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Nisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi friends

this OS is written by friend Archana ( Archu2013 )

she is a newbie and have trouble in posting from mobile..

so behalf of her im posting this OS please have a check on it guys

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Kismat Connection

Part 1

The 1st sunlight was touching her face,bt she was stil asleep.

"Oye ! Madamji wake up,its mrng nw."The young dashing guy seated nxt to her said this to her in a teasing tone.Antara opened her beautiful eyes only to c Raghu smirking at her.She was still feeling sleepy bt got her senses back n askd," Did we reached lucknow?"."Not yet,wil reach by noon" replied Raghu.(Both were co-passengers from the previous evng on that bus gng to lucknow.)

The bus was stopped in front of a dhaba(a local village motel).All passengers were getting dwn frm the bus to freshen up and to have their bkfst.Antara got fresh from the waiting room which was nxt to the dhaba.Raghu too had his bath and had freshen up.Now Antara was wearing a pink anarkali suit and Raghu in a black shirt and blue denim jeans.(both wer lukng stunning in their dresses:-P)

Aftr 1 n 1/2 hrs the bus was ready to go.All passengers boarded the bus.Raghu was bc in checking frnd's updates on fb frm his samsung galaxy S4.The bus conductr give signal to start the bus with a long whistle.The bus was abt to move wen Raghu realised that the seat nxt to him was vaccant."hey, stop the bus one passenger is missing !" he shouted.

To be continued...

Regards

Archana

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Nisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Index

Part 1

Part 2

Part3

Author's Note...

29 sept 2013

GOOD MORNING DDEJIANS... :-)

This was the first time i'm writing an OS. Sorry for the short update of my OS : "kismat connection". Since i'm using a mobile i wasn't able to post a long update. From mobile i'm having trouble in posting comments also. Through this post i want to thank all of u for encouraging my OS :-)
THANK YOU ALL for giving me ur feedbacks.sorry for the mistakes in my OS will try to improve my writing...

honeybee22-Thank you :-)

alishamerchant- thank you :-)

vi1772843271_nc- thank you :-).wil update soon

22 pundirabhi- Thank you..:-)

reemamriyam- thank you:-)

kaveriw2008- thank you :-).wil update soon.sorry yaar pehli baar OS likh rahi hum na isliye short update ho gayi.nxt time long update dene ki koshish karoongi... :-)

onlyrantara- thank you:-)

Titaliya1234- thank you :-).will update soon.

Suku_SwaRon- thank you:-)

A_.R_.786 - Thank you :-).Will update soon

zzinia2411- thank you:-).will continue soon.

sita11- Thank You :-)

I apologize if i missed anyone.Thank you all the ones who give their feedbacks to my OS.

Regards,

Archana (Archu2013)

30 sept 2013

Good afternoon Ddejians...

Thank you all for giving your feedbacks for my OS : Kismat Connection part-2 too.
Will update part-3 soon...

Honeybee22 - Thank you:-)

sita11- Thank you :-)

riddzykhanmalik- Thank you :-).
Jaldi update karane ki koshish karoongi..

SONAL 30-Thank you... Will update soon :-)

sonu-monu -Thank you:-)

hayakhan5 - Thank you :-)

onlyrantra- Thank you :-) Will update soon

suzi -Thank you :-)

vi1772843271- Thank you :-) Will update soon.

I appologize if i missed anyone.Thank you all... :-)

Regards

Archana(Archu2013)

02 oct 2013

Hello ddejians...

Thank you all for encouraging me to update my OS : kismat connection..
Thank you:-)
A_.R._786

Thank you:-) harshita1996

Thank you :-) serena.v

Thank you :-) hayakhan5

vi1772843271_nc Thank you:-) i'm sorry this was the last p
part of my OS: Kismat connection.hope to update a new OS soon..:-)

Thank you:-) alishamerchant

riddzykhanmalik Thank you :-)

Thank you :-) sita11

Thank you :-) kaveriw2008

Thank you :-) Titaliya1234

SONAL30 Thank you :-).

sonu-monu Thank you :-)

Regards

Archana(Archu2013)

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PART-2

(Continued from part1)

"One passenger missing !!!"
The conductor asked the driver to stop the bus.All passengers started murmuring inside the bus where is the girl?where did she go?.Raghu reached near the conductor's seat.The conductor was tensed to hear about the missing,because they were already late for the trip and if thex weren't able to report on time in the depot damn...their bus owner will scold them for being late(owner was a very rude man)

Raghu,"Bhai, can't we wait for 10 mts?".The conductor give a weird look and said," Sirji,we are already late for our trip,maalik(bus owner) will scold us if we didn't reach on time.But i'm the in-charge of the bus and the passenger's too.Okay ! We will wait for her"

All startd waiting for her.Raghu and the conductor were outside the bus.10 mts passed.Antara didn't came.

On the other hand,Antara lost her way back to the dhaba.Unknowingly she went far away from the place to get netwrk on her mobile.:-(she have to inform her mom that she'l reach lucknow by noon.Her mother was a very strict women.Antara was very much tensed and feared now."OMG ! I lost my way and hw will i get back to the bus?.when will i reach home?mayi will kill me if didn't reach home before the guest arrives.Though Antara was tensed she didn't give up.She knw her Bappa(lord ganesha) will help her out of any situation and started to walk forward keeping her faith alive.

All passengers startd to murmur again.One of the passenger stood up from the seat and asked," Conductorji lets go.She didn't came na. Kab tak wait karenge?.we are getting late.we will leave her luggage in that dhaba and inform them if she returns here give her luggage and when the nxt bus arrives".

Raghu give him an angry glare(he got angry by that comment)."Damn you, we all are passengers of this bus.if one of us is in danger we must help.We all are getting late.Wt will you do if that girl was ur sister or family member?Will you leave her alone in an unknown place like this?."The man said sorry and took his seat.All the passengers supportd Raghu.He told the conductor that he was going to search the girl and will be back soon.

Raghu didn't knw why he cared for an unknown girl.Bt her face was flashing on his mind continuously;-)

Raghu was'nt entirely sure wts gng on,bt he calmed his mind saying"Dude dnt think too much,she was jst a co-passenger na..find madamji and get back to bus.You've to reach home on time.Aaji will be waiting"He startd to walk shouting loudly,"Oye Madamji..."

Luckily Antara took the rgt path and she was nt that much far away frm the way Raghu was coming.Antara was talking to Bappa while walking through the way as she was the only person in that lonely place."Bappa plz help me get there soon unless i'l be in great trouble".Now she could hear someone's voice at a distance.
"Oye madamji,where are you?,hello"

Antara walked fast towards that direction. Nw she can hear the sound clearer.She thanked Bappa and recognised Raghu's voice.Finally both of them met." Hello Mr.y r u calling me madamji.my name is Antara".Raghu was surprised to hear the reply and he saw her cmng towards him."Oh there you are.Thank god .ok madamji,sorry Antara shall we go back to the bus.All of us were waiting for you frm half an hr.where did you go?.By the way i'm Mr.Raghunath Naik got it?Raghu said these teasing Antara.They began to walk fast towards the place where the bus was waiting.All of them were happy to see her back and she was fine too.Raghu and Antara boarded the bus and she apologized to all for the inconvenience they had due to her.

The bus started its journey to lucknow again.While the journey Raghu and Antara came to knw abt each other.RAGHU was a young businessman gng to his aaji's house.His car had some trouble on the way.how he had to take the bus frm mid way.Antara was cmng from her uncle's house and gng to her home in lucknow.Both talkd a lot on the journey.They reached Lucknow 1 hr late frm the time of arrival.All of them got down with their luggages and left.Raghu and Antara too got down with their luggages and Antara was feeling an unknwn sadness to bid a gud bye.Raghu told her with a smile "Oye madamji ,nxt time be careful on your journey and it was nice to meet you.Phir milenge" .Antara just smiled and both left and startd for their destination.

Wil they meet again?Wt the destiny planned for them.

To be continued.. :-)

Regards

Archana(Archu2013)

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Author's note..

I apologise to all of you for this late update of OS: kismat connection. part 3.
since i had trouble with my gmail, i wasn't able to mail this part of OS earlier..

Archana.

OS: KISMAT CONNECTION

Part-3

Raghu was on the recliner with his laptop. "are you bc ?" Aaji asked seeing him with his laptop.

Raghu placed the laptop on the recliner and went near Aaji.He give her a warm hug,"Oh Aaji,i missed you very much.i was just checking some mails from my clients.Come in and sit here."He made Aaji sit on the bed and lied on her lap."i missed you too son.I thought u're busy with some work" aaji said smilingly stroking his hair."Nothing is more important than you Aaji" Raghu replied holding aaji's hand.(Raghu lost his parents in an accident.Now Aaji was the only person as family.He loved his aaji very much.)

"Well, what did you decide about the matter we discussed last time?" Aaji askd Raghu stroking his hair again.Raghu just smiled.

A lady was giving instructions to the servant in kitchen.Someone calls her name and she leaves towards the drawing room.A man in his late 50's was sitting on the couch.He enquires about the arrangements and she assures him that everything was fine.Their conversation breaks when they heard the door bell.

A beautiful girl was watching the moon from her balcony.Someone knocked at the door and she turned towards the door.

The guests were served with tea and they were having a nice conversation with each other.One of the guest asks the man," Where is your daughter?".The man was about to answer he saw his wife walking down the stairs along with their daughter."Here comes my princess!" the man said proudly.

The girl was really looking gorgeous in her green anarkali salwar.She greeted all with a namaste and was made to sit with the guests. The old lady among the guest asked her name. She replied :"Antara".Then the lady asked the guy seated nxt to her "I like this girl, did you like her,Raghu?"
Both Raghu and Antara was looking at each other as if they can't believe their eyes.Raghu and Antara were happy to see again.Both their families were happy too since Antara and Raghu liked each other and soon both were going to get married.

Thus Antara and Raghu met again.
Destiny connected them again...
for a life time journey...:-)