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Ammara2005

@Ammara2005

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Posted: 12 years ago

I think do dil ek jaan is a perfect example of how a hit tv show can be completely ruined by stubborn writers...I would not mention names but i hope you guys know which writer i am talking about...ddej had hit start,with unconventional lead pair which was accepted and loved by audience.The characters and dialogues were cherished.Later as the story developed alot of hasty decions were made by the team which took away from the show rather than adding.Following are some examples...

1.The realization and confession were too quickly.

2.A young daya mai!...the characterization of daya mai was a FAIL...they should have built it up as a lady don

3.The supporting cast was not fully utilized...Mama ji wasnt there half the time...Mami ji,Appa,Mom...

4.Ajji was such a strong character...never seen again

5.The beauty of Romance was lost with premarital sex along with family audiences...trp went down

6.Rukhsana entry didnt add much shine as all the time she was secretly in love with Raghu

7.Raghu was shown weak infront of daya mai all the time...but also he was no longer the old Raghu...who was strong willed...the dialogues were missing...

8.the editor and director didnt add to make the show more dramatic and visually attractive for audience

9.Too many local BTS and on location shoot videos destroyed interest

10.Satya Antara marriage...it was abrupt and like many previous shows...it was against the strong character of Antara

11.Rasika loved Raghu...no scenes of her disapproval of wedding... no drama nothing

12.The terrorist...ghayab!!?

13.Boring sequences after marriage...

14.Stubborn writer...so many fan requests but rude replies and "stick to vision" response...now see Mr what you did?

Nikita Sharma and Ayaz did their best but its the whole team and audience response that decides the fate

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Capucine

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Posted: 12 years ago

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So true they spoilt the show our old rantara was 1001 times better than the present rantara
Before we had young adultes now i see impulsives teenagers

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Hina Kamran

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Posted: 12 years ago

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this is what i was looking for dea thnks and lvoe ur post

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Liana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I think love realization and confession not so quickly it was right time . Just after that confession they start rush . I would liked if they are having time for their love . For some joke a little bit letting to grow love , then DM after realize they are in love . Satya entering very early . (I understand he must enter to show but not like that ) That is really disgusting thing what they are doing . Ruksana is there not needed if really to tell . Marriage track too not needed with Satya and Antara . Just would loved to see how Raghu and Satya try to win Antara . More needed Mach Mach who will questioning Raghu . He is the right best friend who would ask any detail about this pomb blast . I think then Raghus character not that much ruined . I would liked if Raghu really him self later some time telling for Antara how and what happened or show letter for her . That will been more beautiful when Antara get know Raghu is not at all fault . Anyway i dont like any revenge in serial . Just disappointed with this rush . What cv and ph thinking this time ? With all other things i am agreed 😊

Edited by liana2304 - 12 years ago

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.Suchi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ye sab ham jaan chuke hain jaan dekhte dekhte aur news sunte sunte

nice post so true yr😒

kabada ho gaya show ka😔

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SweetiePie25

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing post.. every thing said in ur post is true...

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smrite

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Posted: 12 years ago

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absolutely makers have ruined such a nice lovestory in horrible way current track is so bad,characters are copletely changed satya has become main hero,raghu is completely sidelined,raghu n antara's lovestory is no where

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priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: smrite
absolutely makers have ruined such a nice lovestory in horrible way current track is so bad,characters are copletely changed satya has become main hero,raghu is completely sidelined,raghu n antara's lovestory is no where

no more rantara love stry

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SweetiePie25

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Posted: 12 years ago

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