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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sweetnoori
Loved it continue dear
Good job

I am glad you did. Thank you. 😳

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sarada

@Saru...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Yar u should be the writer of show..mukku oks stalk if n include these scenes..

Loved it would be understatement 🤗. I could imagine it literally.😉.love you for writing this ❤️n 0,z 🥱you for not continuing it 😭and leaving us with imagination what would rakhsit do next❤️

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Amazing OS ❤️

This was the kind of the Holi aftermath which was expected, I'm glad you wrote about it and they both did have an idea that something happened, through Dri remembered the happenings thoroughly 😆

Wish you could continue this and we could've seen them confronting their emerging feelings 😛

Take care

Jess

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archanarajan96

@archanarajan96

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#24

This one is awesome...

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#25

More. More.more. more more more more more more🤣

There is no possible way on mother earth u can stop at that point.

*stamps feet*🤣

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Saru...
Yar u should be the writer of show..mukku oks stalk if n include these scenes..
Loved it would be understatement 🤗. I could imagine it literally.😉.love you for writing this ❤️n 0,z 🥱you for not continuing it 😭and leaving us with imagination what would rakhsit do next❤️

😆 That's really kind. Thanks a bunch.

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sarada

@Saru...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

😆 That's really kind. Thanks a bunch.

Sorry yar pura post is full of typos..god knows what happened to my mobile

Sorry n ur welcome hun.. ur really a talented writer.. do read my os n give ur valuable feedback

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Sugar_Cinnamon
Amazing OS ❤️
This was the kind of the Holi aftermath which was expected, I'm glad you wrote about it and they both did have an idea that something happened, through Dri remembered the happenings thoroughly 😆
Wish you could continue this and we could've seen them confronting their emerging feelings 😛

Take care
Jess

Hey Jess! Thank you so much. Don't we all want them to remember Holi events? If not the entire sequence then in bits and pieces at least? I am glad you enjoyed reading this.

I doubt if I can. Let your imagination run wild and imagine it your way what will happen next. 😆

Cheers