Too Many Emotions!!! Part 8 - Page 14!!!

haya i was fed up with revisin so i disided to make my own ff so here it is!

plz 4give me 4 my spelling mistakes and 4 my bad grammar!!!

Characters:

Armaan

Ridhima Dill Mill Gaye!

Laksh

KT Kunki Saas Bhi Kabbi Bahu Thi!

Prem

Mukti Kazuti Zindage Ki!

Prem

Heer Kiss Des Main Hain Mera Dil

Intro:

Armaan: He is the hottest guy in collage!!! All the girlzz die before him!!! Biggest flirt, but has a warm heart even if he doesn't always show it!!! He loves his family, waiting for the love of his life!!! A lot like in DMG!!! Age= 18

Ridhima: warm, caring, sexy even though she is so simple. she is also loving to everyone she meets and everyone who meets her is compelled to love her back (especially kids)!!! Her family is her life!!! She doesn,t talk to boys or give them the time of day, she feels as if they are only after one thing!!! she is waiting for her prince charming!!! A lot like in DMG!!! Age=18

Laksh:Armaan's best friend!!! A lot like in KSBKBT!!! Age=18

KT:Ridhima's cousin and best friend!!! A lot like in KSBKBT!!! Age=18

Prem:he is Ridhima's older brother!!!Hates Armaan!!! Gets angry easily only weakness his sister Ridhima (can be a little over protective)!!! Doesn't believe in love!!! A lot like in KZK!!! Age= 19

Mukti:Armaan's twin sister!!! Ridhima and KT'S best friend. Sweet and adorable!!! Favourite entertainment annoying Armaan!!! A lot like in KZK!!! Age= 18

Prem: Exactly the same as in KDMHMD!!! Armaan's li'll brother!!!Age =17 (just turned)!!! close with Armaan and goes almost everywhere with him.

Heer: Exactly the same as in KDMHMD!!! KT'S li'll sister!!! Age= 17(just turned)!!! She just lovs both of her sisters (KT and Ridhima), always tell each other everything!!!

Parents:

Armaan/Mukti/Prem: Bajaj Ba and Prena Pr (Gupta)

Ridhima and Prem: Shashank Sh and Padma Pa (Malik)

Laksh: Shubanker Shu and Kirti Ki (Basu)

KT/Heer: Tulsi Tu and Mihir Mi (Virani)

Intro an Part 1 : Page 1

Part 2 : Page 2

Part 3 : Page 3

Part 4 : Page 5

Part 5 : Page 6

Part 6 : Page 9

Part 7 : Page 11

Part 1:

(We see a woman calling someone, first we see the eyes (beautiful and grey) then the face (it is of course our Armaan)).

A - Ok ma I'm getting up!

(We then see someone walking in with a jug of frizzing cold water!!! and as I'm sure u guessed its Mukti! Seeing him still in bed she chucked the water from the jug all over him!)

A – AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Mukti yeh subh kya haga? He grabs her arm 2 stop her from leaving as he wasn't finished having a go at her yet

M – Kuch nah I just thought it would be fun(her eyes were watering from where she was laughing so much!)

A –'kuch nah I just thought it would be fun' imitating her voice! Teri toh main, ajj nahi chorunga tuche samgi! They were running all around the house when suddenly they go running into...

Ba – ABE tum buche bhi na khabbi nahi sudruge!

whilst all this is happening Prena is laughing her head off. she then walks up to them and dose arti on them.

Pr – Tum loge per kisi ki nazar na lage.

M – are bhaiya hume der horya, muche phir se late nahi hona!!!

A – acha baba chalo!

Pr – phela nashta tho karke jou!

M – nahi ma hum collage jake kuch kalenge!

Ba – ab chalo bhi tuche janna hain bhi yah nahi?

M – haan, haan chalo! aur yeh bhaiya kaha gaya?

A – main abi aya! we see him in his room looking at a box with the name Ridzi on it! main tuch kabbi nahi phool baunga main janta hoon ki dus saal beeth gaye magur main thuche abbi thak nahi poola aur apna zindagi main kabbi nahi poolunga! you will always be in my heart; you'll always be my best friend no matter what, I lov u yaar! then he leaves!

thanxs guyz for ur fab comments!!!
there is a name changed thanxs to prernadeewani, thanx for your suggestion!!!
i will and do appreciate all coments, suggestions and critisisums so plz give them so i can improve!
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Now let's go an find our Ridhima!

(she lives next door to Armaan and his family moved during the night/ her Dad works with his Dad at Sanjeevni. Armaan doesn't know her real name and vice versa and they also can't remember what each other look like parents haven't told there kids bout the Maliks aparat form the working part)

We see a girl who looks just like a pari in a simple white pajaami suit! we see her running to her dad and hugs him and then goes running to the mandir she see her mother praying. she sits beside her and starts singing in the most beautiful voice. she then gets up an hands out the prashad and then goes up stairs to wake her brother up!

R – Bhaiya plz utto ajj meri pheli din hega collage main aur main late nahi hona plz plz plz bhaya utto na!!! thik haga kati, kati, kati main tum se nahi bhat kardi!

P –accha baba main uttu gaya abb kush?

R – haan bhoot abb phatta phat se ready hojou main tumhara nashta leke ati hoon!

P – teek hai

R – thanks bhaiya!

P – yah, yah whatever get ready I thought you were gunna get late?

R –haan main abbi aye!

she runs down stairs and gets his breakfast and runs back up stairs.

P – wow, yaar that was fast, only 2 mins and you didn't fall this time, I'm impressed!

R –bhaiya app haje bhi ready nahi hua?

P – phela app neh mera kapre nahi chunna tho main kase ready hosakta?

R – Bhaiya app bhi na bilkul ek bucha ki tara hoon, app koi bhi kaam nahi karde mere bager toh meri shaadi ki bhaad kya karenge? Whilst getting his cloths out.

P –tho main tumhara shaddi nahi karvaunga aur agur ho bhi gaye na tho main apka patti dev ko ghar javai banake hi rahunga!

R – aur thumhara shaddi ko kya hogaya?

P – you know me na i'm not gunna get married i'm a playa u know how i do!

R – Yah i know u an ur yo yo yo.

P – yah, yah. abb jou aur ready hojou!

R – teek hai bhaiya!

Whilst in her room. she has a friendship bracelet that has the name Ammy on it!

R –haya Ammy ajj meri pehla din hega es collage main plz wish me luck. I miss u my best friend. wow i can't believe it dus saal hogaye i hope u haven't forgotten me, i realy, realy miss u!!! the one day i need your support the most you're not here to help me! anywaz wish me luck!

P – Ridhima aren't u ready yet?

R – nahi bhaiya main abbi aye!

And they leave.