Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148) - Page 20

Wow loved it the way raghu left her and antara was restless bcz raghu was in pain omg and she hugged him hayee and raghu finally bandaged her wound loved the update it was worth the wait and thanks for pm do update soon

brilliant writing...

You must write everyday...

Amazing yaar xx

HEY GRT SS N GRT PART INDEED U R A GOOD WRITER THE WAY U EXPRESSED THE PAIN OF RAGHU.. THE RESTLESS ANTARA AND EVEN SHYNESS GRT SS KEEP WRITING PLS PM THE NEXT TIME

Lovely update dear..

Originally posted by: shabana20

Lovely update dear..

Do pm me please,Thanks!..

Originally posted by: harshita1996

HEY GRT SS N GRT PART INDEED U R A GOOD WRITER THE WAY U EXPRESSED THE PAIN OF RAGHU.. THE RESTLESS ANTARA AND EVEN SHYNESS GRT SS KEEP WRITING PLS PM THE NEXT TIME

Originally posted by: emanali

Raghux pain
Antras concern
Mind blowing scenery
Truely romantic atmosphere
n true lovers
Then lift session
Then bandage
Oh my God oh my God loved it loved it loved it
Amazing,fabulous tremendous mind blowing fantastic bombastic zabardastic paisa wasul job loved part 7
Thnx 4 considering my request u hv truely made my weekend
Kal job pe ja kr easily boss ka sara hwa face bear kr loon gi

Originally posted by: emanali

Sry.bhool gaye antra shy nd the way raghu deals hr ws superb jiggx
At last jutay nahe bunch of flowers for u jigg
I ws completely lost while i ws reading as my vision is tooo 3 nd 4 much strong i felt m directing the act specially raghuz narrow part wali lift...jaldi jaldi 8th part b likho na pampx

it was fab. was almost completely lost reading this. came to senses after it was over😆 cant wait to read more