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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Yet another beautiful OS πŸ‘
The after-effects of Holi were wonderfully written. Mr. Shergill getting trapped by Mrs. Shergill and his hazy memory from the celebration. The video recording ultimately revealed the entire truth which Drishti purposely forgot to share and he is setting a trap for her. The revenge will indeed be sweet 😳
I have no words to describe the perfection with which it was written. ❀️
You're the only reason why this long wait is slightly bearable.
Keep blessing us with such beautiful pieces
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Awesome os
Lol Mrs Shergill trapped him cleverly but forgot that her Mr is more clever
Loved it entirely
Do write more on Drikshit

Hey plz cmplt ur TS A Promise To Keep and help us bearing the wait till weekend😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it continue dear
Good job
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: kaku17

Bwahaha... .. After effects of the Holi revelry...πŸ˜ƒ...Mrs thought she can get away with this but damn she miscalculated her Mr's perseverance. He ain't the business man people claim him to be, if he is not going to make her eat her own words ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thoroughly enjoying reading it.. .Do update soon and hopefully you're feeling well now. .

Ps: if possible do update the other one too. I desperately want to know why Rakshit went ballistic. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.

And lastly thanks for being our saviour. Weekdays are difficult without these two. 😭😭

Thsnk you. I am glad you enjoyed reading. πŸ˜† This was written to be a one shot. No continuation is on the way. πŸ˜†

Yes, I am trying to get the other one done soon but it is a little hectic at my end here. I am trying though.

Don't mention it. It's an absolute pleasure writing on these two. ❀️

Much love

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Vishakha12agr

Wow u should continue it pls

I don't think I can manage.

Thank you. 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Many thanks. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel4184

This was amazing! Written beautifully ❀️ I really hope you decide to continue it!


How sweet. Thanks a bunch. I am sorry but there won't be a continuation to this. Sorry.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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So sweet of you. Thank you. ❀️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Yet another beautiful OS πŸ‘
The after-effects of Holi were wonderfully written. Mr. Shergill getting trapped by Mrs. Shergill and his hazy memory from the celebration. The video recording ultimately revealed the entire truth which Drishti purposely forgot to share and he is setting a trap for her. The revenge will indeed be sweet 😳
I have no words to describe the perfection with which it was written. ❀️
You're the only reason why this long wait is slightly bearable.
Keep blessing us with such beautiful pieces


You are such a sweetheart. Thank you so much for writing such beautiful comments to me. I'm so grateful to you for these kind words.

Oh how sweet! I don't think I am getting down this ship anytime soon so hopefully I will keep writing on these two till the show is on air. 😳

Much love
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome os

Lol Mrs Shergill trapped him cleverly but forgot that her Mr is more clever
Loved it entirely
Do write more on Drikshit

Hey plz cmplt ur TS A Promise To Keep and help us bearing the wait till weekend 😊


Thank you very much. 😳

I am trying to get the other one done soon. It's just personal life is a bit hectic and tiring so I am keeping away from phone. Let's see. Hopefully I will post it soon.

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