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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Ahhh you made my saturday.. Awesome OS.. Loool Ajji's ilu ilu had me cracking up.. :)

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Are wa ladaki badi ho gayi...kya os likha hai...awesome...

Yes, ladki badi hogayi! Kal guttery post likha! Aaj romance likh daala! 😆

Thanks for the review!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sophia21
Ahhh you made my saturday.. Awesome OS.. Loool Ajji's ilu ilu had me cracking up.. :)

Thanks for the review!

And thats why I posted it today! Jo bhi Rantara ko weekend mein miss kar raha hai un sabke liye treat!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

omg you said that
haila dekha hi nahin
well was too busy laughing at raghu
ehhh machmach tere ko jaan karr bhi kya karna hai
oh ho toh apni miss call se milne chale gaye raghu
parr jab aaji ne tere ko pakada toh saari taye taye phis ho gayi teri planning
kya baat hai bade acche se jaanti ka yeh apne raghu ko
yeh huyi naa baat
kya baat hai solid os tha ji
cheers for pm

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Kalpana i have told you earlier you are super duper wonderful writer, the name kept kalpana writer is apt for you... Wah kya likkte hai yaar, it was as if the whole thing was happening before me. The narration of the whole situation hayeee yaar kya sweet tha. lovely

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: chavvi16
omg you said that
haila dekha hi nahin
well was too busy laughing at raghu
ehhh machmach tere ko jaan karr bhi kya karna hai
oh ho toh apni miss call se milne chale gaye raghu
parr jab aaji ne tere ko pakada toh saari taye taye phis ho gayi teri planning
kya baat hai bade acche se jaanti ka yeh apne raghu ko
yeh huyi naa baat
kya baat hai solid os tha ji
cheers for pm

Thanks for the review!

Exactly! Machmach ko jaanne ki kuch jaroorat nahi hai!

Arre! Mehendi hai! Kaun sa hero ladki ko milne ka chance chodta hai?

Bechaara Raghu! Aaji ne saare romance par paani pher diya!

Happy that you liked it!

Once again thanks for the review, yaar!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Kalpana i have told you earlier you are super duper wonderful writer, the name kept kalpana writer is apt for you... Wah kya likkte hai yaar, it was as if the whole thing was happening before me. The narration of the whole situation hayeee yaar kya sweet tha. lovely

Thanks for the review!

Your words really touched my heart! And really glad to hear that my name Kalpana is apt for me! This is the best compliment I could ever get in my whole life! Really touched reading it!

Oh My God! Was I really that good that you could actually imagine it happening in front of you?

Oh wow! I didnot know I am that good!

Hope you will keep on reading my works every time I write! Next OS on next Saturday!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ifians
oww so sweet...😳

Thank you!😃

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zzinia2411

@zzinia2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

☺️❤️ CUTIE JUST WOW! i cant breath right now cuz i died n went to heaven by reading this supppeerrr romantic, outstanding story! ufff it was just beautiful! i love ur writing style u have an unique way of storytelling which is phenomenal! 👏 please write more! will love to read ur awesome writing!

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Serena.V

@Serena.V

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

This is one of the best os i ever read. Please continuue

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