Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150)

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Rachna

@richurachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

uff ria hw Raghu can leave that person. usne antara ko gandi nazar se dekha kaise. ria Raghu ke haath se usko mar khilwana zaroor.

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: richurachna
uff ria hw Raghu can leave that person. usne antara ko gandi nazar se dekha kaise. ria Raghu ke haath se usko mar khilwana zaroor.

richu antara samne thi na iss liye controle kar liya... ussey raaghu kaise chor sakta hain jo antara ko gandhi nazar se deekhe... agey agey dekho hota hain kya😉

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harshita gangwani

@harshita1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Ria amazing girl this reminded mee d rain scene bit different bt

Jst amazing..really nice precap is jst amazing..

Keep writing loved it..

Update soon..:)

Thanks fr pm..<3

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

nice update ria behna 😆

DM aur antu ki takrar shuru...loved the way antu replied back...😃

mujhe laga ki raghu dhulai karega uss kaluya ki...but ok...at least ek touching scene toh mil gayi Rantara ki😉😆

n thnx yr...tu ne meri stupid idea use ki 😆😆

continue soon n next time apun ko long update chahiye samjhi 😈😆

Edited by sweetieswagata - 11 years ago

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gargi21

@gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Thanks a lot luved it... :)

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata
nice update ria behna 😆
DM aur antu ki takrar shuru...loved the way antu replied back...😃
mujhe laga ki raghu dhulai karega uss kaluya ki...but ok...at least ek touching scene toh mil gayi Rantara ki😉😆
n thnx yr...tu ne meri stupid idea use ki 😆😆
continue soon n next time apun ko long update chahiye samjhi 😈😆

uss kaluya ko toh raghu baad mein dekh lega.. tu fikar mat kar..😉

yaar tera idea itna mast tha ki use kar liya😆

bilkul yaar... long update hi dongi..🤣

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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Dm's n Antara's dialougues were fantastic ... loved it as usual ...yeh Kaluya to Antara ko Raghu ke pas pohcha diya par yeh kaluya ka intention kya tha ?? Raghu ne kuch bola kyun nahi usko ??? ohhh what wll happen after this ??? am so eager to know ... so dear plzz update soon ...n it was fantabulous