RaNtara FF:- Meri Aashiqui (Updated Chapter 20-page 46) - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
love your writing
continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww raghu ne satya ko pita 😆 bara maza aa
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update dear!😊
satya to raghu se maar khate hue kitna achcha lgta hai...🤣
mm too funny😆...rantara hid in temple and satya is in search for both😲.
now how will they go back to basti
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very lovely update

That Phattu what crap, he is Shetty's boss LOL. Nice Rantara's moment

Thanks for the PM continue and update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love your update. uff MM is so funy "CHUTNEY KON BANEGA"...lol
uff Raghu got hurt and antara hurt also.i love ur update
thank u dear for pm and not please pm me ur next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh ...this is our Raghu ... expert in fighting ...the way u described through MM ..its really praiseworthy... lovely ... i loved the whole chapter ...waiting to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello all...
The next chapter is up...

Chapter 12:-
As satya left, raghu left antara.
Raghu:- "lagta hai woh satya chala gaya. Tu theek hai!!?"
Antara(in pain):- "h ha haan... "
Raghu's phone starts vibrating. It was MachMach.
Raghu:- "haan bol!"
MachMach:- "bhai woh satya sala udhar ich hai!! Apun log ayai kia tujhay aur us yedi ko laine".
Raghu smiles at hearing the name machmach gave her. He turns to look at her but as it was dark he wasnt able to find her.
MachMach:- "bhai tu hai wahan?? Hello hello."
Raghu:- "abay oo yehen hoon.. Himalaya par nahin hoon jo tu mantriyon ki tarah cheek raha hai subah honay mein kitna waqt hai abhi."
MachMach:- "bhai abhi toh raat kay 11:45 huay hain."
Raghu:- "tu hai kahan?? Aur satya kahan hai??"
MachMach:- "bhai apun toh us mandir say door aik purana building hai us mein hai aur woh satya us mandir ki siri(stair) par baitha shetty ko bhaga raha hai".
Raghu:- "hmmm sun main aur antara yehen hain... Satya jaldi himat nahin haray ga".
MachMach:- "lekin bhai tu??"
Raghu:- "samajh machmach.. Apun toh satya say nipat lay ga magar agar akela hota... Sath aik larki hai.. Tu aik kam kar basti kisi ko bhaij kar sab bata day.. Aur aunti ko bata daina apun ko yeh mil gai.."
MachMach:- "bhai tu us kashmir ki chura..."
Raghu:- "MachMach..."
MachMach:- "bhai tu us antara kay sath puri raat nahin reh payai ga".
Raghu:- " woh tu mujh par chos day."
MachMach:- "bhai phone band kar satya andar ja raha hai lagta usne tujhay sun lia.."
Hearing this raghu's eyes widened. He in a jiff finished his call and turn towards antara. Antara who was wincing in pain. Heard some footsteps. She stoop and was about to call him when he came abd stood next to him.
There was a dim moonlight antara saw raghu and they had an eyelock. Raghu was staring at those two beautiful hazels. Their were so many things in those two hazels. Antara was all lost looking at him. It was like the depict something else about them.Suddenly the door opens. They both come back to reality. Antara's hand starting to shake in fear. Antara was folding the palm which got hurt about a while ago.
As satya stepped in he saw a room in dark. He was searching for something when his phone rang.
Satya:- "haan babloo kia khabar hai"
Babloo:- "bhai woh machmach log wapis agayai... Lagta hai raghu kahin chup gaya aur surakshit hai".
Satya:- "sa** yeh raghu hamesha bach jata hai theek hai phine rakh."
Satya went out and ordered shetty to go to nearby areas and look for them.
Satya left. Raghu released a sigh. Whereas antara sat folding her knees. She was very tired and her palm was paining. She dug her face in her legs. Raghu saw this. He also sat down.
Raghu:- "sa** kahan phans gayai aj... Aik toh bhook bhi lagi hai aur yahan hai bhi kuch nhn... Ay tu kuch bol na".
Antara:- "chup karo tum.. Yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai... ".
Raghu:- "meri wajah se... Danda tu ne mara tha.. Main ne??"
Antara:- "danda mara q tha... Na tum us se larai letay na rasika roti naujhay woh karna parta".
Raghu:- "tu tujhay kia zarorat thi?? Woh meri behan hai na... ".
Antara:- "ab please chup.. Aur sojao..
Mujhay neend aa rahi hai. Pata nhn ghar mein sab kia kaise hon gain".
Raghu:- "oye mandir mein tu hai.. Ghar walay nahin.. Ab soja.. Subah wapis jana hai".
Antara closed her eyes and slept. Raghu was missing his MO badly. He was in his thoughts of family and basti when he felt a heavy weight on his left shoulder. He moved and saw antara sleeping. He was about to wake and move her when he saw her. She was looking beautiful, an innocent child who was tired of playing sleeping quietly. A smile appeared on his lips.
Raghu:- "yedi".
After a while raghu also dozed off.
The next morning sun came up. The room lit up. Raghu opened his eyes and saw antara still sleeping. His phone vibrated. It was machmach.
MachMach:- "bhai pitch clear hai chaka mar".
Raghu:- "haan ruk apun araha.."
Raghu disconnets the call. And wakes antara. Antara was tired and weak.
Antara:- "hmm kia kar rahay ho?"
Raghu:- "chal uth".
They step out and see a clear place. There was nobody.
Raghu and Antara started to run.
Antara:- "raghu chodo mera hath. Mujhay pain ho raha".
Raghu:- "chup.. Woh satya ajayai ha bs bhag . Basti kareeb hai bs".
Antara was freeing her hand and running also.
They reach near the basti and saw shetty sitting near it. Antara faints due to pain and weakness
Raghu sees this and calls MachMach. MachMach didnt picked the call.
Raghu:- "ay yedi uth yeh sonay ka time nahin chal".
He touches her cheeks when he felt she is having fever. Raghu got nervous. He thought of taking her inside. He picked antara up and start to move towards the basti. Suddenly a van comes and stops infront of them.

Precap:-
Antara:- "koi kuch nahin karay ga... Samjhay kuch nahin".
Raghu turns and see antara standing.
Raghu:- "ay yedi tu chup kar.. Main us satya ko nahin choron ga.. Us ne phir panga lia".
Antara:- "yehi toh problem hai... Tum us par waar kartay raho gay aur woh tum par.. Yeh masla kabhi nahin khatam hosakta q keh tum dono honay nahin detay".

Updates done..
Such a boring update...
This is te crappiest update i gave..
Do like and comments.
Regards,
Haya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it wasnt boring... Indeed was a
nice update...plzzz continue soon... :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow haya osam update
loved it soo much
precap hmm and the van omg
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting update

Thanks for the PM continue i want to know who is in this van

Update ASAP

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