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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok dear whenever u get time u give update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous ff! read all parts together...loving it!
do continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^ thanks a lot dear..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey guys here is the 9th part of the FF... do read and leave ur comments..
i personally like this update most..
Happy Reading.. :)

Part 9- my birthday gift to my dear wifey...

it was 11 PM... Antara was doing some work.. actually she was trying to be awake... but suddenly she made an O face when she saw that Raghu has switched off the lights of his side...
you're sleeping..??
yeah!! i am quite tired.. n tomorrow i have to leave early for office.. we have a meeting...
"you really want to sleep now..."
yes!! antara...
and he actually dozed off... she got angry...,..
after an hour.. finally clocked ticked at 12... and she wished herself happy birthday.. she was awake thinking of.. might be he is just pretending to sleep... he will wake up at 12 and will wish me birthday... but he din't...

she too dozed off after few minutes...she was very angry with him...
how much she was excited for her birthday... she checked refrigerator, his room, cupboard so many times only to confirm if he had brought cake for her.. but she was only disappointed..
forget about the cake.. he din't even wish her...

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she woke up in morning.. she got some phone calls and messages from her friends and relatives...
Raghu's parents and sister also called her... she was busy on phone in morning.. but she wasn't happy...
"he is not getting his stuffs at time.. still he din't notice why m late today.. why m busy... why m getting all these calls...aaarrrggghhh!!!!"
nnnddd he left for the office... what the hell????

uff Antara... may be he wants to give u some surprise in evening...don't be so impatient..he never forgot ur bday...
but still she was restless...but then she told herself... that they are not like other husbands wives that he will give her some surprises on her bday..
they already hv many...

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she came back from the college early.. she wasn't feeling good there.. she was missing him.. she din't know why...
she loves him.. but now she doesn't loose herself in front of him.. but what was happening today...
she was thinking about him only... "did he really forget my birthday..."..."no he din't..he never did..."... "he is just teasing me.."


she finally stopped thinking about all this..and got busy in some stuffs...
she made some of her favt dishes today.. after a few hours..she heard the doorbell ...she checked the time.. it was 7 PM..he was back from his office...
she opened the door and passed a very sweet smile expecting a b'day wish from him..
"Hi..." and he came inside..."Hi??"
"wow... seems like today u hv cooked something very good.. " she took his bag and smiled... he too smiled.. he loosened his tie and threw it on sofa...
and look at you...you're wearing saaree... aaahhhaaann.. you're looking very beautiful.. she blushed and lowered her gaze...
today is some special day kya??? she looked at him...or you going on some date...and he laughed out...
she got irritated... and picked the tie... she stood there only and kept staring at him as if she will eat him right away...
"what??" he asked frowning his brows...
she patted her feet on floor and walked towards their room... she kept his stuffs in room properly.. he took off his coat and sat on the sofa...
"Antara... m very hungry today.. i din't had my lunch..." he said while removing his shoes...
so?? she came out of the room and asked raising her one brow..
so??? he looked at her in shock..
yeah!! so?? she folded her hands...
so plz give me something to eat...he said with smile..
u rly think that after whatever u did.. i will give u anything...she said and turned...
what did i do??
she turned and looked at him.. she pointed a finger on him.. "u...noo.. actually u din't do anything..."
Antara??
yes!!
what are you saying.. plz give me something.. m very hungry...
she just walked away...
arey!! why r u mad at me.. tell me na what i did...
u know what.. the problem is.. u don't do anything... she came back and said...
u just come.. throw your belongings on sofa and just sat there and ask for something to eat...she kept yelling at him waving her hands in air...
that's it...she showed her hands to him...
good!! u just sit there..and don't do anything...YOU!!! YOU!!...uuuggghhh!!!!

she was about to leave... when he held her hand.. wrapping in her saree pallu...
she again tried to walk away...but he held her wrist tightly and got up from the sofa...
he walked towards her and stood just behind her...he slid his hand on her arm and held her from behind... she tried to make her freed from his grip but he held her tightly...
now she could feel his proximity... she felt his hot breath on her neck and a shiver ran through her spine with the touch of his cold hand on her warm body...

"what do you want me to do Antara...hmmm???"
she din't say anything..she was just loosing herself again...
is that why you're wearing this sexy saree...hmmm??? he said while pulling her more towards him...
her eyes got widened..she made an O face... she immediately pushed him back.. and looked at him with angry glares...
he was laughing so hard.. he just sat on the sofa...she was fully irritated by now...
you won't get anything.. not now.. not even in dinner...
then why have you cooked such a tasty food.. i can smell from here itself...
she din't reply..and walked towards the kitchen...
tell me antara... hv u called someone for dinner...if u hv then let me know.. i'll also go somewhere..so u won't get disturbed...
let me suggest u... "GO TO HELL"...
he laughed and went to their room...
he took his clothes and went to the washroom...

he came after 15 minutes... she was already in the room.. she placed some food for him on the table.. and sat on the bed..
today he was in full mood to tease her.. so he broke two buttons of his kurta.. and came out wearing his pyjama and vest...
she looked at him and kept staring.. he saw her and covered himself with his hands...
"arey at least u should tell me.. if u're here..."
she just ignored him...he thought that this trick din't work.. so he gave his kurta to her and said... "can u plz fix this.." and gave buttons to her...
he then saw food on the table.. and smiled..
he brushed his hands in his hairs.. and sat on the chair...aaahhh!!! it's osm...
Antara...??
hmmm?? she thought he will praise the food...
i know m very hot...bt will u plz stop checking me out and plz fix those buttons...
she threw his kurta on bed... "if u din't stop right bow...u'll see worst of me..."
i know.. i know antara... he gulped some water... "u're veeerrry bad lady.."
he continued with his food... she looked at him...
see.. ur luvly husband was hungry.. n u din't even give him the food.. he said while having that delicious food that his wife cooked for him...

she was looking at him angrily.. and he was laughing.. she gave him his kurta once she was done and asked him if he needs something else..
he nodded in no... and she came out of the room...

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It was 11 PM.. RanTara had their dinner.. she changed her dress in anger.. and slipped in her quilt.. he too layer beside her..
she was very angry.. but she din't want to fight with him.. he was laughing today... what else she wanted... this is the only thing she wanted to see... he was happy today...
but she was little sad too... she was lying on the bed staring at the ceiling... Raghu was reading some book...so she was awake too...

she turned and a lone tear escaped from her eyes... "he din't remember it at all..." it's been half an hour.. she was just laying like this.. looking at blank...
suddenly raghu's phone vibrated... she din't turn.. but she got worried.. who called him so late..
Raghu looked on the screen and a smile appeared on his face.. he got up from the bed.. and went into balcony...
Antara saw him... "where r u going..?? it's very cold outside.. sit here..." she said less with concern n more with irritation because of a phone call in late night...

but he din't come... so she again turned.. after 2-3 minutes.. he came and sat behind her... he patted on her shoulder.. she turned and looked at him...
"it's for u.." hmm??
he just forwarded his mobile to her.. she din't look at the screen and said hello..hearing the voice from other side.. she got up and sat on the bed..
it was her dad...he wished her b'day and her other family members too wished her.. she was very happy... her eyes were wet..and tears were rolling on her cheeks.. her mom told her that it was raghu who was calling them since morning and convinced her father to call her...he knew that there was not much communication between them...

she looked at him while talking to her mom.. asking so many questions and thanking him with her teary eyes.. he only smiled in reply...
once the call was cut.. she looked at him.. and hugged him immediately... he tried to pull her back as she was crying.. but she din't leave him... he caressed her hairs and patted on her head...
"Ssshhh!!"
u did remember it...
ummhmm...
she hit him on his chest... why din't u wish me then??
because i din't hv ur gift at that time...
he pulled her out from the hug.. wiped her tears with his thumb.. and kissed her forehead.. she closed her eyes... "Happy Birthday my dear wife.."
"see it's not 12 yet..." she smiled and hugged him again... "thank you".. she hugged him tight... "thank u so much..."
now do u want to break my bones...?? she laughed and loosened the hug.. he moved her hairs behind and cupped her face...
"many many happy returns of the day..." thank you... she replied...
n sorry for late compliment... but you were looking really beautiful today..."thank you..."
and food was really good... i loved it.. "thank you..."
n yes! u're a very bad wife... "thank you..."
hmmm??? and he laughed again.. she hit him on his shoulder... and he got up and took out a chocolate from his bag and gave it to her...
she smiled and thanked him again...


Precap: Raghu's mom and Antara...

heyy guys.. so this was the first most bubbly n happy update of this FF.. plz let me know ur views..plz leave ur comments/suggestions/questions.. do hit the like button...
please add "DeadDevil-FF" to receive PMs for updates..

loads of luv..
-akki
Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
DamRyeong thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
update done.. =]
colouring part later...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bhut shukriya..badi meherbani..jo apni update di hamein huzur...🤣🤣🤣
after waiting for so long update mil hi gayi😛..thanks to u...🤗
it was superb dear👏..raghu teased antara a lot😆..i mean whole day she was feeling restless😆 and so much annoyed😡 bt raghu is raghu😳 he manofy her😆...and the best gift given by him that her dad called her and wished her😊..so happy😃..and kiss on forehead😳...and chocolate so cute..as a gift😛😆
Ireally enjoyed ur update..bhut maza aaya hw raghu was behaving with her🤣🤣🤣he called her "bad lady"🤣
thanks fr update and pm😆
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it was amazing..
Actually cute really how sweet of Raghu he made her dad to call
Thats really sweet..aww Antara!
Bt it was hilarious trust me..:)
Hehe loved it..
Thanks fr pm..update soon..
Keep writing:)<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely..superb update..
i ws realy waiting fr d update..
one of my fav ff ...
n pkz do update nxt part asap
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwh i missed your updates. They are always so cute and lovely. Ur update was just perfect 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
This update was really sweet
Thank you for update

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