||COLLEGE DAYS- SS || updated pg 46 || - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous start... pls continue..
😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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.loved nw version of ddej
...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2 -- precap

Antara got up rubbing her face and crying, she decided to walk home and she did. When she reached home she wiped her tears and cleaned her face so her mom doesnt see her and gets tensed.

Mom: hi beta kaisa tha din?

Antara: mom tik tha app chinta mat ki jiyay
She said bringing a smile on her face.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HELLO999

PART 2 -- precap

Antara got up rubbing her face and crying, she decided to walk home and she did. When she reached home she wiped her tears and cleaned her face so her mom doesnt see her and gets tensed.

Mom: hi beta kaisa tha din?

Antara: mom tik tha app chinta mat ki jiyay
She said bringing a smile on her face.


Nyc precap!!!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2

Antara got up rubbing her face and crying, she decided to walk home and she did. When she reached home she wiped her tears and cleaned her face so her mom doesnt see her and gets tensed.

Mom: hi beta kaisa tha din?

Antara: mom tik tha app chinta mat ki jiyay
She said bringing a smile on her face.

Mom: hamesha aisay hi hasna rehna

Antara: Gi

she hugged her and ran to her room locked the door and started crying.

Antaras mind:Yeh kya ho raha ha meray saath? kyu yeh satya meray peechay laga hai aur kyu mainay iss raghu ka naam liya tha?

She got back up and wiped her tears and went downstairs to her mom.

Antara: Mom meh ek walk kay liyay ja rahi hu

Mom: Acha beta shaam kay khanay kay phelay ajana

Antara kissed her mom and left for a walk
While walking she saw Raghu staring at her she just walked past Raghu kept following her and staring at her cheek. She stopped and turned around staring at him.

Antara:Kya huwa (she said queitly)

Raghu:Teray ghaal me kuch laal ha

Antara: Kya

Raghu: Ungliyo kay nashhan (puzzled)

Antara: Kya she said trying to cover it

Raghu took her to the side and took her hand of the marks were very big so it can't be a womans

Raghu: Yeh to mard kay nishaan hai! Kisnay kiya ya? KISNAY?

Antara: Wo...

Raghu: Batoa meh kisi aurat ki basti hownay nahi dekhh sacta...Bataoo

Antara: Satya (she started sobbing,than tears ran down her cheek)

Raghu was walking away and looked back

Raghu: Kal subay me tujay chanay aoga

Antara: Kya ... kyu

Raghu: Kyunki mehnay kaha

Antara: Lekin tujay meray ghar ka pata nahi pata

Raghu: Mujay sab khuch pata hai!

And he walks away. Antara heads for home too she goes to her room and thinks about how raghu is just as soft on the inside as he is hard on the outside.
The next morning Antara gets ready wearing a polka dot dress. and a side ponytail
She tried to leave early to get away from raghu but when she got outside she saw raghu waiting for her on his bike.

Antara: Tum yaha?

Raghu: Hai mehnay kaha ta aur me jaldi agaya tha kyunki mujay pata tha ki tu jaldi nikal jai gi...ABB BEHTO

Antara: Nahi tum jao

Raghu comes off his bike and grabs her arm and makes her sit on his bike and he drives away, he is already pissed of cos of satya

Antara: Tum plz plz plz araam say chalo...plz

Raghu: Chup bilkul chup...maadat karr raha hu phir bhi chalaty ho abb bilkul chup behto.
antara queitly sobs closing her eyes tightly and grabbing raghus shirt really tightly.
they reach the college and they get off the bike and raghu grabs Antaras hand and takes him to satya.

Raghu: Tunay iskay saath kya kiya?

Satya: Bhai khuch nahi

Raghu gets angry and slaps him

Raghu: Maafi maang

Satya: Lykin

Raghu: Maang

Satya stares at antara and antara hides behind raghu. Raghu sees this and slaps him again

Raghu: Maafi maan Abhi kay abhi

Satya: Sorry!!!

Raghu: Abb chal haat yaha se

Satya goes away and raghu sees everyone staring at him and antara

Raghu: kya hai kya ghoor rahay ho? challo apna kham se kham rako

Everyone looks away out of fear. Antara grabs raghus hand and takes him to the corner

Antara: thank you soo much raghu for helping me

Raghu: Mehnay tumhe phelay bhi bataya hai khi me kisi ko ek aurat kay saat batamizi karana badaash nahi hai

Antara puts her hand foward

Antara: Freinds?

Raghu moves her hand out of the way

Raghu: me kisi ki saath dosti nahi karta! SAMJI!



Edited by Niyaz_Lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Interesting update...i wonder why he doesnt want to be friends!
Nice update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
really great..please next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Great update... Omggg he slapped satya 😆 .. Goood!! Haww why doesnt he make friends.. She's the one who asked.. He should have jumped on that opportunity 😆 .. But i don't think Satya is done.. He will come back for Antu for sure.. 🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awesome year!!! Pizza update soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Nice start plz continue soon 😊

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