SurYa OS/FF-Tere Liye Saathiya part 3 Page 4

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SurYa OS-Tere Liye Saathiya

Note-This is my first attempt to write an os on Surya.

Characters

1) Sandhya and her family

2) Sooraj and his family

3) Preeti Maheswari-Sandhya's Friend

4) Kavita Agrawal-Sooraj's Ex fiance

Story

Part 1-Sandhya Aur Sooraj ka Jivan

Synopsis of the scene-Sandhya was a chirpy and enthusiastic girl. A young girl of 19; full of vigor and energy. She dreams to be an IPS officer who will always stand by, supports and walks on the right path. She lived with her parents, brother and sister-in-law.

Scene 1:-Sandhya's life

Sandhya preparing for her 2nd year final exams. Tomorrow paper was her favorite subject Political Science. She has many things to go through. Suddenly the power cut off was in her area. She went to her Pappa to borrow a candle.

Sandhya said"Pappa mujhe Candle cahiye kal mera politics ka exam hai mujhe padhna hai"

Arvind (Sandhya's father) replied her"Beta tum tension mat lo aur agar tum into kam light padhai karoge toh tumhari aankh par pressure padega. Beta chalo hum donor milkier ek jaga chalte hain wahan tumhari paresani khatam Ho jayegi. "

Sandhya and Arvind went to near by park. Sandhya was amazed at the sight. She saw there was a Gandhi statue in the park.

Arvind says to her" Beta kuch log esse hote hain jo apni jeevan ke saath dosre ke jeevan se bhi andheron ke badal ko khatam karke unki jeevan mein ek nayi asha ki ek nayi kiran bhar dete hain.

Beta meri yeh baat ko hamesa yaad rakhna aur doshron ke zindagi mein hamesa asha ki kiran banke dikhana.beta ab tum apni padhai suru karo mein yahin pass mein hoon."

Sandhya was studying after some few minutes she feels someone's presence near her side. She noticed near her books a sweet box. She wondered who have left it. As soon as she opened it she noticed her favorite sweet Kaju Barfi.She started to eat. Suddenly her father appeared and when he also noticed it he can't control and joined with her daughter as it was also his favorite sweet. he didn't inquired Sandhya about this sweet box.

When she returned home she told this to her mother Kanchan,

She scolded both father-daughter duos.

She said" Sandhya abhi tu itni badi hoke bhi ek anjaan admi ke choode gayee mithayi ke dibese se mithai ko khati hai.

Aur aap....

Manti hoon ki Sandhya abhi bhi bachi hai par aap do bachoon ke baap ho kar bhi esi harkat karte hain. Bade ho gayee hain phir bhi bahut bachpana karte hain.

Tahak gayi hoon main aapse, dono baap-beti jakar haath dho lije, mein khana lagati hoon. "

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Edited by daisypragnya - 11 years ago

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Synopsis of the scene-Sooraj was a self-made man. Like Sandhya, he is full of life. His happiness lies in his family. He loves his parents. He lives with his parents, two brothers and one sister with the middle sister-in-law. He has no specific dream as Sandhya have; he runs a famous sweet shop.

Scene 2:-Sooraj's life

Sooraj was working in his sweet shop "Rathi Misthan Bhandar".

He was now going to close his shop but suddenly someone comes to his shop it was Ankur (Sandhya's brother).he had got transferred to US by his company. He ask to pack some Kesar Barfi,Peda and Gulab Jamun.He gave money to Sooraj.When Sooraj was going to give him change, he noticed that he was not there, he had left his purse.Sooraj understood he is in the Hanuman Gali( the lane which Sooraj resides).He immediately went near to Ankur and gave him the money and his purse.

Sooraj said"Bhai shab Aap apni purse bhulgayee the.Lagta hai se mein aapki kuch jaruri saman hai."

When Sooraj was handing the purse to Ankur, he notices Ankur who seems to be very happy. Sooraj says"Aap bahut khush lag rahe hain.Sayad isliye aap itni jaldi mein the."

Ankur was impressed with Sooraj's honesty. He says "Sukriya, aapke liye mere bahut kimti samaan kho janee se bach gaye.Aap jese log aaj ki duniya mein bahut kam dekhne ki leye milte hain."

He thanked him and the two strangers proceed in their way.

Sooraj went to his house for dinner. His mother was serving food to all. All were discussing about his marriage preparations.

After a long discussion Bhabo (aka Santosh, Sooraj's mother) shouted and asked them to leave for sleep.

Next the scene proceeds with Ankur, in his way of returning home, thinking in mind about Sooraj and Sandhya.

"He (Sooraj) was indeed a very good guy; if Sandhya will get like this person's hand in marriage then I will be relieved. I wish Sima auntie's son Rishav will be like him (Sooraj)."

Precap-Ankur is telling to his family about hi transfer. Later scene is shown with Ankur talking to Sandhya about Rishav

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This is all about the life go Sooraj and Sandhya before marriage

PS-Please this is my first os, post your views for it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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please comment ur views about the post


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start Daisypragnya...👏👏
Can u please use english becoz many of us don't know hindi... 😭😭
Waiting for the next part...
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okaay nxt update will be in english and sorry i will update the next part after 2 weeks
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Nice start daisypragnya. But i felt reading the written update of starting episodes. Bcz 80% story is same as episode. Try to change it in next part.
Sry if i hurt u.waiting fr next part
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okay i will try some twists in the next part but some part of the os is similar to dabh
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Originally posted by: daisypragnya

<font color="#3300cc">okay i will try some twists in the next part but some part of the os is similar to dabh</font>

k. Update soon. Waiting fr next part
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by end of this week i will update next part
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lovely os😃 write more

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