Love story of GAngster-OS last part@pg 21 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update rachna
but why u brought satya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
rICHU AS usual a beautiful update, wo satya ki satyanash hojaye.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesum dear wow nice story loved both parts sry u know I was lil bsy so ab comment kar rahi hu
vese awesum pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
sorry for the late reply richu
loved the update and omg e told her everything
DCP satya hahaha best thing
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Satya police inspector 😆 wow antu helped raghu in running nyc update yar pls update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Hey Richu
really loved it
yahaan bi satya
but ACP ke roop mein😆
waana read more
plz continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
AWESOME UPDATE!!!
OMG!!!! DCP Satya 🤣 It ws d bst part. Luved it a lot.
Raghu confessed his crime infront of Antara. It ws way too sad.
Antara herself ws going to call d police bt when they came she fled him. Aww she hs fallen fr him.
D story is becoming vry interesting. So waiting fr d nxt prt.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Part 3

At ATS Headquarter
Satya- MS. Antara kaul aap hame batey ge apne raghunath ko koi bhaga diya
Antara- pata nahi
Satya- apko pata hai ki Kashmir ke bomb blast mein apke parivar ki maut hui thi who bomb raghunath ne supply kiya tha
Antara- mujhe malum hai
Satya- apko malum hai? Phir bhi apne usko bhaga diya. Koi mS. Kaul apko kanoon ka darr nahi hai kya
Antara- kon sa kanoon agar apko pata tha phir apne usko giraftar koi nahi kiya tha aaj tak
Satya- hamare pass koi sabot nahi hai
Antara- oh to aap mujme apna sabot khoj rahe hai lekin maaf kijye ga mujhe apki madad karne ka sauk nahi
Satya in angry tone- aap kya kya rahi hai ek criminal ki madad kar rahi hai.
Antara- who criminal mera bhagwan hai
Satya- pagal ho gayi tum antara
Antara- shayade aap thik keh rahe hai koiki jab insaan dil aur dimag ki ladai mein fasta hai to pagal ho jata hai
Satya- dil aur dimag. Yani apka dimag uske khilaf hai aur dil uske saath
Antara given him luk and closed her eyes.
Satya to lady constable- take care of her and dhayn dena raghu isko choden ki koshish zaroor karega
Satya at home minister office
DAYA MAI home minister of maharastra
DM- so satya pls tell me what is the progress of your casr regarding raghunath
Satya- mam actually he ran away but we have arrested Ms. Anatra KAul
DM- what is the use of that girl in this story
Satya- she is Jaan of Raghunath. For the last 5 yrs he is helping her unconditionally .
DM-so?
Satya- mam with the help of antara we can reach raghu
DM- Mr. satay I need result and you are having 1 week in your hand otherwise you are suspended
Satya given saluate to DM and leave the office

At ATS office.
Inspector 1- uff aaj raat to ek second ki liye aankh nahi jhapka sakte pata nahi kab who raghu aa jaye apni mashooqa ko lene
Inspector 2- haan yaar aur agar hamse galti hui to satya sir hame chodege nahi
Suddenly there was bomb blast outside the office and all officers and inspectors start running towards the blast area

Raghu enter antara lock up and cover by MM and other men
Antara- raghu tum yahan koi aaye tumhari jaan khatre mein hai
Raghu- sahi kaha meri jaan yahan khatre mein hai
Rantara has eye lock and mahi moment
MM_ bahi samay zayada nahi hai , bhabhi ko le kar niklo.
Raghu- antara mere saath chalo
Antara was thinking some thing
RAghu- mujh par bharosa rakh
Antara given hand to him .suddenly satya enter the room
Satya- so aaj raghu tum mere samne ho aur aaj hi mein tumhara khel khatam karo ga and he point gun towards raghu and shoot him
Antara come in front of raghu and she gey herself in hand
MM-bhai tum bhabhi ko le kar nikalo hum yaha sambhalete hai. MM start firing too and raghu fired at tubeligt and there was darkness
After some time when satya manage to have in that room there was no person . he hit his hand on wall and says raghu tum aaj to jeet gaye lekin aagey meri jeet hai.aur antara tumhra yeh pyaar tum par bhari pade ga

At Raghu Place
MM_ bhai dr kolata ho bhabhi ke haath se goli nikalna padega
Raghu- nahi tuk jaye koiki police ne pure Mumbai ked r ko alert kar diya hoga
M_ phir bhai
Raghu- MM tum ek kaam karo chaku le kar aao aur saath mein candle bhi
Raghu come near to antara and says antara tujhe kuch nahi hoga
Antara- raghu bhagwan kare jaise aaj jaise tumhare paap ki saaza mujhko diya hamesha tumhare paap ki saaza mujhko de
Raghu- antara dard se pagal ho gayi hai kya . kya bol rahi hai . agar ab ek kharoch bhi apne upar aane diya to kasam khuda ki mein is duniya mein aag laga doga
Antara - aur tumne kitne chane walo ko alag kiya raghu to hum kaise mil sakte hai .
RAghu see antara with teary eyes
MM- bhai yeh lo bhabhi ki goli nikal do mein saath mein dawa bhi laya ho
Raghu- antara tumhe dard hoga , lekin pls chilana nahi koiki is khamoshi mein tumhari awwaj gonji gi jo shayad hamre security ke liye accha nahi hoga
Antara nodded her head
Raghu goli nikalna start kiya. Pain was unbearable for antara she was about to screem but raghu put his lip on her lip so that she don't scream. Raghu kiss her and side by side he was taking out her goli.

P.S hope guys u like it . I hope this update may make you little bit happy

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely richu!! ur all os always makes us happy😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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richu last scene was awsome... kya baat hain yaar...dard ki nayi dawai kiss therapy...😆
i love it re total action packed update... lovely yaar... and u know it's ur best work⭐️
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