New ff *Lagi tujhse lagan*...HEARTBROKEN...Pg 3..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX...

Part 1...Pg 1😳


Part 2...HEARTBROKEN...Pg 2...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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After a Long weekend and terrible wait finally its monday tomorrow :) and before that the first part of this ff..hope u all like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Are you going to have a character sketch and/or Intro?
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Originally posted by: Ahlaam5

Are you going to have a character sketch and/or Intro?

Nope it would begin from sandhya and suraj's wedding😳Hope u all like😊
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Ok dear will surely pm u!😛😊
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Its night and Suraj is standing all alone in the empty corridor of his house dressed in the yellow sherwani his bhabho had got made for his wedding!😳

The whole house had been decorated with flowers and diyas were burning everywhere in the house...

Suraj stood staring at the dark night sky as the lights which were lighting up the walls and the pillars fell on him...😛

In the past couple of months life had changed for him COMPLETELY!😒

Fate had been cruel to him...as he lost kavita in a blast that rocked their small and peacful city lately...

He had not even come out of the shock of the whole incident that TONIGHT two months later he found himself married to SANDHYA...a girl who was a victim of the incident too...

She had lost her parents that fateful day and THE FIRST time suraj met her...he could feel the pain in her silence...REALISING THAT HIS MISERY WAS NOTHING IN FRONT OF HER GRIEF!...

All through the wedding ceremonies he never saw her SMILE nor did she utter a single word...Suraj often wondered if she was ready to marry her by will...but since his bhabho wanted him to marry her he never dared to ask SANDHYA ANYTHING AT ALL!...Comforting himself by the thought that may be the loss of her maa and babu jii had left her life upside down...😕

What he didn't know was that THEIR MARRIAGE HAD MARKED AN END TO sandhya's most cherished dream too!


Ok i know its a a little short update😊Will update a longg one next time for sure!😃


Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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No problem with the short update...personally I like short ones better! 😃 Now, as for the update itself let's start with the title. Lagi tujhse lagan...ohhh...you know I will just have to love this name...but it makes me sad too cause of the memories! 🥺. Never mind, at least now I've got ltl in this forum too. The ff has a great beginning -- well not in the story, of course, that starts with loss. I mean starting it off with their marriage. But poor Suraj...and Sandhiya who I guess has it worse. Wonder how things will turn out.

Good luck with the ff! And update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting beginning..want to read more :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8
add me in PM list
me luv to read it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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got to admit quite a good ff really...better than real thng..read mine

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