RanTara SS: Naino Ki Bhasha Samjhe Na..COMPLETED - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 6 (last part)
Antara's dialogues: Pink color
Raghu's dialogues: Blue color
Other's dialogues: mixed colours

Heyy guys..here is the next update of the OS..please do read and leave ur comments..Please forgive me if there are some typos or grammar mistakes..i've not read it again...
Happy Reading... :)

It was a big day for RaNtara..today they are getting married..and they were so desperate to get so..that's why their parents fixed direct wedding instead of engagement...
they were super happy...the house was decorated beautifully..and the whole environment was so pleasant.. everybody was preparing the bride n groom for haldi... they were told to not to meet once the haldi is done..n ANtara also told raghu to do so.. n he was following all commands of her would be wife..but when parents them not to meet after haldi..he was being restless...
he wanted to see her once...

their rooms were adjacent..still it was so difficult to enter in...his friends and sid came to call him for haldi..and they all dragged him so he won't get chance to peep in her room..
Antara's friends also did the same...

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they both were sitting in front of each other in the hall and all their relatives were applying haldi on both of them... they din't get a single chance to look at each other..
Raghu was mumbling "look at me antara..plzzz"...barely audible by others..
n all his friends made his fun... for all his mumbling...

finally Rantara were sitting and able to see each other..and everybody was dancing...
Antara saw Raghu.he was so happy..Raghu saw her..she was blushing..n he could see those crimson red cheeks behind that yellow turmeric colour...
they both had an eye contact and raghu winked at her.. she blushed more n lowered her gaze..
he smiled.. and kept staring at her..waiting for her to look at him again..n she did..n when she found him gazing at her..he again lowered her eyes..
and asked her sister to take her to her room as she is feeling cold..

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Raghu was sitting in the mandap and doing some pre-wedding rituals...after a few minutes Antara arrived in the hall with her sister and friends..
Raghu was busy..but when he heard some giggles he turned and looked at Antara..although he was not able to see her face..but he still kept staring.. Sid patted on his shoulder twice..
hmmm??
dude.. u can keep looking at her later...first focus here only..
n he turned back... After a few minutes..raghu got up for jaymala..and Antara reached in man dap..
raghu kept looking at her..but she din't look above..
Pandit ji asked antara to garland raghu...and she was to do the same when his friends lift him above..
It was being difficult for her...Raghu saw that..and said..
"oye don't do that" he stopped them and asked antara...miss call now u can.."
Antara made him wear the garland..and his friends whistled for them..
so he did the same..
then completed all other rituals..
once he put the vermillion and make her wear mangalsutra..he kissed her forehead..
congrats.... she blushed and everybody was shocked... "haaawww!!!"

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It was 8 PM..everybody has done their dinner and most of the guests have already left..now only family members were left..
Raghu was restless as it's been 5-6 hours that their marriage rituals were over..and he hasn't seen Antara after that..
she had her dinner in her room only...

he called Simran..
heyy di..
hello dulhe raja..
oho di..it's been 6 hours when i was dulhe raja..
tell me na..how long will it take..
what?
arey i hvn't seen her..how long will u guys take to make her ready..
what r u talking about..she is in her room only..she was very tired..so we made her sleep..
WHAT???
yes!!

ok now you should also take some..it's very late now.. we all are tired..and we also have to sleep..
good night..and she cut the call...

after a few minutes...Raghu came upstairs and knocked on ANtara's room..
Antara...are you in there??..
but he din't get any response..he tried to open the door but it was locked from inside..
he was burning in anger..he brushed his hairs with his hand... and walked towards his room... he opened the door and came inside.
it was quite dark here... "it was my wedding today and no body cares about me... whole house is decorating so beautifully and look at the lightings in hall..n here..no one has even switched on a bulb...huh!! he was mumbling..
he was walking inside..and closed the door when suddenly whole room was lightened... it was decorated with red roses, red balloons...and multicolour lightings...
n there she was sitting in the centre of his bed covered in a red dupatta...
a big smile appeared on his lips..and he was about to jump on the bed..but he stopped and waked slowly towards the bed..while removing his dupatta from his neck...
he threw to on the bed..and looked at her...she wasn't looking at him... he sat on the bed in front of her..and leaned a bit on his right arm..
and tried to look at her...Antara... she cuddled a bit..and he smiled...
he got up and checked himself in mirror and came back..
he sit near her and lifted her veil...and he gasped...
she was looking so beautiful...hey eyes were still glued on her hands placed on her knees...
he lifted her face holding her chin.. "you're looking lovely.." she blushed..and he moved forward kissed her forehead...
he took her hands in his..and kissed on both hands...then he kissed her knuckles..
and placed her right hand below his left shoulder and moved forward..and kissed her one eye..
I've waited for this moment for so long.. and finally you are here..sitting in front of me..as Mrs. Antara Raghunath Naik...
she shivered with his touch..so removed her hand...and placed it back on her knees...
but he took her hand again and placed it near his shoulder again..and kissed her another eye...
How are you feeling Antara.. I know you too must be very happy today...
he slid his right arm on her waist and pulled her a little...
i was dying to see u in this dress and this colour since i fell in love with you...
and removed her veil completely...and left it there only..
now he could see her face clearly...he first removed her maang teeka while still holding her in his grip..
then he loosened the dori of her necklace..and removed them,..he removed her other jewellery too..
he leaned over her more and made her lying on the bed..but not completely...he loosened his grip on her waist..and so she clutched his collar..

he removed her nose ring..and kissed on her jaw line.. then he removed her earrings and kissed her earlobe..
she was melting with his touch and that he could see with the grip on his collar..
he made her lying completely on the bed..and got up a little..so he could see her shivering on bed..he bended over her stomach and kissed her navel..
and licked her skin...she moaned and brushed her hand in his hairs
he smiled while kissing and that she could feel on her skin..
he got up and roamed her fingers on her arm...he leaned over her and covered her... she turned aside..and he removed her dupatta and threw it to other side..
he opened the dori of choli and slid her one sleeve below..and kissed on her shoulder...
he turned her to his side...her eyes were closed...he took her right hand and placed it behind his neck and leaned over her..and kissed her both eyes..
she started roaming her hand on his neck...
he bended more.,,,while sliding her sleeve more and kissed her collarbone...he moved her face to her left side and kissed on her throat...
so she kissed on his throat...he smiled with her touch..and made her sit a little...and pulled her in himself.. she hugged him and he showered wet kissed on her neck...she brushed her hands in his hairs and pushed her more for kisses..
he slid her another sleeve more..and kissed slow her shoulder..
he opened her buttons and slid her top to front... she was melting in his arms..and she was feeling very shy.. so he turned her.. he bended down and started showering kisses on her back..
then he opened the button of his sherwani..and looked at her...
she was feeling shy in touching him...so he removed it by himself...
now he was topless..she couldn't safe to look at him..so he lifted her face holding her chin..and kissed on her nose tip.. look at me jaan...
she looked at him..and he smiled..she immediately lowered her gaze...
he removed her top..made her lying on the bed..n came on top of her..
he kissed her collarbone and licked her skin...he started roaming his hands on her softness and kissed above her b**..
and slides her straps down...he opened her locks in one pull and removed her b**... he started showering wet kisses all over her top... gave her love bites on her collarbone and kissed on her navel while holding hee bosoms in his hands... she was breathing hard and when he gave her a love bite on her navel..she hissed in pain and moaned his name...
she clutched his hair and pushed him for more..so he kissed that bite to sooth the pain...
he held his face and pulled her above and kissed on his forehead..and slid his hand below her waist..lift her up a little..he held her face with his another hand and leaned over her face...he kissed her near her lips as if asking for the permission..she slid her arms over his...
and he took her lower lip into his...she shivered and rubbed his shoulder...
he he then took her upper lip into his..and sucked it..
he repeated this twice..so she did.. they both started kissing each other..Antara was roaming her hands on his back..while he roamed his hand on her softness...
He bit her lips and she gasped..he licked the juice and entered his tounge in her mouth..
they both were exploring each other's mouth...and after a few minutes..they broke the kiss for some air..
they looked at each other and smiled..as it was their first kiss... they looked into each other;s eyes..and kissed again very lovingly..which soon turned into a passionate one...
he again sucked her lips and bit her lower lip..and teased her bosoms with his hands..she gasped and pulled him while holding his hairs..
he pulled her...and she bumped in his hard chest... "i love you"...
he touched her br*** and took one in his mouth..he started kissing her and licked her n***
he gave her love bite over there..and she moaned in pleasure..he turned and took her on top of him.. love me ANtara... she hid himself in his arms..and rested her head on his chest...
he stroked his hands in her hairs and roamed on her back..
she got up a little and kissed on his chest...he leaned his head back and gave her more access..she kissed on his throat and licked his skin...
n she came to his shoulder and she too tried to gave him a love bite and he laughed... he held her from her neck and pulled her above..and kissed her throat... and then collar bone..
she freed herself from his grip and kissed all over his top...
soon he removed all their barriers and consummated their wedding...

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they both were lying on the bed..snuggling into each other...
raghu kissed on her shoulder.."Antara"..
hmmm...you're very beautiful...she shied and turned and hid herself in his arm...
he pecked on her lips..I have got something for you...he said...
what?...wait..!! he moved a bit and she covered herself with the sheet..he picked her sherwani lying on a corner of bed.and took a box out from it's pocket..
he gave it to ANtara...Antara opened it..it was a locket in oval shape.. she looked at it and then him..he opened the locket and showed it to her..
it was their pictures in the locket..she smiled and hugged him..he too hugged her..and pecked her lips..
he made her wear that locket...she touched it.. "thank you...i loved it.."
he smiled and took her in his embrace... an promised her to always make her smile like this..and they both made love to each other for whole night and slept in each other's embrace..

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heyy guys.. as i told u those ahem ahem things are not my cup of tea.. first i thought to write consummation part..but i din't..bcz first i can't write it..n second it's banned on IF..
some writers do write..but officially it's not allowed on IF..
i tried to write some of such scenes..but as u can see it came out pathetic.. lol..
so sorry guys...

please leave ur comments/sugg/questions..please hit the like button..
thanks to all readers of this OS..loads of luv...
-akki

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Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
bahut accha hai dead devil yaar...i am waiting eagerly 4 last part
Edited by nnks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG so romantic cute 😳😳
loved the last part and finally they became do dil ek haan
this was the best story ever yaar👏😳

Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sharmili Antara 😉
It was awesome!
Happy Ending..
Thnkq for d PM
Very well written!
Edited by .Shivam. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nnks

bahut accha hai dead devil yaar...i am waiting eagerly 4 last part

thanks a lot dear.. =]
and this was the last part only.. :)
this os is done yaara... 😳😭😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic fabulous end
u wrote the consummation well
who says u suck in those scenes ?
please write another story soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...superb☺️☺️..thanx 4 the nice OS akki
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. Writing very well . Thank you . Loved it 😊

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