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Posted: 11 years ago
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Next Day Raghu and antara was ready to catch the flight for Srinagar. antara was suppose to sit in the jeep suddenly ishaan come and hug and start crying
ishaan- didi mujhe bhi saath le chalo. mein bhi mummy se miloga. waise bhi tumhare aur Raghu jiju ke bina muhe yahan accha nahi lag ga
machmahc to Raghu- bhai ye jo dahej mein apko saal mila hai ma kasam puri apki watt laga kar rahe ga. bhool jao ki apka khud ka koi baccha hoga. yeh baccha didi ko chodega nahi or na tum baccha paida kar paoge.
Raghu give a tough luk to machamch
antara- Raghu kya kare . le chalte hai mummy ko accha lage ga
Raghu- ab shadi kiya hai to biwi ki baat to mana padega. chalo saale babu tujhe apne honeymoon par free package samj kar le chalta ho
AT KASHMIR
it was night Raghu was waiting for antara in her bedroom . it was superb decorated. all thing was showing its a truly girl room. pink colour wall, curtain, full of soft toys and her guitar. laptop in which her photos and video was there.
after a long wait antara come inside in pink colour saree which was showing her all curves of the figure.
Raghu- kya ms. kaul aise hi mar dalegi. tum itni sundar kahe to rapchik item lag rahi hai tu
antara - tum bhi na who mummy ne diya to pehan li waise mein change kar ke atti ho
Raghu- change koi karna mein hi uttar deta ho and he wink his eyes.
Raghu started kissing her badly. he take off her saree and slowly slowly untying her blouse. he open her blouse. antara run and cover herself with blanket. Raghu come and merge himself in the blanket and start loving her. they were at their extreme point again somebody knock the door. Raghu and antara both were surprised
Raghu- ms. kaul agar aaj tere bhai hua na to mein zameen mein nahi soyo ga aaj tujhe aur tere bhai ko sona hoga.
antara- wear a night gawn and open the door.
surprised - machmach , mami, ajji , rukhsana all were standing in front of door and shouting surprise
Raghu and antara together- aap log yahan par
ajji- kya hai na chintu ab antara ke bina mujhe mann nahi lagta to mein sabko le kar yahan aa gayi. tujhe koi chiri chiri koi mach raha hai. aur aise koi halat teri bole tum ek dum frustration wale expression hai.
machmach- bhai aaj bhi kam pura nahi hua
Raghu- nahi wahi kal raat ki kahani. kal mere saala tha aaj tumlog ahi. meri to watt laga di tum log ne.
mamai- hai bhagwan tumhe kya ho gay hai Raghu. shayad tumhari tabyiat kharab hai isliye aisi asi baatein kar rahe ho. chalo tum us kamre mein so jao jaa kar jahan machmach so raha hai , koiki kahin tumhara bimari antara ko na lag jaye.
ishaan- haan waise bhi mein didi ke saath soa ga
Raghu- chal machmahc aaj tere saatah hi
machmach- bhai mujhe baksh do. mein kisi ka mana tho
next day
Raghu was not talking properly with antara
antara- Raghu isme meri kya galti hai har baar koi aa jata hai. tumhari jo halat hai meri bhi wahi halat hai. lekin tum to
Raghu - hold her in her arm and hug her tightly. antara muhhpar biswas hai.
antara - haan
Raghu- to mere saath chali gi jahan mein chalen bologa
antara- haan ab mein tumhari ho jahan tum wahan mein
they catch a flight for Mumbai.
they come to naik sadan. Raghu switch off the mobile. lock the door properly and take antara to their room which was decorated as it as wedding night
antara- lekin hum kisi ko bina batay aa ye hai wahan sab chinta kar rahe hoge.
Raghu- machmach sambhal lega or kal se pehle koi yahan nahi aayega. so aajj ki raat hum bilkul akele hai.
Raghu- antara aaj mein tujhe ms. kaul se mre raghunath naik bana kar raho.
and finally who ek hogaye us raat.
frnds I hope you lie the ending of this OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice yaar !!!machmach is too funny" ishu dahej mein" and "aaj bhi kaam pura nahi hua" i enjoyed it ,
iske saath mere 100 posts bi ho gaye.
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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my god richu is forum pe tune aag laga di😉😉yaar ye scene imagine karke meri halat aise ho gayi hai ki kya batao😳😳😳thanks 4 very nice OS kaash ye cv's padh le hayee,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😳😳😉raghu ne antara ko mrs.raghunath naik bana hi diya😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG haha when the were in Kashmir i thought it was going to happen par tab bhi...and haha machmach's dialogues!! 🤣 🤣
Edited by alishamerchant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Great update!!
Gud finish!!!
Pehli raat ishu!! Doosri raat aaji!!
Magar ishu phr bhi didi kay sath soyai ga hahh!!!
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Frnds hamare rantara aisi hi itne easily ek ho jaye to hame bhi maaza kahan aane wala hai. so I hope CV kuch to iska part le kar hame mazza kar aye yaar.
ishu yaar solid hein hamesha unke beech mein hi rahega.
Jab DDEJ part -Ii bane ga to pakka Raghu usesy badla lega
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
woow loved it he so soo desprate that they had to go back to mumbhai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank dear for this update for me...love it


the way machmach comment on isshu ...


waise raghu ke dil ki baat boli hai...



Raghu- ab shadi kiya hai to biwi ki baat to mana padega. chalo saale babu tujhe apne honeymoon par free package samj kar le chalta ho




wow yaar kya dialogue likha hai...tum dialogue writer ban sakati ho awesome...




wow romance of rantara...so hot yaar...mar gaye...


lekin knock knock on door and raghus dialogue...

bechar frustrate ho gaya




and mami ka comment...and ishu ka reaction...lol so so funny


but the climax wow yaar...raghu ka dimag ki bahot tez hai...

aakhir jo chahiye wo mil hi gaya...


and last raghu ki line ...haye...so hot and cute and funny dear love it...



richu...tu to kamal ki writer hai...




Edited by kaveriw2008 - 11 years ago

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