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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesomeee... can't wait for the next part Soniya!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx sania will come out soon, hopefully 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful story! thanks for da wonderful story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent part Soniya do continue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sonya plz continue soon. Lovely FF. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi everybody, sorry for didn't continue my ff, but i'm so busy at the moment with school, coz i have to learn a lot for it as it's such an important schoolyear and i have to push my marks.....

but now i have time for the next part (after spending the whole day with learning 🤢 )

part 6

next day (evening):

Troy wents downstairs, ready for the match when his dad stops him.....

Mr Bolton : Troy? Where are you going?

Troy: Ummm...nowhere....just going to school and----

Mr Bolton(interrupt him): is that your sportbag?

Troy(little nervous): seems so......

Mr Bolton: and what are you doing with it?

Troy: well, dad listen, umm, i want to.....well....i don't know how to say it.....well i......ummmm....playing..... basketball.

He sees his dad making a really bad face so he tryed to escape.....

Troy: ohoooohhhh so late! hehe i really have to go now so see you later, guys!!!

Mr Bolton: stop! you're playing basketball today?! but you aren't fit yet. what about your back?

Troy: dad i'm fine....and my back, too. just trust me i know what i am doing, i'm ready to play!

Mr Bolton: sorry troy, but i can't allow it. what if you get hurt again while playing? just think about your futur as a basketballer....your career could end till it really began.

Troy: dad i'll promise i'll be careful, pls let me go i'd promised a friend to play today!

Mrs Bolton: oh darling, let him go, he'll be careful, i know it.

Mr Bolton: i can't stop you, can i?

Troy: thanx dad, bye!


At the gym:

Chad: oh man, you'd really came! Come on i'll introduce you to our trainer!

Both go to the trainer.

Chad: coach! that's troy you know the guy i talked about this afternoon...he's really talented
Coach: oh yeah chad, i remember, hi troy...i'm the coach...pls take you seat at the substitudes bench.

Chad: but coach....he have to play!!! he's really good, we need him!!

Coach: no arguments chad! troy take your seat.

Troy: yes coach.

The match starts and the basketball team is about to loose. Troy follows the match while sitting on the bench. He doesn't noticed that gaby is also in the gym, coz she is the cheerleader captain, who observes him. after a while she goes to him and sits next to him.

Gaby: so you joined the team?

Troy(concentraded on the game): yeah.....

Gaby:and why are you sitting here?

Troy: the coach don't want to let me play.....

Gaby( trys to tease him): i understand, your to bad.

Troy(looks at her): noooo......he don't know how am i plaiyng.

Gaby: sure, if i were you i would say the same....if you were so good like u said then the coach would ask you to play instead of putting on the bench....

Troy: belive me i'm good......

Gaby: i do not believe till you show it.....prove it.

Troy: ok i'll show you!

Gaby: i bet you don't score one time

Troy: i bet i'll score 5 times

The team takes time out.....now it's Troys chance to ask the coach to take part in the game, but he don't want to let him, chad trys to convince him.

Chad: coach pls, we are loosing....it doesn't make a difference.....

Coach: uhhhh...ok.

So Troy plays and...he scores more than 5 times, the coach is very happy about his new player, as well they still loose, but Troy is the hero of the match.



sorry for any writing mistakes, but it's really late....i'll revise it soon.....

will be continued........
Edited by Soniya_89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
hey guys time for a new update.
enjoy it!!!

part 7

after the match Troy plays basketball in his garden when Gabby enters.....

Gaby: congrats on your play....

Troy: what do you want?

he throws the ball....on the basket

Gabby: well i'm a fair loser. so reagarding our small bet....we didn't agreed on the term the winner get.....

Troy: i'm surprised.....

Gaby: about what?

Troy: you....

Gaby: So?

Troy (smiles, but she can't see him as she stands behind him): So.

Gaby( gets angry): are you able to form your senteces with more than 4 words?!

Troy: why?

Gaby: ohhho you like it to tease me, right?! really funny bolton! so why are you surprised?

Troy finally stops throwing the ball and turns around. he comes very close to Gaby who becomes nervous....

Troy: i'm surprised at you, because i never thought you would came here....

Gaby(gets new self-confidence): but now i'm here so let's make it short!

Troy(comes more closer): why? is there someone waiting for you?

Gaby: who should it be?

Troy: hehe maybe your boyfriend......(he starts smiling)

Gaby (starts to imitate him and smiles to): i have no boyfriend....

Troy: fine so you have time?

Gaby(confused): time for what?!

Troy: revenge, of course!

Gaby: so you give me revenge...

Troy: one match, you accept?

Gaby: lets do it!

They start playing. Gaby is really good- better than the most of the basketballer- but at last she has no chance against Troy, so she lost....

Troy(out of breath): you are good, a seriously rival.....

Gaby( out of breath): i never thought you are so good and now?

Troy: nothing. i am enough with my honor and it was a nice game with you. besides you are helping me in math so your doing enough for me.

Gaby: so i am even with you?

Troy: yeah.

Gaby: ok, well see you at school tomorrow, bye.

she turns to go, he just stares at her with a smile on his face.

Troy(whispers): bye.......(the shouts): good night and sweet dreams hun!!!!

Gaby(shouts): funny Troy!!!

Troy(says to himself): no seriously...i wish you a good night gabriella montez........(he still stares at her): simply cute.........

finally he wokes up and gets back to reality....

Troy (to himself): what am i talking? cute...., absolute nonsense! she's the enemy!

He shakes his head about himselfes and went inside....



At the same time when Gaby went home she's thinking about Troy....

Gaby: i don't know what came over me to go to him! he always makes fun os me! i really don't like him. but why am i thinking of him the most of the time ? actually i don't like him....

She shakes her head and trys to stop thinking of him, but she failed....

Gaby: but why am i feeling so different when he's around me?.....



will be continued.......

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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is getting good. more more more!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!! ITS THE BEST
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
thank you for the comments guys 😳
means a lot to me 😊

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