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Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Has someone told you how well you write? I can say it just from the way you put up things in words. That's beautiful. Try penning down a fic no? I am sure you'll do great.

The car scene was a well thought and executed one. I personally loved it. I have watched it a couple of times. The way his expression changes when she goes in silent mode, all serious and visibly upset makes so many things evident about him, about how she affects him, about how he can't see her upset. Absolutely.

The way he is impatient to tend her wound (so much that he even says please to her that he, in any normal circumstances, would never do), the way she pulls the blanket over him, the way he is aware of her movement even in his sleep and cannot resist confirming that she is alright. We have a lot from Rakshit's side. We need some more from Mrs. Shergill now.

These small bits are beautiful.

Originally posted by: deepikagupta9

I actually dislikes Sunny's golden shoes

Originally posted by: Saru...

Sofna well said bt still makers need to explore dri charater more..apart from her concern abt div n the need to find parents killer she dont express much whats her inner turmoil is..one of two monologues are needed to show how she spent her childhood with all these memories..nt from chachis point of view..