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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Haillaa !!
Raghu mesmerized in Antara 😳
He had 4gotten that he was the one to tell her to go for Ayan's party
Yehi hota hai pyar mein
Apni Miss Kaul ke pyaar mein Ghajini ban gaya hain !!!
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
It was just beyond perfect for me...loved the way Raghu adored Antara..totally blown away by her beauty...its getting quiet interesting and i'm loving that 😉
I'm getting a feeling that something is gonna happen in the reception party...some TWIST is on its way...
Aman is upto something and he would cross his limits to hurt Antara..😡
Now what i want to see is,how Raghu saves his beautiful love from Aman's dangerous intentions..
Waiting for more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
ye kya ria!😡
itni fantastis update deti ho..aur last mein chappal ki demand krti ho!!!..😲
not fair yr...😆sry..bt hum tumhe chappal nhi de sakte🤣
its lovely update dear😳...raghu is in state of"kitna pyaara tujhe rab ne bnaya jee kare dekhta rahun.."😊
antu jaldi ye sab notice kregi...woww what a choice dresses of RED COLOUR
...party mein pahunch gaye yeda yedi😆..more surprises to come
thanks fr pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Riiiaaa ...it was again a fantabulous update... am amazed...actually main Raghu ke nazar se antara ko dekhrahi thi ...😳😉😉😉
yaar the description of Antara is realy really very nice n the way u drew Raghu's reaction 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...oyehoye ...main to laal ho gayi ...hihihihihih ...So Raghu now wanna touch her ...feel her completely ...haha ...yede ko toh yeh ahsaans hona hi tha ...ufff
loved it ...loved it ...loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Ria I read last three chapter back to back...and all are wonderful...ayaan and rachna's reception or rantara...ayaan ka gyaan...raghu ki English...dm...beera...msab kuch amazing tha...but kya tumne yaha precap nahi dia ya muje hi dikhai nahi dia...well...continue soon dear...I know long update you can't wrote fast but...fir bhi keh rahi hu tumhari fan jo hu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing!!
antu's description was awesome!!!
great work!
ty for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
here is the next update for you all... god iwhat i have written.. such a crap...🤢
please don't kill me for this crap one😭

Chapter 44

"raghu main tumhari koi class nahi le rahi hoon. Tum zara kuch der ke liye chup rahoge?!" antara said in a pleading tone. "kaye ko?! Aoun ka zuban hain.. jab chahega baat karega.. tere ko koi problem hain?!" he said. "kuch nahi... Jo man mein ayein karo.." antara said in a slightly irritating voice. "arey aap dono bas kijiye.. rachna said from side. "waisey antara tum baki logo se mili ya nahi?!!" she asked. "baki o se matlab?! Kaun kaun hain yahan?!" antara asked in surprise. "well, actually we all are here.. the whole group of our batch." ayan said. "what?!! Everyone?!!" her eyes gleamed in joy. Suddenly one hand came from behind and closed her eyes. Antara smiled as she recognized the hand. "ria!!..." she said with a huge smile and turned around and saw a girl smiling cheerfully to her. "it's not fare yaar, you caught me every time." She said. "cause I know only you can do such works yaar..." she hugged them. "so finished your reunion at last?!!" ayan teased. "ayannn!!!" both of them rolled their eyes. "hey wait for us." A bunch of girl ran towards them. "so here comes chiller party." Ayan teased again. "god!! Suchi, priya, megha,hina, haya pampi!! You all are here..." antara said with wide eyes. "as always... Waisey bhi hum inn hot and happening couple ka party kaise miss kar sakte hain... agar main nahi aoongi to sab kuch kitna bor ho jayega..." suchi said spreading her hand with a smile. "oo comedy queen!! Jyada bhao mat kha.." priya patted. "priya tu apni aunty giri bandh kar..." suchi said in irritating voice. "aunty giri!!... suchi tune toh khud apne aap ko invite kiya yahan pe... wo bhi ayan aur rachna ko blackmail kar ke.." pampz said from side. "hey pampi what's the news of your writing?!" antara asked. "arey iss sey to puch mat yaar.. iski paheeli novel nikla tha last month ko... wohi story JAAN!! Bestseller ban gayi hain..." ria said from side. "arey ria tu bhi na.." pampz was a bit embarrassed. On the other hand hina and haya was out of all conversation and their all gaze was shifted towards the new guy who was standing behind ayan and chatting with him. he was looking so handsome in red shirt and blue jeans. They were totally drooling on that guy. "hey hina and haya what happened yaar?!" suchi looked at them. "hey who is that guy?!!" they both said in a mesmerized tone looking towards raghu. "hnnn!!..." both raghu and ayan looked to the girls and all girls looked towards raghu in unison and then they noticed the handsome guy and quickly suchi, pampz, priya, hina, haya all of them started to drool on him. "hey antara who is he?!" priya asked. "yeah I forgot! Guyzz he is raghu. he came from Mumbai.. aur raghu ye mere friends hain... ye hain ria. Aur ye suchi, priya, pampz, hina aur haya..." antara introduced them all. "hiii!!!..." they all waved their hand in unison while ria's gaze was fixed to girl's mesmerized face. she sensed the fishy thing. "haan hello.." raghu said in confused voice. "god!! His voice is so sexy..." suddenly hina said from side. "hnnn!!" raghu became stunned. Suchi whisteled and said, "wow what a handsome man yaar...". On the other hand rachna and ayan were stomping there head disappointedly and raghu was feeling so odd feeling those girls greedy gaze on him. on the other hand antara and ria were giggling silently. "god!! They started again.." antara whispered. "they are never gonna change you know..." ria commented. "hey antara ye tumhari boyfriend hain kya?!" pampz asked in mesmerized voice. "boyfriend?!! No yaar.. he is just a friend and nothing else..." she said. "so antara agar hum raghu ko kuch der apne sath le jayein to tumhe koi problem to nahin yaaar?!" haya asked suddenly. "kyaaa???!!!" both rachna and ayan's eyes pooped out. maar gaye... ye kidhar aa gaya apun... ye larkiya to mere ko aise dekh rahi hain jaise kha jayegi apun ko... misscal please yaar na kahe de.. haan mat kahena...' raghu said in mind. "problem? nahin toh mujhe kyun problem hogi?!!" antara said suddenly. "oww thanks antara..." all of them said in unison and looked at raghu with dreamy eyes. "margaye yaaar..." raghu said silently. "excuse me raghu..." hina came forward and said in red face. "would you like to dance with me?!!". She was blushing like hell. "no way hinu.." suchi came forward. "raghu tum mere sath dance karoge right?!!" she said with drooling face. "arey nahi woo..." raghu scratched his face in confusion. "arey humne kya galti ki hain?!!" pampz, priya and others also came forward. All of them looked to him with blushing face and raghu was almost having sweat drops. He could manage a whole group of goons alone but this group of drooling girls seemed more dangerous. Rayan was looking at them with wide eyes and antara was giggling silently looking at raghu at that state. ria was also standing at her side and enjoying the scene. "these girls.." she commented. "arey naiii re... ye misscal inko sach bata na..." raghu said suddenly. "kya??!!" antara was a bit startled. Raghu rushed at her side and suddenly caught her around her shoulder making her face a big O. "itna jhhoot kayeko bolti hain misscal?! Bata de na apun wo... boyfriend girlfriend hain.." he said with a huge naughty grin. "what?!!!" her eyes widened. Raghu winked caught her more tightly leaving no distance between their bodies. "haan yaar itna Sharma kyun rahi hain.. sach sach bata dena ki apun tera boyfriend hain!!.. aura pun dono ek dusre se wo... kya I love you kar te hain.." he said with a smirk. "what ohh noo!!!..." every girl said in disappointment. Only ria was chewing ice cream indifferently at side and antara was a bit red and also fuming in anger in his hold. "ohh antara... why didn't you tell?! How can we manage our heartbreaks now?!!" priya said. "hey noo... it's nothing like.." antara tried to explain but ria said from side, "hey guyzz aare you blind. I understand the fact when I saw them together. Look at them, they were also wearing same color." She finished. "yeah, you are right ria... how could we miss that!!.." suchi said in low voice. "bye raghu... bye antara... have a nice time together..." at last all of them bid good bye and moved to the other side. antara jerked up and got outside of raghu's arm. "ye kyat ha?!!" she asked in anger. "to kya karta apun?!! Kyun unn bhookhi machlion ke hathon mere ko chor rahi thi?!" he sked in an irritated voice. "woo log tumse batein karna cha rahe the.. to main kya kahti ki batein mat karo... aur tumne uss logo se vachne ke liye kitna bara jhoot kahe diya ki tum mere.." she couldn't say further. "to kya huya hnnn?! Tere sar pe aasmaan toot para kya?! Ya fir tera status kam ho jayega agar tu mere jaise gundey ki girlfriend ban jayegi toh?!" he said in flow but at the next moment he regretted the words he said. Antara looked at him with bewildered eyes for a while. "ee naiii... miscall wo apun ka wo matlab naii tha... woo..." he said quickly. "chup raho..." antara said with chocked voice. "har baat mazak nahi hoti raghu... seriously I am fed up!! Tum humesha mujhe aisa kyun sochte ho??!!" her eyes were hurt and moist. "miscall meri baat to sun..." raghu said. "kuch nahi sun na hain mujhe... please akela chor do.." she said and moved at the crowd. She was hell irritated. "miscall!!..." raghu uttered slowly. "yeh ishaq nahi asaan, bas aag ka dariya hain aur doobte jana hain.." suddenly ayan said from side. raghu looked at his naughty smirk with confused face. "kya bola tune?!!..." he asked. "maine kya bola aap achi tarah se jaan te hain bhaijaan! Pyar to aap bahut karte hain aap ki miscall se, par usey kuch samajh hi nahi ataaa." Ayan said looking at antara who was busy in chatting with other girls. "ye kya anab sanab bake ja raha hain.." raghu said scratching his head in slight embarrassment. "dekhiye bhaijaan, mujhse jhoot bolke koi fayda nahi... hum toh usi din samajh gaye the jisdin aap se paheli baar mile the..sach kaheiye, pyar karte hain na aap antara se?!" he asked firmly. He didn't answered anything but let out a smile which said everything clearly. Rachna was also standing at their side. "seriously, this antara is dumb. Jab humari baat ayi thi to ye humlogo se pahele samajh gayi thi ki main aur ayan ek dusre ko like karte hain. par dekho jab apni baat ayi toh isey kuch samajh hi nahi aa rahi hain.." rachna said. "bhaijaan... aap ne kuch kaha kya usey?!" ayan asked. "naii yaar abhi too kuch naii baka.. " raghu said in confusion. : "bhaijaan! Jabtak pyar ka izhaar nahi karoge too samne wale ko kaise pata chalega. Directly mat kahiye par thora bahut ishara to de hi sakte ho..jaise koi sayari hi suna dijiye useey.. " ayan said. "ee dekh ayan.. mere ko ye sab sayari wayari nahi ata yaar.. ekbaar machmach ki girlfriend ke liye sayari likha to wo larki machmach ko itna chppal mari ki bechara do din tak bistar se naii uth paya." Raghu said. "well, to sayari cancel... par abhi toh aap ja ke antara ko manaiyee... tabtak hum kuch sochte hain.." rachna said. "sochte hain?! ab tum dono ke dimag mein kya khichri pak rahi hain?!" raghu asked. "kuch nahi aap jaiye antara ke pass." Ayan said. Raghu moved to the crowd. "seriously yaar we have to do something. Antara united us and it's now our turn to do something for her." rachna said. "Definitely!! That's what I was thinking all these days. You know na.. that dumbo chipkali!! And that guy really feels for her, it's clear from his eyes. The way he looks at antara... abtoh kuch na kuch to karna hi parega.." ayan said.

Precap: she blinked with a confused frown looking at his hand which was postured to her. "kya kaheti hain miscall?! Ho jayein?!!" he winked at her. she smiled and lift her hand.

ps: okk suchi, priya, hina, pampz.. and others please don't kill me for this update... suchi ne idea diya ki main sab ko party pein invite karoon... please no chappal strictly.. and specially hina yaar.. sorry if i hurt anyone... i don't have any intensions to hurt anyone...😭

please koi galti ho toh maaf kar dena..

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
res unres
ATLAST ME FIRST...
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
what a mast update Ria and what a funny update ...😆😆😆😆 ... loved it n enjoyed it completely ... haha ... yaar tune hum sabko bhukhi machli bana diya ?????? but agar party mein yeh Raghu sach mein mil jaye na toh ...😳😳😳
Antara chillake bolegi ke yeh mera boyfriend hai ...tabhi hamari group uski nahi sunnewala... hum sa to Raghu ko kidnap hi karke le jayenge yaar ...
and what did u say ... Pampi ka book Jaan best seller?????? ...LOLLLZZZ haste haste pet dard ho gaya ...
oh my God Ria ...really thanx atleast FF mehi sahi Raghu se mulakat to hui ...chalo yehi sochke dilko chain mil gaya ...in Reality yeh to kabhi nhi honewala 😭
Suchi aur Hinu ka halat to sabse buri thi Raghu ko dekh ke ...lolllzzz... but Ria this is not fare haanh ...tu khud bhi drool karti hai na Raghu pe ... aur story mein sirf icecream chus rahi thi ???? ye galat bat hai ...chup chup ke tubhi drool kar rahi thi for sure ...haha
Overall it was a wonderful funny and entertaing update dear and am eager to know how our beloved Raghu Antu ko propose karta hai ...and then Antu ka out of the world Reaction...u already made me a PAMPIRE ... pata nahi Ria tera story aur Raghu ke pyar mein main kya se kya ban jayun ...😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by pampz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u 🤗
ria!!!!!!😊
mindblowing update dear!👏
MAINE KHUD KO INVITE KIYA BLACKMAIL KRKE...OMG!!!!😆
BHUT ENJOY KIYA RAGHU KO PARESHAANI MEIN DALKE...😉😆
not fair yr...khud to chup chap maze le rahi thi...aur hum sabko bhooki machli bna dala...😆
bt mujhe bada maza aya yr...😃
antu phir ho gayi naraz..raghu ne gf.bf jo bol diya...😆
thanks fr pm...😊


if any one got hurt with this idea..jo mere dimag mein aaya tha..i AM EXTREMELY SORRY FOR THAT..PRIYU,HINA,HAYA,PAMPZ😊.
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Ria let me hug u yaara 🤗 🤗
Kia mast update di...
Hina aur main...
Hahhahahah...
No chappals..,
Meri taraf se toh thumbs up.. 👍🏼
Maza agaya...
And suchi mast idea of urs...
Ok to the update...
It was amazing as always...
I love your speed...
Fascinating...
Made my day...
Ayaan ne kuch toh kiya...
Raghu kay andar propose karnay ka jazba dala...
Precap is intresting...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me..
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago

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