Hello friends,
After reading all your OS , SS and FFs and taking inspiration I have written my own OS. Please let me know your frank opinion about the same. Hope you enjoy it.
Ab hua hum do dil ek jaan
Part 1
Antara was looking gorgeous in her wedding outfit which Raghu had brought for her. It was the same outfit which she had tried on the request of the senior couple at the shop. Raghu had been lost looking at her in that wedding outfit. As soon as Antara's mom, mama and mami agreed for their marriage Raghu had gone and purchased the same outfit which had been torn to the side as Antara had pulled the dupatta which had got stuck to Raghu's watch.
Geeta: Antara you are looking like an angel today. I hope your father was here to see you like this on your wedding day.
Antara with tears in her eyes: yes mumma , dad would be really happy to see me getting married to Raghu who makes me complete and who takes care of me, protects me from all threats and is just like him.
Just then Mamaji calls Geeta and Geeta goes downstairs to help him complete the remaining work.
While waiting Antara gets a call from Aman.
Just an hour back in a shabby garage.
DM: Do you know I am really happy today all my dreams will come true today to destroy Raghu and make him my slave for ever.
Aman : Why whats so special about today?
DM: You don't know. Why don't you guess it.
Aman looks away wondering now what this lady is upto.
DM: Today Raghu is going to get married to Antara.
Aman gets shocked.
DM: You don't worry but I won't let this happen I will manipulate your letter and will send it to Antara. And Antara after reading it will think Raghu has killed her father will cancel the wedding and Raghu will get devastated. Hahahahahha
DM leaves..
Aman get mad and tries hard to escape.
After about 30 minutes of fight with DM's men he escapes and calls Antara.
Antara: Hello Aman where have you been?
Aman: Let that be just listen carefully I have very important thing to tell you please come and meet me at Mumbai Central Station.
Antara: How can I come now it my wedding today.
Aman: It is very important and don't worry I am calling Raghu also. I need to speak to both of you.
Antara: Ok will be there in an hour.
Antara still had 2 hours for the wedding muhurat. She thought since Raghu will be with her, she will be able to return back in 2 hours. But what about the people at home. She gets an idea and calls Ruksana on her cell.
Ruksana: Hello Antara. Whats going on? Nervous?
Antara: No dear just need your help can you come upstairs.
Ruksana: Sensing the tension in Antara's voice. Abhi aai.
Antara tells Ruksana about the entire conversation with Aman.
Antara: Can you please take my place till I return back.
Ruksana: But how can i...
Antara: Pls I promise I will be back in 2 hours plus you just cover your face with my dupatta.
Ruksana and Antara exchange their outfits, and Ruksana takes Antara's place.
Antara takes Ruksana's dupatta on her head and sneaks out of the house quietly.
Naik Sadan
Raghu is trying his sherwani when his cell phone rings. Seeing Aman's name on the display Raghu gets shocked plus angry. He quickly picks up the phone.
Raghu: kidhar hain tu itney din sey tujhey dhond raha hoon.
Aman: I have been in big trouble trying to reach you and tell you the truth.
Raghu in an angry tone: I already know the truth and have been in such a bad situation myself.
Aman: I know Raghu u r very angry with me but I want to tell you the entire truth and how you were framed by... (he doesn't take DM's name) pls come and meet me immediately at Mumbai Central Station. I have called Antara also. I want to clear everything. I have very less time as some goons are behind my life.
Before Raghu could tell him anything the line gets disconnected.
Raghu gets really angry thinking why has he called Antara. He has managed to hide the truth from Antara so she doesn't get hurt but this idiot will tell her everything and till we don't have proof there is no use explaining the situation to Antara.
Raghu thinks of informing MM before leaving but then drops the idea as MM would then ask him hundreds of questions and he didn't want to waste time, he had to reach Mumbai central before Antara.
Raghu sneaks out of Naik Sadan unnoticed. Gets into the jeep and drives away.
Satya notices Raghu getting into the jeep and driving away. He is happy and thinks that Raghu has backed out of the wedding reading the letter. He quickly enters Raghu's room wears the wedding Sherwani and covers his face with the flowers. (I don't know what its called so I just wrote flowers).
Raghu reaches Mumbai Central Station and searches for Aman.
Aman quickly notices Raghu.
Aman: Raghu tumhe itna time kyun laga aaney key liye main kab sey intazar kar raha hoon.
Raghu in angry tone: Pehley yeh bata tuney mujhey dhoka kyu diya.
Aman: Raghu I am very sorry. I know what I have done can not be taken back. But I was majboor.
I am a terrorist who works for DM. (Raghu gets shocked and hurt at the same time listening to this). And all this had been planned by DM. She only sent you to Srinagar. She gave me the exact details of your journey. I approached u as a guide and she only told me to tell you to keep the parcel at Mr. Kauls house.
Raghu speechless and shocked: takes some time to think what happened with him and how he was framed: dekh before Antara comes here you please leave take this money, address of my house in Naigaon and the house keys and stay there. I will come and meet you tomorrow. Till then keep your cell phone off and don't talk to Antara about this.
Aman: but why ? she has the right to know before she gets married to you.
Raghu : just do as I say. Antara will be very hurt if she comes to know and you don't know at present it is important to protect her from Satya. I will tell her the truth myself when the time comes. Till then I will also have to collect proof against DM. I will have to play safe till then and show that I don't know anything. Now you leave before you get caught or Antara returns.
Aman nods his head and leaves.
Raghu waits for Antara and starts acting like he is searching for Aman.
Antara reaches Mumbai Central after 30 minutes.
She sees Raghu and tells him that she had been called my Aman.
Raghu: Par Aman hai kaha.
Antara looking at the watch: We just have 30 minutes then we will have to leave as wedding starts at 6.30pm.
Raghu in a flirty tone: You are very eager to get married to me haa.
Antara gets shy: Toh phir in the meantime let's have a cutting tea.
They both share the tea.
Raghu: its getting really late. We should leave. Don't know where Aman got stuck. We shall meet him some other time.
Antara nods her head in approval and they leave.
Antara sits in Raghu's jeep and drives back home.
Precap : Surprise...
Part 2 - Pg. 2, Part 3 - Pg. 3
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