Miracle!!! A Rantara OS part 1

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He was watching his watch in every 1 minute. He was feeling so restless to finish his work since the morning. Today is a very special day for him.😉 But he doesn't know why there is so much work load today. At last he read through the last page of his last file.Ufff. Done. Only the quotation is left.😡 He phoned Arshad miyan to send the quotation file inside. But he entered without any file.😲

Raghu: Where is the file??(Oh,God. Don't tell me it's not ready!!!)

Arshad: It still needs 15 minutes. But if U are in such Hurry, then don't worry. I will take that in your home when it's ready.

Raghu:No. it's ok. I will wait.

Arshad: Are u sure??? Few minutes ago, she called in TNT.

Raghu: Why didn't u give me the phone???😲

Arshad:coz U told me not to disturb u.

Raghu: Ok. U just finish that quotation Jiju.Then we will be back home together. All right??

Arshad nodded and left. Raghu picked up his overcoat and wore it. It has been snowing since last 3 days continuously. All he can see is White. He looked through his office window. A boy and a girl were playing with snowballs, throwing at each other and laughing like crazy. 😛 Watching that scene automatically a smile appeared in his face. His whole life started flashing in front of his eyes. 😊

He walked to his desk and looked at a photo frame on the table. There are 5 people in that photo. 5 most important people in his life. Life is a very strange thing. In the first 25 years of his life he didn't even recognize who were important for him. He respected someone like hell.😡 But the worship he did for her was not even necessary. She didn't deserve that. 🤢When he learned this truth, It was the toughest time of his life.😭 A cold breeeze entered in to the room And Raghu shievered. But he knows that the shiever was not for the breeze, it was for his memory of that time. That time, even a slightest wish to live one more day was a miracle.😭What a surprise!!! He is still living and Has everything whatever he had ever dreamed and whatever he was even scared to dream of.😳

The truth that HE was the one who planted that bomb- almost killed him from inside. 😭He still remember Antara's first reaction after knowing the truth. Raghu was completely shuttered.😲 He did not expect Antara to forgive him coz he himself won't be able to forgive him. The second blow came to him when He came to know from Aman that all was planned by that lady whom he thought as his mother.😡 Instead of feeling Angry on her for turning his paradise to hell over night, He actually felt angry on himself. How can he be so Nave!!!!😭 How can he let someone to play with his life this much!!!!😭 How can he trust someone so blindly. He just bacame a Zombie.😭 The urge to prove himself Innnocent, to win back Antara just died.😭 Coz he lost the confidence on himself. The only thing he noticed that time was the hatredful eyes of Antara who lost the most important person of her life coz of him. He almost accepted his fate.😭 But then something happened.😲 Something that he never ever imagined. As if The anger, The feel of betrayal and deception, His love- everything just blasted after hibernation. 😊

SHE got the punishment of loving him. The pain, torture and humiliation she has to endure- Raghu just doesn't want to remember all those things.😭 Her every teardrops repaired Raghu's self confidence. He regained his urge of living just to get her out of this mess. She is so pure. She didn't deserve this sadness.😭 She didn't want his help. He didn't care. Her freedom, her happiness- became his goal of life and this time he will not care anyone, not even his guilt conscious mind.👏 And then a miracle happened.

Raghu, mein ne tumhe maaf kiya.

That one sentence gave the biggest happiness of his life. 😃And after that nothing stopped them. They fought for their freedom, their love, their future. A lot of blood,sweat and tears were shed in this fight. But they won. Yess. The real guilty was caught and the entire world came to know the reality. Their undying love defeated the bitterness of seperation, hatred and evil.

Part 2 is on the way...

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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved it so much
waiting for the next part pls pm me
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Woww Woww Wowww


What an lovly touching OS .

excellent write up , super impressed !👏
Great beginning continue it...
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WoW yaar especially the last paragraph! it was so touching!
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Wow amazing start.. grt way of expressing.. keep writing.. waiting
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great start
do continue soon
will be waiting
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Wow loved it dear!!
I m haya by the way!!!

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