OS Summer Mist - Raghu's part updated - Page 2

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Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice OS
congrats on the third place
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ranju beautiful OS 👏👏👏 .. u deserved the winning title for it 😳

Loved the way u described Shivani's slow realisation of what place Raghu holds in her heart and the way she tries to understand her husband ... very real and touching ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ... your wordshv a beautiful flow and one could almost imagine the whole scenario in real while reading it 😳

Beautifully written 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

nice OS

congrats on the third place


Thank you so much!! :) 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Btw i forgot to congratulate di.congratulations di.🥳
Party kab?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Ranju beautiful OS 👏👏👏 .. u deserved the winning title for it 😳

Loved the way u described Shivani's slow realisation of what place Raghu holds in her heart and the way she tries to understand her husband ... very real and touching ⭐️ ... your wordshv a beautiful flow and one could almost imagine the whole scenario in real while reading it 😳

Beautifully written 👏👏


Thank you so much Jyoti for liking it and commenting 😳😳

Honestly, I wasn't expecting it to be noticed at all because the other stories were really nice! So the third place also came as a big surprise 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Uma-Arhaanfan

Btw i forgot to congratulate di.congratulations di.🥳
Party kab?


Thank you darling! 🤗
Arrre party toh tab karenge jab Raghu pyaar ka izhaar karega 😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations on your winning.. am sO sory I jus got to read it..
brilliant writing, loved it.. thank you so much.. do write more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kautilya04

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I don't follow the serial but I loved your story.
So wonderfully told. Really liked the way you showed her come to a decision. It didn't seem abrupt or sudden - just right.
Life is about choices - we need to weigh in our minds whats more important and being in their house clearly showed her what she wanted.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Add One More Part.
This Is Lovely.
:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ranju what a lovely OS👏

So beautifully written, I could feel all that Shivani was going thru, please continue I want to see Raghu feelings as well.😛

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