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PJaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thandaiyei madiyil vaithu

wumizh neer thudaithu

appan tholil sumandhatharku

thayai mari than piraviku

perumai serthadhu, indha sei.

Vedh, put his dad on his lap

wiped his saliva

His dad has carried him

on his shoulders

But this son became

his mother and gave

pride to his birth.

Edited by Dabhfan23 - 9 years ago

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KaviJai

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Posted: 9 years ago

So nice padmaji, second one is expressing of viewers point...

VEDH, u are a colorful moon

came in the Surya sky.

These lines are prompt..

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Vasanthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dabhfan23

Thandaiyei madiyil vaithu
wumizh neer thudaithu
appan tholil sumandhatharku
thayai mari than piraviku
perumai serthadhu, indha sei.

Vedh, put his dad on his lap
wiped his saliva
His dad has carried him
on his shoulders
But this son became
his mother and gave
pride to his birth.

wow thank you padma ji

u spoke my mind

with beautiful lines⭐️👏

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HalleNJ

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Posted: 9 years ago

Simply superb...PJ, you rock!

kavi nicely put...

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Vasanthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

our dabh forum AASUKAVI [instant poet writer]

PADMAJI⭐️👏

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Manju

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb PJ⭐️ perfect poem for Vedh/VeRaj❤️

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Manju

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Posted: 9 years ago

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PJaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you, VJ, Manju, Niru and Kavi.

Thank u for your kind and encouraging words.

Manju your siggy with my lines is very nice.

I will keep that as a souvenir from Anas AT friends.

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PJaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vmaa
our dabh forum AASUKAVI [instant poet writer]
PADMAJI⭐️👏

Thank you VJ. It means a lot to me.

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Vasanthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hehe we were just trying to make a sad face to click a selfie and see the result lol

'Humse Naa Ho Payega'

This chutku@devyanshtapuriah26 is a Rockstar... Fun to have him around

Instagram media annu2cool_anwesha - Hehe we were just trying to make a sad face to click a selfie and see the result lol 'Humse Naa Ho Payega' This chutku @devyanshtapuriah26 is a Rockstar... Fun to have him around

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