KAUN HAI WOH MERA - SAB KUCHRANTARA OS UPDATED PG 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice story yaar
please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeyana

great os... 👍🏼
pm me too if u r updating it

Thank you😊 I will try
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow loved it soo mucch and had tears in my eyes

good that dm went beghind the bars
pls ccont soon and om me
good luck with the exam

Thank you honey... i will pm you bt i m sorry nt fr dis os i have less time so..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshita1996

Thank you honey... i will pm you bt i m sorry nt fr dis os i have less time so..😊

no probs😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guyz harsitha said that she cant update today as she is finsihed with her 20 posts hope you understand
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsum start!!!
Loved it!!!
Plz pm me when u update!!!
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

guyz harsitha said that she cant update today as she is finsihed with her 20 posts hope you understand

no probs will wait! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was amazing i can't wait to read more and don't worry about your limits i can understand take your time to update!!
Please PM me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃Okh guys mi bck i m sorry guys mai kal update nae kar pai really sorry😊 Nd sorry mai pms nae kar paugi kal se i have exams n mai aaj update de rahi hu😆 Mai kal fail hojaugi paka😛 Guys pray karna pls😭
Okh to last part n thank yu sab ko big wala ka aap sabko mera os itna pasand aaya nd ab se next os/ss jo mai 28th se likhugi sabko pm karugi par uska liye pls add me in ur buddy list😃

Part - 2

Noor appa- aare Antara kya baat hai aaj bahut khush lag rahi ho esahi raha kar beta..
Antara still smiling - pata nae appa kuch apna pansa hai aaj ki hawa mai.. 😊
Noor appa- Antara kab tak intezar karegi shadi kar le beta..
Antara- nae appa maine ek hi insan se pyaar kiya hai aur usse se karugi hamesha..
Noor appa- par Antara..
Antara- appa saumya kaha hai..hamari princess aaj 3 saal ki hogae hai..😃
Noor appa- haa tune hi sir pe chada ka rakha hai tu ishan aur arshad ji teeno itni masti karti hai na..😊
Antara- aare appa ap chodo mai toh jaa rahi hu apni princess ko lekar shamko..😃
Appa - hey bhagwan kya karu isse ladki ka mai.. n goes

Meeting -
Mr.patil - Antara, sir aata hi hoga presentation ready hai na..
Antara - haa dnt wrry hume conttact mil jayega n smiles
Raghu n mm enters but Antara was facing her back to dem.. she started the presentation they were nt yet introduced they didnt met yet suddendly a photo appeared her family photo lights were on nw she turned n said
Antara - i m so sorry this n stopped
Raghu n mm were shocked to see her.. ruku was happy to see her..

Raghu n Antara culdnt take of der eyes frm each other..
Antara was still happy dat culd be seen frm herr eyes they were shinning like never bfre.. 5 yrs n she was smiling like never bfre she wanted to hug him suddenly

Mr.patil - Antara maine inne 5 saalo mai tumhe kabhi itna khush nae dekha lagta hai aap dono ek dusra ko janta ho pehle se...

Raghu was blank he was so happy it was valid fr his face he saw him he missed her so much today aft 5 yrs he saw her still believing it to be a beautiful dream once btw those night mares...

Mr.patil left as he got a call MM - ruku decided to leave dem alone she ran to him n hugged him like never bfre he hugged her bck fearing to pose her again.. (mahi tu moment)

She was still nt wanting to leave him bt d guilty made dem left each other..

Mr.patil came in..
Mr.patil - so sir kya yeh fresh faces apki Antara ka liye theek hai..?!
Antara was shocked she never realised dat he named d company after her she was looking at him continously

Raghu - ji haa hume yeh contract sign karne ho ready so congatulations mr.patil
Antara was nt comfortable y was he being formal i m his miscall did he frget no he cnt..

Raghu - ms.Antara kaul congratulations
Antara- thank you Raghuveer sir..
Sir it pinched him again..

Nd everyone left.. Antara was in deep thoughts while climbing down d stairs she didnt realize dat she was going to miss one step she could have fallen down bt one person pull her towards him

Raghu - miscall kya kar rahi hai dekh ka nahi chal sakti lag jati toh? Kuch hojata toh?!😡
Antara was happy he still remembered me he still loves me..

Antara - tum hona bachane ka liye ab tak nae tha par ab ho tum janti hu mai eshaas hogaya tha kal mujhe.. n leaves
Raghu was so shocked to even realise anything.

In d evening..
Antara - ishan chalo late ho raha hai saumya ka liye gft lena hai haina saumya..!😊
Nd d cute lil princess smiled
Raghu mm n ruku were in d baazar bcoz ruku wanted to shop yu see mm has to obey husbands 😆

They didnt realise dey were in d same baazar were Antara was
Antara - ishan tum yehi rukko saumya ka dhyan rakhna mai aur aapa aata hai..

Ishan - haa di aap jao..
In btw ishan met his frnd n dat lil princess crawl down ishan was so bsy to notice she was out of sight..

She crawled n end up to those black shoes standing Raghu saw the lil princess n was smiling took her in his arms.. nd was playing wid her she was too enjying,
Antara came bck tobfind samuya wasnt der she was worried she scolded ishan fr his careless ness n noor appa was crying dey started finding her

Antara saw she was wid some man bt he was facing his back..

Antara ran towards him n took her in her arms
Antara - thank you so much aapna isse bachaya meri princess hai yaa aur ap..
Raghu was shocked to see Antara she has a baby she is married he thought..they stood still when appa cme running
Appa - Antara saumya mil gae mera bacha she kissed her on her head
Raghu was shocked to knw she was appa' s baby nd nt Antara 's bt he was relieved too...😊
Appa n ishan bth saw Raghu-Mm- rukku.. Ishan ran n hugged Raghu
Ishan - bhaiya aap kaha tha na phone na kuch milna bhi nae aaye..esa kyu..
Raghu was surprised yes Ishan didnt knew abt bomb blast incident..

Antara didnt wated him to hate Raghu
Raghu - aare ishu kaise hai tu kafi bada hogaya hai tu toh
Ishan- aur under 14 ka captain bhi..
Raghu - aare wah kya baat hai..
Appa- Raghu tum nae hota toh pata nae saumya ko..
Raghu - aare noori aunty koi baat nae apki bachi bahut pyaari hai n smiles
Meanwhile wen every one was abt to leave

Antara- Raghuveer sir yeh aapka liye mr.patil naa bheja hai n leaves
Raghu was confused. Wen he open it it was a mouth organ.. he was smiling
Mm - bhai yeh kya mo..??!!
Raghu - mr.patil nae ms.Antara kaul na diya hai..,
Ruku was bsy buying stuff wen she collapsed Antara ran to her n called Raghu ask her to take her at the hotel it was near so..

Antara - congratulations rukshana maa bane wali hai..she said to Raghu aur tum i mean aap baap

Raghu - mai nae mach mach she raised her head n was looking at him who was smiling at her foolish ness😊😃
Mm - bhai mai baap aur tu mama banne wala hai n hugs him yedi tu mami banne wali hai he was so excited that he didnt realized wat he said...

Raghu n Antara looked at each other were lost again.. ( mahi tu moment)
Antara - congrats ruku smiles n hugs her

After some time Antara left ..

Next day mid evening-
Everyone decided to re unite dem asap... so Mm told Ishan to tell Antara that Raghu met wid an accident n he is injured so come at his hotel room..
Ishan - di Raghu bhaiya ka accident hogaya hai..
Antara - kya ..?! Kaha hai woh...
Ishan - aapna hotel room mai
Antara ran like never bfre again d fear of loosing hin forever raised in hr heart she was scared hell scared...

Raghu didnt knew anything he was busy standing in d gallery remembering Antaran der night romance..
Suddenly his door slammed yes mm kept d door open so Antara culd enter..
She ran so fast n straight in his arms..Raghu was hell shocked to see her at dis hour..
Raghu - Antara kya hua..?! He was worried
Antara- mujhe chod ka mat jao pls Raghu papa ka baad mai tumhe nae kho sakti mai janti hu tumne kuch nae kiya mai tumse aaj bhi bahut pyaar karti hu pls mujh maaf kardo pls she was crying n saying janti hu tumhara layak nae hu par..

Raghu - aae miscall esa mat bol uedi hogae hai tu kya bol rahi hai apun tujhse pyaar kaarta hai aur teri koi hgalti nae hai roe mat aaj bhi terko rota hua nae dekh sakta nd wipes her tears gently.. cupped hr faced n said jaan hai tu mera zindagi hai meri tu Antara mai tujhse aaj bhi uthna hi pyaar karta hu jitna pehle karta tha...
Antara wid teary eyes - paka??!! Ab nae chodoga naa..??
Raghu - pakka kabhi nae choduga wada hai tujhse...
Antara smiles - toh ab hai na do dil ek jaan.
Raghu - haa hum hai do dil ek jaan

Raghu kissed her on her forehead n den hugged her passionately...

This was d end of seperation n beginning of there love story..😳
They got married n always remained 'DO DIL EK JAAN'

I knw last part was nt gud😭 Sorry
Toh chappal n tamtar welcumed n thank yu every one n big thanks to honey fr her help😃
Harshita


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

guyz harsitha said that she cant update today as she is finsihed with her 20 posts hope you understand


Its ok

we will be waiting

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