Together we are Perfect-A NiYaz SS Last Part UPDATED(Page 60) - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
the ending is just perfect!!
i came to know of this ff through pms.
the best part is the way u showed their blossoming friendship. dialogues as such yaad nahi hai. bad memory troubles. and if u could write in 3rd peraon more than conversational style is the only thing I can think of.
ty for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Raj-

the ending is just perfect!!...Thanks dear..I am glad u like it😳

i came to know of this ff through pms.
the best part is the way u showed their blossoming friendship. dialogues as such yaad nahi hai. bad memory troubles...he he he..I can understand dear..I am glad u enjoy all of them and if u could write in 3rd peraon more than conversational style is the only thing I can think of.
ty for the pm.

Thanks a lot for ur precious suggestion
i will surely try to wrote in third person also😳

Thanks once again for supporting me
Means a lot🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update Geet!!!👏🤗
sach mein i really enjoyed reading !!
my favorite dialogue will be Ayaz telling Rajdhani express!!😆
really,you have created the friendship of Ayaz and Nikita brilliantly!!
Sorry to disappoint you,there is no faults in your SS!!😛
You are an awesome writer!!😊
Keep writing!!!😊
lots of love😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetypie225

Fantastic update Geet!!!👏🤗

sach mein i really enjoyed reading !!

Thanks dear
I am glad u liked it so much😳

my favorite dialogue will be Ayaz telling Rajdhani express!!😆...He he he..almost everyone love this one only..Just like me😛

really,you have created the friendship of Ayaz and Nikita brilliantly!!
Sorry to disappoint you,there is no faults in your SS!!😛
You are an awesome writer!!😊
Keep writing!!!😊
lots of love😳

So sweet of dear
Thanks for motivating me so much
Muahhh🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

geet really thank u fr dis lovely journey into nitaz world thanks dear


Thanks a lot dear
I am glad u like it😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow wow i loved this story so much i wil always remeber it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow wow wow i loved this story so much i wil always remeber it


Thanks dear
I am glad u liked it so much
Muahhh🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ohhh!!!!!!!!😒
Geet... Lovely update... N awesummm ending!!!!!!!!!!!!

I always enjoyed ua Updates... It was fun reading them... Plz do write more... I luv ua concept "Niyaz"...

Regarding ua questions...

1. What is your favorite scene from this whole SS (something you can't forget)?

I love all the scenes, Each n every scene of NIYAZ is really cute n joyful. Isme meri Fav toh... Hmmm... I like that chap-4 alot...

2. Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

Rajdhani express...'

3. How did you come across this FF?

Ua updates will be lovely N enjoyable always... I luv all the updates...

4. Is there anything I should improve? (PLEASE don't say 'nothing'!, I'm welcome to criticism.)

Nothing Nothing Nothing...

🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sushmitha.r

Last part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohhh!!!!!!!!😒
Geet... Lovely update... N awesummm ending!!!!!!!!!!!!

I always enjoyed ua Updates... It was fun reading them... Plz do write more... I luv ua concept "Niyaz"...

I know,Last part
But Don't be sad dear🤗
I will surely try to read more soon😳

Regarding ua questions...

1. What is your favorite scene from this whole SS (something you can't forget)?

I love all the scenes, Each n every scene of NIYAZ is really cute n joyful. Isme meri Fav toh... Hmmm... I like that chap-4 alot...Awwiiee,Thanks a lot dear🤗...I am glad u like it so much..Chapter 4...Mine fav too😉

2. Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

Rajdhani express...'he he he...yaah😆

3. How did you come across this FF?

Ua updates will be lovely N enjoyable always... I luv all the updates...you know what...u r a sweetheart...Muahhh🤗

4. Is there anything I should improve? (PLEASE don't say 'nothing'!, I'm welcome to criticism.)

Nothing Nothing Nothing...

🤗

Lolzz

that's sweet of you
Love u dear
Thanks once again for always supporting me😳
Muahhh

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