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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tanthya




Rabdiii ,

Why don't u make a E.A ... ?/ U will rock it 👍🏼


u mean emotional aatyachaar ? i know beta i will rock🤣 but seems like some hard work 🤣 but anything for my jaaneman😉☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: steffroc

u mean emotional aatyachaar ? i know beta i will rock🤣 but seems like some hard work 🤣 but anything for my jaaneman😉☺️




Haan Beta , wahi .. saw Caris ka BT that u made ...Lubbed it !!

Thats so shweet of u , My Yummy Chaat 😆😆😆


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanthya




Haan Beta , wahi .. saw Caris ka BT that u made ...Lubbed it !!

Thats so shweet of u , My Yummy Chaat 😆😆😆


actually cari mata made i just posted🤣 i dotn want to take the credit🤣
my gulab jamun i feel i wont be able to do it. people like cari mata are talented na🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: steffroc

actually cari mata made i just posted🤣 i dotn want to take the credit🤣

my gulab jamun i feel i wont be able to do it. people like cari mata are talented na🤣




Haan, yeh baat tho hai, Cari Mata is well talented ..Koi baat nahi hai, meri phirni... we will make use of ur spl skills later on..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sathya i have somethign else for u
i wrote long back means maybe 2-3years back a story about my jai walia 🤣
it was funny its for u
From Mumbai to Mount Abu


Jai Walia is missing someone , someone very close to his heart, someone whom he loved from bottom of his heart, someone for whom he can do anything, someone for whom he can give his life and today she is not with him but left him forever or for never he doesn't know anything about it, he just wants to have her back, have his life back, have his love back, have his breath back as she means everyting to him everything. And that eveything is his wife , his Bani. Bani left him as she saw him on a party with Roshni Chobra. Roshni Chopra was an old friend of JW who was always in love with him but he was just crzay abourt Bani dixit. Bani knew about roshnis feelings towards JW and could not stand her if she ever tried to come near her jai. But on that night she saw her husband, her Jai with that roshni. They both were lying on bed and roshnis hand were on her chest. She couldn't tolerate seeing her husbad with that lady and was shoked to see Jai in her arms as he always convinced her that he only loves bani and only Bani. Bani left from there without saying a word to JW . On the other hand Jw was drunk as roshni had made him drink so much that he was not in his senses hence went with roshni on in a hotelroom.But as Roshni being Roshni her plans had to backfire she made JW drink so much that he fainted before something happemed between them . Next morning Jw woke up and saw roshni beside him, he stood up shockingly and was about to leave as roshni called him and told what happened between them : But it was not easy to fool JW he grabbed her throat and threatened her not to come between him and his bani as he knows very well nothing happened between them.

As JW came back home he could not see bani anywhere. He shouted for Masi and required where she was and she informed him she left him forever as she saw him with Roshni in one room . She tried to stop her but she doesn't listen to her and left.
For many days Jw was trying to contact Bani but wasn't successful to reach her so he decided to go to mount abu himself and bring his bani back
As Jw is a big business tycoon he needed security . His Masi did not let him go alone and wanted him to be guard by someone. JW didn't listen to him so masi talked with his very close very close friend Raabi to pacify him to take security with him . Jw couldn't resist her dear close friend and agreed
The Security was not availabe for Jw because of mumbai attacks so Raabi decided To hrie a Gunda group. She hired them and let JW save from dangerous Angels . The group is called RPR Gundagiri who will bring Raabis King, kings of kings, king of hotness safely to his munni.

The journey TO MA

Navs and sam saw JW and kept looking at him
Navs: Omg samy He looks so hot so s**y. I think I am feeling dizzy : How will I manage To bring him safely to her wifey and that too without fainting
Sam: Shut up navs , you pagal no. 1 The man belongs to me . Look in his eyes there is written My name Sam . Omg He looks so s**y
Faru: Will you both shut up . He is Jw the Great JW who is married to a lady called jasoos Bani Walia
Sam and Navs who? We have never heard of jasoos Bani
Faru: Arre she is the lady who participated last time in Mahaanta race and What a good luck she has she won Mahaanta race
Sam and Navs. Oh Now we remember She was also in newspaper for winning mahaanta Race. But we must say she is very expert Mahaan as she had a very tough compititon, bafoon, Saloni, Vidya, soni. We have heard they all were very good mahaans but jasoos Bani Walia won the race
Faru: yeps she won and now Jw is going to bring his wife back as she got angry with him.
Taz. But why did she leave him.
Holly : Because that Walia was having an affair with Roshni
Deepo: Shut up holly : He was not having any affair. That idiot lady made him drink a lot and he was drunk:
Holly: oh really deepo. Jw is is so innocent baccha na that any one could make him dink alcohol
BTW why does he drink so much when he exactly knows he cant handle it
Deepo. He is not Baacha. Look how hot and s**y he looks and bachas are not s**y nor do they look hot but I agree JW is innocent like me
And Btw its not his fault if he has thousannds of dewaanis included me and you
Holly: no , I am not his dewaani:
Deepo: ofcurse you are , who was telling Raabi that Ram looks so hot
Holly: Yes I agree he is hot and s**y but it doesn't mean he can betray his wife
And they both started their gundagiri
Brins : you both stop fighting
Navs : You are too late for your advice dear:
Taz: Now you both do not start. I think we should start our job.
Common girls stop drooling and fighting and make me proud with our RPR Gundagiri gang
Humi to Preeto( the gansters who want to hijack him) : preeto till they are fighting . come we can hijack the lord and become his angels:
Tazo smilimg evily: but dear your plan is shattered before starting as me is here . till she could catch them . humi kicked on tazos foot and they bith ran away
Tazo : I think we should go now to MA as two dangerous angels are trying to hijack JW
JW and RPR gundagiri group sat in a big bus written on it gundagiri mission.
On they way navs and samy were fighting who will sit next to JW . As they both were busy fighting Faru sat next to JW and Navs and sam kept looking horrified to each others faces
They both sat behind JW and started drooling on JW
On the other hand deepo and holly were busy fighting if JW have betrayed her wife or not and brins was trying to stop them fighting with her tinny voice
Tazo was keeping an eye on the angels so munna can be saved from hijacking


Soon they reached MA but because of overload of gundas the bus stopped and they had to walk till banis house
Jw was in the middle , in the right side Faru, brins and tazo was protecting him and on the left side Navs , sam , holly and deepo.
Behind a big tree the angles were hidding and trying to hijack JW ,
As sam and navs were busy drooling and holly and deepo fighting over thier old discussion . Preeto and humi took JW away
Their was hungama going on . everyone was searching JW and the angels were hiding behind a treee with JW, Raabi Jws close friend came from behind , kicked and took JW from them : She informed everyone and they brought Jw to Bani and left from there


Bani saw and started shouting to get out of there. JW tried to expailn her but she was hell bent on not listening to him. Jw pressed his lips on hers make her listen to him . His kiss was so passionate that Bani stopped crying. Jw explained her everything about not spending night with Roshni and she tried to rape him but nothing happened between them . Bani hugged him tighlty and said she loves him and was very hurt seeing him with Roshni. She appalogized him for not trusting him

Bani said Jw to take shower as he must be tired from long journey. Jw took shower as he came out Bani was in her night suit . Jw looked at her passionatly . Bani felt his gaze on her and started blushing . Jai came towards her and started kissing on her lips and then tongue kiss : Bani was responsing his kiss . After they were breathless Jw started nuzzling her neck and deeper and deeper and deeper. He pressed wet kisses allover her body and ended up playing football

The end



Edited by steffroc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: tanthya



Haan, yeh baat tho hai, Cari Mata is well talented ..Koi baat nahi hai, meri phirni... we will make use of ur spl skills later on..😃

🤣wohi tou btw i am talentless🤣i just haave one talent to write in typing erros🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 .That Dialogues cracked me up !! 😆😆😆😆..


Oye, Ab edit kar..yeh DABH forum hai ..😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: steffroc


<div></div><font color="#990033">let her due to her spamming our forum will be number 1😉😆😆</font>




Behooda rabi... need help in spamming?? 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi aleena haan thank god u came🤣
sathya na i want to get a warning🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi behooda ..

Lol me just browsing was bored out work... Don't watch the show but will be happy to spam...

Lol u get a warning????? Naah leave that to moi lol

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