Drabble: Understanding

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Big eyes and long hair, she was accustomed to all their stare.
They threw her the look, every time she passed by making her shift uncomfortably in her own outer wear.

She could seem them all look the same, eyes full of lust and hearts, of malice.
The only thing making her swear.

'Oh dear lord, I pray to thee send me someone who'd see me for me'

The deity above the clouds smiled, this little girl was a gifted child.

Months later from her wish, came a prince.
Not just by power but by a soul so rinsed.

He looked at her with pained; tired eyes, hoping she would find in them, sincerity of a kind.

Knowing she lost all that was hers, he felt a connection with her.
Empathy filled his heart, and love his soul.

She saw him cry, weep his heart loud.
Reaching out to him, she showed him the stars beneath the clouds.

They held hands, they both finally found someone who could understand.

'Chikoo' she called his name with love so profound.
Looking at her big eyes, he was only see affection abound.

Okay, so I wrote this in exact 15 minutes on Jeevika-Viren so I thought of doing a DD version too Rakshit-Drishti fans can read it with them and Shikkhar-Divya can think of them.
Do read it and comment if you'd like to.

Thanks, A🤗




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing drabble ❤️
Would love to read more from you :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Such a beautiful drabble 👏❤️
It's hard to believe you wrote this in 15 mins
Keep writing such wonderful pieces.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sugar_Cinnamon

Amazing drabble ❤️

Would love to read more from you :)


Thank youuu dude!🤗

P.S Love your avi!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Such a beautiful drabble 👏❤️
It's hard to believe you wrote this in 15 mins
Keep writing such wonderful pieces.


Thank youuu!🤗
I usually time myself, when writing a drabble!
For sure, more DD stuff coming up for sure :D

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