A Promise to Keep - DriKshit SS [ Last Part Pg 34 ] - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: JDTKP

Nice story😇.

N waiting for the update.

Thank you. Next one is up. Check the above post for the update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yay... Finally got to read the update... It's sheer brilliance... 😊...you were right that this update will make me feel her pain..


It was heartbreaking but like I said before I connected more to Rakshit's heartbreak and pain for simple reason that he has always been upfront about things. For me communication is the key and Drishti has failed there. Rakshit didn't deserve that. If nothing, then he atleast deserved honesty from her.


On a lighter note the entire candle light dinner sequence was so dreamy. And you described it so well that I could visualise it. I hope we get something like that in the serial too.


Just one question, is the story over? I mean I really wanted to see how the situation will get resolved between the two of them.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaku17

Yay... Finally got to read the update... It's sheer brilliance... 😊...you were right that this update will make me feel her pain..


It was heartbreaking but like I said before I connected more to Rakshit's heartbreak and pain for simple reason that he has always been upfront about things. For me communication is the key and Drishti has failed there. Rakshit didn't deserve that. If nothing, then he atleast deserved honesty from her.


On a lighter note the entire candle light dinner sequence was so dreamy. And you described it so well that I could visualise it. I hope we get something like that in the serial too.


Just one question, is the story over? I mean I really wanted to see how the situation will get resolved between the two of them.

Uh not really, Kakoli. When I said to you that this update will make you feel more bad for her than him, then I had another sequence in mind for it but while writing, it became something else and then this had already got so long that I had to stop.

You are right but only if thought from the perspective of what is happening in the show. This is a three months later story and a lot has happened here in these three months. So that might make you a bit not right about these two.

You liked the candle light dinner sequence? That makes me so happy. I have taken long in penning it down. Almost took me two days.

No, the story is not over. I had planned it to be two shots which got extended to three shots and now I think I have to make this a short story.ImageI have got no other option. I myself am quite unsure about how many more parts this will take. I will try my best to get this done in less number of parts and quickly though.

Thank you.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#64

Oh thank god there's more to the story. It kinda seemed incomplete that's why I asked that question. This is surely going to become a favourite Drikshit fanfic of mine. There's lot of angst here and when they reconcile, I Am sure you'll make it magical. Already looking forward for the next part. (selfish of me, I know *😂)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing part and really liked the date n romantic rakshit❤️❤️. But it seems incomplete though. Will you continue it make it as an ss or ff anything. Will love to read it.😇😇

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh thank god there's more to the story. It kinda seemed incomplete that's why I asked that question. This is surely going to become a favourite Drikshit fanfic of mine. There's lot of angst here and when they reconcile, I Am sure you'll make it magical. Already looking forward for the next part. (selfish of me, I know *😂)

There has to be more. Oh how sweet! Thank you very much for all the kind words.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: JDTKP

Amazing part and really liked the date n romantic rakshit❤️❤️. But it seems incomplete though. Will you continue it make it as an ss or ff anything. Will love to read it.😇😇

Many thanks. I am glad you liked it. This IS incomplete. Yes, I have to make this a short story I guess. Thank you.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello people! Here is a quick and short note. Since I don't see IF getting back on its track anytime soon and it is very time consuming to post updates here, I have decided to post rest of the story on Wattpad. I lack time and I can't really afford sitting for hours, editing here and waiting for IF to get working would probably have me lost interest and I won't be able to finish off the story. So I think I will continue this on Wattpad.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#69

Harshada, how do I access this fic on wattpad?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing update <3

Loved the way you put up their emotions and injected the flashback of their happier moments. The scene where she comforted him through a mere touch after he opened up to her was so beautiful, despite not uttering anything, that touch was enough to soothe him, the description was bang on.

Waiting for the next part

Take Care

P.s: I know revamped IF is being a pain to almost everyone. Will be waiting for your updates on wattpad ;)

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