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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: maaneet-2012

Hi gaga.🤗 sorry i am now reading your update,😳 i was not in good mood all those last days, so you made jo a doctor..😆 where is nanny subhi, hope she is not responsible for ved sickness because of her multiple preoccupations.😆😆...


OMG.. I am very innocent .. I donno the meaning of cocaine also.. 😲😲😆



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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Nice update Gaja ... 😊
Sandy will find the truth soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Sorry Gaja ,
didn't check your FF. as I'm avoiding episodes.
so just came only to OFF set, SurYa and Anika threads.

Wow nice updates. 👍🏼

keep on updating 😃

He he he , Dr Jo 😆😆. U added whole forum members😲😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
don't worry officer subhi i was joking only,😆 but how can a good IPS officer dont know the meaning of cocaine.😲😆.
Nice update gaga. keep going..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
thank u rosy maha ss @subha u doesnt know cocaine?! i think i am going to kick ma bucket due to heart attack... just 4 fun...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
LAST PART:


sandy rama subha check the chocolates.yes they contain cocaine in it which makes everyone crave for that.sonali tries to trace vijay yadav, the owner of fantasy chocolates.
rosy asks transasia to give the details of the statue creators, as they sent these statues.they gave her the details.she gave that info to anjana ayisha and dev.with the statue makers they have found the mastermind behind them, yazhini(i have made my sister villain too 😃 😃 ).
anjana created the proof against gajalakshmi midhun and vijay yadav and mailed them to sandy.sandy with these details plans to arrest them she plans to arrest them on the same time so they cant escape.
sandy reaches vijay yadav's home.
subha reaches gaja's home and sonali reaches midhun's place.they arrest all the three at the same time.with the proofs they have managed to put them behind bars.fantasy chocolate was banned throughout the country.finally they have succeeded in this mission too.
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ved: papa i want chocolates na.please ...
suraj : ved hereafter papa will make homemade chocolates for u.
"yes nobody will make sweets so tasty as your dad's ". suraj turns and sees who is that.maha was standing there.
suraj: maha u r here?? do u need ma help
sandy comes there and sees her.maha asks sandy whether she can come with her.
maha: u r an inspiration to everyone.so our officer wants u to come with me to our training place and give some speech.
sandy: sure maha.i will come there.
maha: surajji last time i forgot to buy sweets in your shop.so this time i will buy it.
suraj: dont worry maha i will give it to u freely.and give some sweets to your family too.
maha: no no i will eat everything before i reach ma home.else i wont get anything...

they all laugh happily...
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ps: thanks to everyone who read ma ff.and sorry for the mistakes.feel free to criticise...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
yay.. villains got caught 😛😛
Nice FF Gaja.. 👏
very well written .. initially it was hilarious to see our names but later it got serious ..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Congrats for the successful mission guys,👏 all were in search for the criminals and i was stand near suraj shop,😳😆 but it was part of the mission right?😉 i feel very sorry for rosy,😆 Translation knot is still chasing her too here.🤣

i am very happy finally i got suraj famous sweet..But you made me greedy by eating all the sweets gaga.😳..

Very nice Gaga but why last part????.😭.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
thank u maha and ss..
maha i already dragged na...when i thought to write an ff i didnt know this would have 9 parts...and also due to continuous exams am stuck 😭 😭 ...i wont have leave also...so thought of completing it...

btw ss why u ended ur os 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
wow lakshmi
nice ff
keep writing more when you are free 😊

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