana ni hain na iss liye... sidhe sidhe puch rahi hoon.. jawab kyun nahi deti yaar?!" raghu asked in irritation. "tumahere sawal itne ajib se jo hote hain.." she answered. "arey bata na.." he asked again. antara was a bit confused. Why she was so anxious to know that if she danced with anyone in past or not?! She wandered and smiled, "yes, kiya toh hain.." she ans. "kya?!! Kis ke sath?!" raghu felt his throat became dry and he felt his heart jumped to his throat. She danced with someone before, the thought made him so much restless. "ishan ke sath!!... ghar mein!!" she answered with a giggle. "kya??!! Ishu?!!" he was shocked. "haan, aur papa ke sath bhi kabhi kabar karti thi unke b'day pein.." she said again. "arey yaar.. ekdum yeri hain tu... kya ouch raha tha aur kya jawab diya.." raghu said. "well, aise maine parties mein to kisi ke sath dance nahi ki! Aur aise dance karne ke liye partner honi chahiye... jo mere pass to nahin thi.. but, main dance karne se jyada dusre ka performance jyada enjoy karti hoon.." she said. Raghu let out a sigh of relief. At last she said in her own mouth that there was no one in her life. The music started at last. The song played and all of them slowly started to dance.

"Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,

Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum."

Antara closed her eyes with a huge smile and felt the music. Raghu again got mesmerized by that huge heavenly smile. "kyaa huya bari has rahi hain..." he asked slowly. She opened her eyes and looked at the dance floor. "ye meri favourite songs mein se ek hain.. mera to sapna hain ki agar meri life mein wo special insaan kabhi ayein to main issi song mein uske sath dance karungi!!" she said in a cheerful innocent voice. Suddenly a hand, whose wrist was wrapped with a blue hanky and a wrist belt came at her front stretching its palm. She became startled and looked towards raghu who was looking towards her expectantly with eager eyes. His eyes were pleading her to hold his hand. she blinked with a confused frown looking at his hand which was postured to her. "kya kaheti hain miscall?! Ho jayein?!!" he winked at her. "tum dance karoge?! Woo bhi mere sath?!!" she said in an unbelievable voice. "areey aise kahe rahi hain ki jaise apun shadi karne ke liye kahe rahi hain!!.. arey ek dance hi toh hain... himalay chare ko nahin kahe raha hoon.." he said in a bit irritation. "are you sure?!" she was still confused. "arey aise mat dekh... utna bhi bura nahin dance karta... apun ganpati bisarjan ke time jo naachta hain na to pura basti hil jati hain.." he said prudly. Antara giggled a bit and looked at his face silently for a while. haan karegi ya naa kahegi?!!' raghu thought in tension. bappa.. dekh, naa nahi kahene ka.. iss time toh haan bulwa de yaar..' he said in mind. at last antara smiled and lifted her hand and slowly slide her hand in his palm. Raghu felt electric shock which numbed him all over. He took a deep breath automatically. Antara smiled and nodded her head cutely in agreement posturing towards the dance floor. they slowly moved holding their hand. Both could feel the unknown excitement in their nerve. They stood in between the couple facing each other. The environment, the music everything was making the surrounding so much intoxicated. Antara looked in raghu's eyes. His eyes were too much intense, full of unknown deep feelings which were sending sparks in her. Antara's throat became dry. Why she was feeling so much excited and pleased. The dance she always dreamed to do with the special man in her life, was going to do with raghu! on the other hand, raghu was totally drowned by the environment, the music, her beauty and her confused hazels which were fixed on him. Everything felt like so dreamy, so beautiful. The song continued.

Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,

ohho Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai

Raghu all of a sudden slide his right hand around antara's delicate waste and pulled her in huge force. Antara was startled and she bumped on his chest. her left hand landed on his shoulder for support and he caught her right hand in his left hand and stretched at side in dancing posture. Their faces were just inches apart and they breathed heavily in the electric pulse ran down their body by each other's contact. Their breaths brushed on each other's face. the intensity of raghu's eyes burned her and she felt so feeble, so powerless, yet so safe in his strong hold. Raaghu's hungry eyes were moving at each and every portion of her feature. Her wide hazels, her rosy tender chicks, her tempting lips, which were trembling a bit and calling him badly to shank his own in it, everything about her was making him crazy. it was becoming so hard to control with passing time. He wanted to feel her; he wanted to say how much he felt for her, he wanted to cares her holding her tightly and to never let her go. Her chest was moving up and down very quickly. She was also feeling something! "raghu!!" she said in low confused tone. The song started in full speech

Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai

Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai...

And at that moment he lifted her feeble feature in his strong hand and quickly took a swing. Antara's hand caught around her neck automatically to keep her balance. When after the swing he landed her on the ground again antara was looking at him with startled and amused eyes. Her lips had make a perfect O, Raghu smirked at her. antara smiled back making her heart skip a bit. He caught her both hand and stretched a bit and then lifted her one hand above and made her feature swing around her own. Antara smiled and followed his lead. She didn't know why, but she was really enjoying the dance with him. and raghu kept staring at her smile with a smirk on his face. The song continued and soon both of them drowned into dancing. Antara was smiling widely all the time and at first she was feeling a little awkward which was gone at last. both of their feature moved together in perfect sink. She was feeling so comfortable in his hold, in his touch.

Aankhein doobi doobi si surmayee madham,

Jheelen paani paani hai bass tum aur hum,
Hmmm baat badi hairat ki hai,

Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai, Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai

Raghu was like having a dream. He still couldn't believe she was the same girl whom he at first thought to be his worst enemy. And at last, he had fallen badly for his enemy. The girl had become his everything, his life. Whom he wanted to threw away from his life, his basti, couldn't even tolerate a min separation from her. her presence had become his life. They were so drawn to each other that they didn't notice that all the other couple, including ayan and rachna had stopped their dancing and looking at them with amused face. they were looking like the couple made in heaven while dancing together. They forgot their own dance and kept busy on drooling raghu and antara. when the music ended raghu hold antara by her waist and her hands were encircled on his shoulder. Her body was totally bend on his hand and her full weight was on raghu. she was breathing heavily. Her lips were parted in a heavenly smile and her gleaming eyes were fixed on his killer gaze on her. her hairs were ruffled and her veil was moved from her chest revealing her cleavage. Raghu breathed hevilly. He didn't want to let her go. He wanted to stay at that moment forever holding her in his hand. Both of their eyes were fixed towards each other like a magnet. But as the music ended, the sound of huge clapping made them to come back reality. With a startled eyes they looked at surroundings and saw everyone around were looking towards them and clapping. They both became a bit embarrassed. Raghu lifted her and antara fixd her veil. Antara smiled to the others. Ayan and rachna rushed to them. "that's not fare yaar.. humari reception party hain par party ki raunak to tum logo ne chin li.." rachna said. Both of them gazed towards each other with a mild smile. They felt like coming out of a beautiful dream.

Precap: "no yaar.. it's okk!! Mujhe koi demand nahi karni hain..." antara said towards her friends. "no way antu baby, this is the rule of the game, tumne jeeta hain aur tumhe raghu se kuch na kuch karwana hi parega.." rachna said. "yaar please, I don't like this! you know.." antara said. "okk to antara tumhare badle main hi demand kar leti hoon... raghu tum antara ko propose kar ke dikhaon..." rachna said all of a sudden.

ps: so how is this?😕. i don't know what i have written in all 4 pages. and i really sucks in these kind of scenes.. ab kya karoon.. mujhe mere sare update crap lagte hain..🤢

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES! 😉 😆😆
Edited by Rantaraolic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
my resolic is back...🤗🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

my resolic is back...🤗🥳


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but i am still on chapter 25 of sajda! 🤣 i am reading don't worry...aaj poora padke hi soungi! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic


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but i am still on chapter 25 of sajda! 🤣 i am reading don't worry...aaj poora padke hi soungi! 😳

okk as you wish🤣
waisey chapter 25 mein tha kya? main khud bhool gayi...🤣
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

okk as you wish🤣
waisey chapter 25 mein tha kya? main khud bhool gayi...🤣

anwar ke aadmi kaanch todke jaate hain! i am only half way yet..still reading 😆😆

plzz aage ki story mat batana 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update ri
loved the dance part
pls cont asap

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