RaNtara FF ||Jeene Laga Hoon|| Ch. 6 Pg. 22 - Page 8

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Originally posted by: sonu-monu

Chandiniii O mere chandiniii !!

What an update ji ,

Dil khush gita :D

enjoyed every bit of the update past and present and can i just say love Raghu here ,

he can be mean but he is sooo caring as well ,

love him and machmach is to die for ,
i want a afriend like machmach , he is awesome !!


cant wait to see what happens in the hotel :D

Grinning while thinking abt it *:P
hahahhah

in all fabulous update :D

loved Rantara but here i also love NIkki character too !!

cant wait wht is store for us but till nw im loving it !!

best of luck with ur results i bet agar test logic or creativity pay ho ,
then u will top no doubt :D

thanks for the lovely update :)

haha thanks so much yaar im reallly glad you like it :D

Originally posted by: mariam42

Yay!! Romance I love it! You write so beautifully, can't wait for the next update and loads more romance :)

Thanks so much Yaar :D

Originally posted by: sibani

part 4 part 4 part 4... i just cant wait for it... u write it in such a lovely way...

Thanks so much yaar :D

Originally posted by: FatemaMazahir17

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Chapter 4

Alright Antara we are here Raghu said stoping the car and putting the car into park. "Come on let's go" he said getting out of the car.
"Raghu are you stupid? I am blind-folded how do you expect me to get out the car? If I fall?" Antara said folding her arms in anger. Raghu closed his door. "Raghu" Antara screamed hearing the door close. "Yaar yeh phatu kaha gaye" she said grazing her hand around the car trying to find the door handle. As soon as she did the car door opened up.
"Jaaneman" Raghu said sweetly as he swung the door open. Raghu undid Antara's seatbelt and lifted her out of the car.
"Raghu what are you doing? Put me down! If we are in a public place and you are lifting me I swear I am going to kill when this blind-fold comes off" Antara said squirming in his arms.
" Toota hua phool khushboo de jata hai. Beeta hua pal yaadien de jata hai. har shakhs ka apna andaz hota hai. Koi zindagi mein pyar, toh koi pyar mein zindgai de jata hai" Raghu said closing the door behind him. He noticed her blushing and kissed her cheek as he carried her to their destination.
*Yaar where he is taking me? God I can't believe his is carrying me that too in public most likely* Raghu looked down at Antara's face and saw she was in some sort of deep thought. "Jaaneman stop asking where I am taking you. When you see where you are I bet you will make love to me" Raghu said laughing and lifting her up higher to get a better hold on her. Antara's mouth dropped in shock and hit him on the arm. "Yaar tum kitni baari ho" he said laughing one again but it resulted in him getting hit once again.
"Are we almost there?" Antara asked chilling in his arms because she didnt have any other choice.
"ha baba just a few more steps" Raghu said as he continued to walk. After a few minutes Antara felt her support loosening up. Raghu slowly placed her on the ground. "We are here" Raghu said.
Still blind-folded Antara tried to figure out what she was by using her 3 senses: sound, touch, and smell. As she stood there she felt the ground below here with her feet. "sand" Antara said puzzling as she heard waves and could smell barbeque. "Raghu why are we at the beach" she asked standing there.
"Raghu?" she asked again not receiving any response. "Raghu if you don't say anything I am going to take this blind-fold off" Antara said stretching out her arm and slowly walking in order to feel around to see if Raghu was just teasing her. However, she didnt feel anything. Antara slowly took off her blind-fold but her eyes were still closed. As she slowly opened her eyes she let her eyes adjust to the light and was shocked at the sight.
Right in front of her was wooden table with two wooden chairs on either side. On the table were two glasses of wine and in the center was a vase with red roses, Antara's favorite. The table was sitting right against the the water and the sand. The cool breeze was filled with romance but the only thing that was missing was Antara's Majnu, Ranjha, Romeo, her Jaan and etc.
Antara stood there mesmerized by the sight. "You like it?" Raghu asked hugging Antara from the back and resting his chin on her shoulder.
"Jaan like it? No. Love it? Yes." Antara said turning around in his hold and hugging him tightly. "Thank you so much" she said hugging him tighter. His arms wrapped around her waist tightly and they stood there just embracing each other and enjoying the moment. All of sudden Raghu heard sniffles. He slowly pulled apart from Antara, but she looked down so he couldnt see her. He brought his hand to her chin and lifted her head up, but she still didn't make eye contact with him.
"Antara meri taraf dekho" Raghu said gazing her trying to figure why she was crying. But Antara shook her head and continued to look down as a tear trickled down her face. Raghu brought his finger up to her cheek and picked up tear before it could fall on the ground "Phew I almost became broke" Raghu said rubbing the tear between his fingers.
"Kya?" Antara whispered as she looked up confusingly at Raghu. She continued to sniffle as she awaited Raghu's answer.
"Well you see these tears of yours are priceless if I lose any of them I am definitely going to be broke" Raghu said catching another tear.
"Matlab?" Antara asked still confused.
"Aree budu I am just saying that you look really ugly when you cry" Raghu said laughing but Antara wasnt amused by him and smacked him on the arm. Raghu just kept laughing and pulled her back into a hug until she was just laughing in his arms.
She pulled apart from him and kissed him on the cheek. "I love you"
"I love you too" Raghu said returning her kiss. He held onto her hand and led her to the table. He pulled out the chair and indicated her to sit down. She sat down and he pushed the chair closer to the table. He walked over to the other side and took a seat himself.
"So what's the plan" Antara asked taking a sip of the wine.
"Well I have a lot planned but that is for me to know and for you to find out" Raghu said taking a sip of his wine.
"Sir its ready" someone said coming up to Antara and Raghu. Raghu gave the guy some money and he left.
"What's ready?" Antara asked taking another sip as she watched the guy walk away.
"Let's go" Raghu said taking the glass out of Antara's hand and placing it on the table. He grabbed her hand and took her back to the car. They both got in the car and were once again back on the road. Raghu stopped the car in front of a movie theater.
"Movie theater?" Antara asked confused as they both got out of the car. Raghu gave his car key to the valet person and they both walked inside the theater hand in hand.
"Ha" Raghu said leading her into one of the theaters. As soon as they entered flowers were showered upon them. Antara smiled widely and spun around mesmerized by the flowers. Raghu smiled and led her to the middle row. At the two seats was a cup of soda with two straws and a box of popcorn, along with different candies on either side of the seats. "Beto" Raghu said pointing to the seat. Antara took a seat and than Raghu did.
"Sir should I start the movie?" one of the movie attendees asked.
"Yes go ahead" Raghu said giving him tip.
"Raghu why is the theater empty?" Antara asked while opening a box of skittles excitedly.
"Maine pura theater ko book karliya" Raghu said stealing some of Antara's skittles.
"Seriously meri liye?" Antara said turning towards him as the preview of movies began to show.
"Nai Nikki keh liye yeh sab kiya" Raghu said turning towards the screen once again getting hit by Antara.
"Very funny" Antara said giving him a mocking laugh. "Thank you" she said reaching over the arm chair to give a kiss to Raghu. She was about to kiss his cheek when Raghu turned towards Antara and their lips touched. Antara quickly pulled away and started to blush.
"Hai mein mar jawaan" Raghu said eating the popcorn and the movie had just started.
"No way" Antara screamed as a few piece of skittles fell on the floor because she jumped out of her seat.
"WOLVERINE" Antara shouted turning towards Raghu and smiling like no other.
"mhm sirf tumare liye" Raghu said as he kept eating his popcorn.
"But this movie isnt suppose to come out until tomorrow" Antara said putting down the box of skittles and waling over to Raghu.
"Ya but tumare liye mein kuch bhi karta hoon" Raghu said holding onto Antara's hand and pulling her over to hand. Antara fell onto Raghu laps and just blushed. "tum kush ho?" He asked wrapping his arms around Antara's waist.
"Bohot!" She said indicating with her hands as she spread her arms out. She placed her hand on Raghu's cheeks and brought his face closer to her. "I freaking love you" she said and sealed it with a kiss. Antara got up and sat back down on her seat to enjoy the movie.
Midway through the movie Antara leaned down to get a sip of the soda when her head bumped into Raghu's head. They both leaned tot he side to get a sip of the soda and both of the bumped their head. "Sorry" Antara said rubbing her head as she rubbed Raghu's at the same time.
"It's okay babes. I am also sorry" Raghu said taking Antara's hand off his head and kissing the back of it.
"Its okay" she said turning back to the movie. "Oye dekho intermission hai" Antara said jumping up. "Raghu tell them to pause the movie. I'm going to go to the washroom. I will be back" Antara said getting up and walking out. Raghu got one of the attendees to pause the movie and he also walked out of the theater.
*God today is going to be simply amazing. I am so happy to have Raghu in my life! I still remember when we just simply hated each other but look at us now* Antara thought as she checked herself out in the mirror to make sure she was once again presentable. *click* She turned around as she heard the door open, but didn't see anyone. "Hello, koi hai?" she asked walking around cautiously. She was a bit scared as she got no response, but just thought it was a part of her imagination. She turned around "Ahhh" she screamed and quickly a hand came over her mouth to quiet her down.
"Shh main hoon" Raghu said slowly taking his hand off of her mouth.
"Raghu you scared me" Antara said breathing heavily due to fright. "What are you doing here" she asked turning back to the mirror as she touched up her make-up.

"Kuch nai! I missed you" Raghu said walking behind her and hugging her from the back as she continued to do her make-up

"You know this is a girl's restroom right" Antara said as she applied her lip gloss on.

"I placed one of the attendees outside to make sure no one comes in" Raghu said kissing her shoulder.

"Ohhh I see" Antara said turning around.

"So why are you fixing your make-up when it's not even messed up" Raghu asked grazing her cheeks with the back of his hand.

"Just because . Do you have a problem?" Antara asked.

"I do" Raghu said. He immediately captured her lips into his, without further a due they started making out. Turning left to right., the session had no means of ending. Raghu placed his hands on Antara's waist and he began to caress her waist. She felt herself getting weak by his touch and grasped his shoulders tightly in order to support herself. Raghu continued to caress her waist as the kiss between them got deeper and deeper. Antara slowly opened up allowing Raghu to enter her mouth. The amount of pleasure they were enjoying was not even equal to the amount of intoxication for a person. Raghu began to suck on her bottom lip, but Antara winced in pain as it began to bleed. Raghu released her lips and gazed into her eyes. They smiled at each other as the y were breathing heavily. "Raghu" Antara whispered, but was shushed by Raghu's finger. Raghu smiled and dug into her neck. He trailed his kisses to her ear and bit off the back of the earring. He pulled the earring out and sucked on her earlobe. She couldn't take this intoxication anymore. Antara quickly pushed Raghu off of her in full force. Raghu hit the bathroom door and stood their shocked to see that Antara had pushed him away with this much force. *Yaar maybe I went too far. But it wasn't my fault. She was seriously turning me on* Raghu thought standing there. Antara walked up to him with anger in her eyes. "Look Antara I'm sor.." Antara interrupted Raghu with a shocking statement "Shut up and kiss me" she said pulling Raghu by the hair and forcing her lips on his. Raghu stood there shocked as Antara continued to claim his lips, but he wasn't doing anything. Antara realizing that Raghu was still stiff removed her lips from Raghu's and looked at him as she caressed his cheeks in worriness.

"Raghu what's wrong? Is everything okay?" Antara asked breaking Raghu out of his trance.

"Huh? Ya everything is fine. I'm just a bit shocked that's it" Raghu said bringing his hands to her hips so he could hold her close.

"Oh sorry. I just'I just'" Antara couldn't finish her sentence as she began to shy away realizing what she had done. "I'm sorry Raghu. I was the spur of the moment kind of thing" Antara said blushing and hiding herself in Raghu's arms.

"It's okay Miss. Call, shall we go back to finish up the movie?" Raghu asked hugging Antara tightly. He felt her nod her head in agreement and walked her outside as she kept hugging him. Once they entered the theater and they sat down Raghu ordered one of the guys to play the movie.

After about an hour the movie had finally finished. Antara began clapping like a little kid and whistled at the ending of the movie. "Raghu that was such a fantastic movie right?" Antara asked turning towards him to see that he was sleeping. "RAGHU" she screamed he quickly jerked up and walked over to her.

"Antara are you okay? Are you hurt or anything?" Raghu asked checking her to make sure she was fine.

"Shut up. You freaking fell asleep" Antara said turning around and folding her arm in anger.

"Sorry yaar I was very tired. All this planning just really got me tired and there is still more" He said rubbing his face and then combing his hair back with his hand. Antara turned around towards him and saw how tired he was. *Gosh I'm so stupid for getting mad at him. He has been working so hard and here I am yelling at him* she thought as she walked up to him.

"Raghu I'm sorry. Completely forgot please forgive me?" Antara asked holding her ears in an apologetic manner.

"Why is the birthday girl saying sorry?" Raghu asked removing her hands from her ears. "I'll forgive you on one condition"

"And that is?" Antara asked curious as to what the condition may be.

"You let me take you out for coffee before our next planned event" he asked taking her hands into his and kissing them.

"Let's go" she said smiling link her hand with his. They both walked over to the nearest Starbucks and ordered two tall white mocha macchiatos.

"How does it taste" Raghu asked taking a sip of his coffee.

"Sweet" Antara said smiling. Finally after finishing their coffee, Raghu took Antara back to the car.

"Now where are we going?" Antara asked as she sat in the car.

"Well it's about 5:30 so I have a special place to take you and we only have half an hour to get there" Raghu said turning on the ignition and driving off. Antara noticed that they were driving up hill past a bunch of tress and small cottages.

"Why are we going up a mountain" Antara asked as she gazed outside to capture the wonderful scenery.

"You know you ask a lot of questions" Raghu said as he continued to drive not bothering to answer her questions. Finally parking the car on top of a hill Raghu got out of the car and walked over to the other side. He opened the door and presenting his hand for Antara saying "Madam, may I?"

"Yes you may" she said placing her hand into his hand and getting out of the car.

Antara was mesmerized by the beauty as Raghu quickly closed the car door and checked his watch.

"Okay so we have 2 minutes" Raghu said smiling.

"2 minutes for what" Antara asked confused as to what they had to wait 2 minutes for.

"Oh will see" Raghu said providing his arm to her so she can loop her arm through it. They began to walk a little bit up the hill when Antara noticed a bench. They both walked up the bench and sat down.

"So now what" Antara asked looking at Raghu

"10'9'8'7" Raghu was counting down. He shifted Antara's face forward as he finished counting "3'2'1'0"

"Oh my god Raghu, you brought me here to see this? It's absolutely beautiful" Antara said as she leaned her head onto Raghu's shoulder and watched the sun set into the night.

"I knew you would like it" Raghu said as held her hand in his and rested his head on top of Antara's. After watching the sunset Raghu and Antara both got up and headed back to the car.

"Raghu, I'm hungry" Antara said sitting in the car.

"I knew you would say that. That is why we are having dinner at your favorite place" Raghu said starting the car.

"Taco Bell?" Antara screamed as Raghu laughed and nodded his head.

"Yup the one and only" Raghu said as he drove off. They finally arrived at Taco Bell.

"Get I get 2 bean cheese burritos, 2 nacho supremes no meat substitute beans, and 1 large mountain dew baja blast" Antara ordered smiling at Raghu. Raghu paid for the meal got the table number and sat down next to Antara who was already sipping at the drink.

"Let me have some" Raghu asked reached out for the drink, but Antara immediately pulled it closer to her.

"No its mine, if you want one go get one" Antara said sipping it like a little kid.

"But I want that one" Raghu said once again reaching for it, Antara pulled it away again.

"Fine than, I'm not talking to you" he said folding his arm and turning away. From the corner of his eye he looked at Antara to see if she was moving the drink towards him, but she was drinking it happily. "Fine you win" he said turning back and smiling. Antara laughed and offered him the drink. He took a sip and their meal finally arrived. After finishing their so called dinner Raghu and Antara went back to the car.

"God today was so much fun. Thank you so much for taking me out you honestly have no idea how much fun I had" she said pecking him on the cheek.

"Well it's not finished yet" Raghu said turning on the car.

"What are you serious?" Antara asked looking at Raghu as he began to drive.

"One last surprise promise" Raghu said as he continued to drive. After about 45 minutes Raghu parked the car in front of Blue Lagoon Club House. Both him and Antara got out of the car and he gave the keys to the valet people.

"What are we doing at a club?" Antara asked walking along with Raghu.

"what else do you do at a club?" Raghu asked as he opened the door. Antara walked and immediately was surprised by the sight.

"Surprise" everyone shouted as Antara walked in shocked out of her wits.

"For me?" she shouted as she spinned around in wonder. Raghu walked up to her and placed his hand around her waist.

"Everything is for you babe" he said kissing her on her head. Antara walked up to every and gave them hugs.

"I can't believe you all made it" she said as she gave MachMach, Nikki, Geet, Amna, Parin, Kiran, Tanja, Nikhil, and Sunil a hug.

"How couldn't we?" MachMach said giving her a hug back.

"Hey we have to go get you ready, come with us" Nikki said as her and Geet pulled Antara along. Tanja, Parin, Kiran and Amna also tagged along.

"Bro grand party thanks for throwing it" Sunil said giving Raghu a hug.

"Na bro thanks for coming" Raghu said giving MachMach and Nikhil a hug as well. "Where did the girls go"

"They went to go get bhabi ready" MachMach said biting his tongue. "Sorry I mean Antara lol"

"Oh okay" Raghu said as they continued to chat. While upstairs the girls were getting Antara ready.

"How was your day so far Antara" Geet asked as she curled her hair.

"It was amazing seriously I can't tell you how much I love Raghu" Antara replied.

"Yaar I still remember when you first met him'love wasn't even possible then, but look at you now" Nikki said applying make-up on Anatara. All the girls chatted away as they got Antara ready.

"Gosh Raghu is going to die after he sees you" Tanja said.

"Kisi ki nazar na lagae" Amna said applying the kaala teeka behind Antara's left ear.

"Thanks guys for making the birthday extra special" Antara said giving them all an entire group hug.

'Ready to go kill some people" Parin asked.

"Yup let's go" Antara said.

The guys were chatting away when Sunil stopped responding. "Sunil" Raghu said waving his hand in front of his face. "What's wrong" Raghu asked. Sunil didn't anything, but just pointed at the staircase. Raghu turned around and was stunned. It was if the chand had made its way to earth. Raghu walked closer to her as she made her way to the bottom of the staircase.

"How do I look" Antara asked as she made her way in front of Raghu, but he didn't reply. Still in a trance he kept gazing at her with loving eyes as he adore every inch of her. "Raghu" she whispered as she started blushing because his gaze got stronger and stronger by the second.

"Damn you look hot Antara" Nikhil said as he walked up to her. Hearing that Raghu broke out of his trance and turned around and glared at Nikhil. Nikhil stopped in his tracks "I mean you look great Antarabhabi" Raghu smiled and turned back to Antara. He offered her his hand as he led her to the center of the dance floor. Everyone around them was clapping as Antara and Raghu stood there in the center.

"Close your eyes" he whispered in her ears. She blushed and slowly closed her eyes.

Jeene laga hoon..

Antara opened her eyes to see that Raghu was not near her.

Pehle se zyada..

Antara turned around looking for where the voice was coming from. She knew it was Raghus's

Pehle se zyada
Tumpe marne laga..

The spotlights turned on and there was Raghu dressed up in a black and grey suit looking as dashing as possible.

Main, mera dil
Aur tum ho yahan

Raghu walked up to Antara and put forth his hand. She smiled and placed her hand in his as he pulled her closer and they began to dance.

Phir kyun ho
Palkein jhukayein wahan
Tum sa haseen

Raghu pulled apart from her and twirled her in his arms. She hit his chest and Raghu wrapped his arms around her from the back.

Pehle dekha nahin
Tum isse pehle the
Jaane kahan..

As they swayed arm in arm Raghu lifted her off the ground as she rested her back on her shoulder.

Jeene laga hoon...

Pehle se zyada..
Pehle se zyada
Tumpe marne laga..

Raghu put her down on the ground and once again pulled her closer to him.

Humm.. humm..

Raghu leaned forward and capture her lips in a sweet kiss. The crowd around them clapped in celebration as they broke apart from the kiss. Antara began to blush and Raghu got down on one knee. He pulled out a box from his pocket and opened it up within it was a ring. Antara looked down at Raghu as she broke out into a smile as tears began to flow down her cheeks. The crowd jumped up in excitement and became cheering.

"Antara Kaul you are the chandni to my dull life, the muskan to my joyless life, and the saans to this body. Without you I am just a lifeless soul. Will you bring roshni to my life? Will you marry me" Raghu asked as he pulled the ring out of the box and held it up to her.

Chandni hw cn u write a such a lovely update 😳

really loved it chandni... n "raghu glaring" i just loved d jealousy...

It lovely update yr...awesome...thanks for pm me:)