OS : Tere Mere Beech Mein! A Songfic!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover
Aww loved it so cute😳 please yaar write more!!

I will try! Let the inspiration hit me!

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suhaiba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

woow...superb!! as usual...luvd it...wil b waitng fr tmrw nite...

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goodstorywins

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

It is such a beautiful creation. I literally imagined them while listening to the song. And i must tell ha, Raghu looks so handsome as hubby and Antu looks so cutie wearing kurta-jeans in my imagination.

By the way-"Aur apne pati ko bhool gayi! Jo tere baghair so nahi paata! Jisko tujhe baahon mein liye baghair neend nahi aati! Tu use bhool gayi nai?

THIS LINE KILLED ME RE!!!😳😳

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Sugan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

So cute...well written...I Loved it...

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madhutanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Oh lovely dear... enjoyed reading it..:.

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Nowrin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

hayy hayy married Rantara.... oh !!! kab ayega aise seq???...and Ana ...

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Onlyrantra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautiful update as like the song..lovely yr

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zzinia2411

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW CUTIE! THIS WAS JUST LOVELY! IT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD! OHMYYY CUTIE, U SHOULD SERIOUSLY WRITE MORE! I WOULD LOVE TO READ THEM! 😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: goodstorywins
It is such a beautiful creation. I literally imagined them while listening to the song. And i must tell ha, Raghu looks so handsome as hubby and Antu looks so cutie wearing kurta-jeans in my imagination.
By the way-"Aur apne pati ko bhool gayi! Jo tere baghair so nahi paata! Jisko tujhe baahon mein liye baghair neend nahi aati! Tu use bhool gayi nai?
THIS LINE KILLED ME RE!!!😳😳

Thanks for the review!

And I am really happy that you read the update while listening to the song! That really enhances the one shot! Yes, Raghu and Antara were cutie when I imagined too. Especially the part where the song comes "tere mere beech mein kabhi jo raaz ho koi" That whole part was the most enjoyable when I imagined it!

And by the way, that is my fav. line from the os too!