Ab hua hum do dil ek jaan - OS/SS updated part 3 pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks guys for all your encouraging replies. I am happy you liked my first SS.

Part 2

Raghu and Antara get stuck in the traffic. Antara is very nervous and looks at her watch.

Antara: Ab hum kya karengey Raghu.

Raghu: Itni baat to paki hain we won't reach the venue on the muhurat time.

Antara: kash hum Aman ko milney hi nahi aatey. Atlease humari shadi muhurat pey ho jati. Now what will I tell after reaching home, where I had gone with you.

Raghu: tu boley to chal idar hi kidhar ek mandir main jakey shadi kar lete hain muhurat key time par.

Antara: you find this a joke. (gets annoyed and starts crying)

Raghu: arey baba now don't cry. You know I don't like you crying. I thought it is important for you to get married on the muhurat time hence I suggested.

Raghu gives a loving look to Antara and asks kyu mujhsey shadi nahi karni.

Antara: Aaj hi karni hain. Ab I can't wait any longer.

Raghu: toh phir chal idhar pas hi main ek mandir hain hum barobar 6.30pm ko shadi kar lete hain aur phir ghar jakey sab ko bata dete hain.

Antara nods in approval.

Raghu takes a left turn and drives towards the mandir. On reaching the mandir Raghu talks to the pandit. The pandit makes all the preparations and their wedding starts at exactly 6.30pm.

After wedding they take the blessings of bappa and look at each other and say ab ho gaye hum do dil ek jaan.

Naik Sadan

DM, MM, ajji , kaka and kaki enter Raghu's room and tell him that muhurat ka waqt ho gaya.

DM: Chalo Raghu lets go baarat nikalney ka waqt ho gaya.

Satya laughing in mind: Nods.

While walking Satya thinks aab Antara ko mujhsey koi nahi cheen sakta hain.

Antara's house

Geeta comes and informs Antara that they need to leave for the venue as the baarat has left and mama and mami have left to welcome the baaratis.

Ruksana inside the ghunghat is confused and thinks why Antara is not back. And how come Raghu has returned and is in the baarat procession.

Ruksana thinking what should I do? Should I tell Geeta aunty everything or should I just act as Antara and proceed till she doesn't return and explain to everyone.

Ruksana is stunned and doesn't know what to do. Noor apa comes.

Noor Apa: Bhabhi Antara ko sharam aa rahi hogi is liye dekho kaisey uth hi nahi rahi hain. Aap ek kaam kijia aap jaiye main Antara ko sath leke aati hoon.

Short one but hope u like it guys...

Part 3 coming up soon..

Precap ?

Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
itna short update? precap to dedo! 😆 Waise I liked it a lot! Shaadi hogayi toh i sighed with relief!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hogai shadi!!!
Shukar hai!!!
Short tha update magar a good one!!!
Update aj hi!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Loved it, update soon and pm me also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
that was a super rocking update
i loved it so much
thank god that rantara are married now
hope hatya and ruksana get married
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: alishamerchant

fun?? 😲bichaari ruku ki zindagi barbaad ho jayegi!😭


RUKU KNOWS HOW TO HANDLE SATTU...

😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
HA HA HA HA RAGHU-ANTU GOT MARRIED...

ABB NAIK SADAN MEIN KYAA HOGI...

RUKU MAY PROCEED WITH MARRIAGE OR NOT..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Friends, thanks for all your encouraging replies. Hope u like the part 3.

Part 3

Just then Raghu honks the jeep and Antara gets up from her sleep. She realizes that she had been dreaming. Antara feels thirsty so she gets off the jeep and goes to a shop on the side of the road.

While buying the water she sees Aman buying some food items.

Antara: Arey Aman tum yaha kya kar rahey ho. And why didn't u come to meet us. We have been waiting for so long. Now we have missed our marriage muhurat also.

Aman shocked and speechless: main who...

Antara: See raghu is also there come with me...

Aman : Nahi.. I have already met Raghu

Antara hurt that Raghu didn't tell her: What? When?

Aman: just some time back at Mumbai Central.

Antara (thinking that he has talked to Raghu now she needs to know what was the urgent talk) : So what did u want to tell me?

Aman narrates the entire story of how DM framed Raghu in her father's murder.

Antara is shocked and hurt and leaves in tears. She walks towards the jeep and looks at Raghu with hatred thinking he knew all this while and didn't even tell me. Raghu sees her in such a state and gets out of his jeep. Antara turns and starts walking away. Raghu calls out "aa Miss Kaul kya hua" but she just walks away and doesn't respond. It starts raining heavily now.

Raghu follows her. Antara gets into a garden nearby and goes and sits on a bench and starts crying loudly. Raghu reaches there and asks her what happened and why is she crying. He tries to hug her but she just shuns his hands away. Antara then gets up and slaps him and holds him by the collar and tells him jisko main apna sab kuch manti hoon usney hi mere pitaji ko mar dala how could u do this to me , I just hate you , you need to be punished for this, from now on we don't have any relation with each other. Raghu gets a shock of his life. He just drops down on the ground and starts weeping. His entire world has come crashing down. His fear about this day had now come true.

Antara just leaves the place and takes a rickshaw and reaches home.

All are waiting for Antara when the door bell rings. Mamaji opens the door and finds Antara in shock and soaked.

Mamaji: kya hua Antara tum is tarah.

Antara breaks down and starts crying loudly.

Antara: Ab yeh shadi kabhi nahi ho sakti.

Mamaji and all: kyun?

Antara sobbing: kyun ki Raghu hi papa ka katil hain.

All are shocked. Geeta collapse to the ground and faints.

Antara who has turned like a stone just walks upstairs and closes the door of her room.

Raghu all this while was in the garden only thinking how his world had come crashing down the day DM handed over the letter to him saying that someone had left a letter for him. After reading the letter he had been totally shattered. He had even decided to tell Antara the truth and had tried to do it n number of times, but after seeing her so happy and so deeply in love with him he had decided that it would be better to hide the truth at the moment and to find out the real truth from Aman as to why did Aman do this with him? and then disclose the truth to Antara. Even MM had told him to keep the truth away from Antara as if she comes to know she would get very hurt. Again later when DM had announced their wedding in front of the entire basti he had gone and handed over the letter to DM and told her the truth, that he cant marry her without telling her the truth, but DM had told him not to break Antara's heart and had also taken a promise from him that he shall tell Antara the truth only when DM thinks the time is right to do so. Raghu and MM had torn down each and every hide out to find Aman and what a fate - Aman came out with the truth only on his wedding day. FATE had played a very unusual game with Raghu once again. Raghu just broke down again and loudly crying Why mai why , why did u do this with me? What was my fault? What wrong had I done to you that you did this to me? You have taken my life my breath my heart my love my everything away from me , WHY?


I will update the next part on 9th November as i have an exam. Also precap is not mentioned because frankly speaking i haven't thought about how to mold the story ahead as i have lot of open options for the same.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
oh i thought really rantara are married
why aman told her the truth then
i hate aman for doing this to raghu
all that was a dream how bad
feel bad for poor raghu now
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is very good..😊.all the best for exams👍🏼

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