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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

omg jyo its osm...

it was so visualisable...

the song...raghu's gaze

romance is ur cup of tea...awesomly written yaar loved it

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Cat.

@Cat.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Jyo you have a gift for storytelling, keep writing and sharing your talents

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her_story

@her_story

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

It's lovely dear! As I already told you, I loved the concept, and the way you communicated Raghu and Antara's feelings after the kiss, that too without many dialogues.

And don't say thanks!😛🤗

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suji

@suji01

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow jyo👏

I can so visualize this scene

Feel bad for Ishu😭😆😆

Keep writing such stuff😊

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goodstorywins

@goodstorywins

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: suj01
Wow jyo👏

I can so visualize this scene

Feel bad for Ishu😭😆😆

Keep writing such stuff😊

Ha yaar!!! Bechara Didu and Jiju ke beech mein phass gaya!!!🤣

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautiful os.. I love this song.. Actually all Ram Leela songs are very good.. This goes very well with the situation.. And haaaye they kissed .. And openly flirting 😆 .. Made my sunday.. Thanks 😃