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REBEL

This is a fan fic where hamara pyaara , dulhaara ARMAAN gets justice through REMIX All remix (a show on star one ) lovers get happy as they are the one who fight for armaan .

PART 1

It starts when shashank comes to know about the BHANG thing . At that time SUMIT AHUJA ( TIA AHUJA'S FATHER ) & SONIA RAY (ASHI'S MOM ) have a car accident so they are adimited to sanjivani . SO ashi , yuvi tia and ranveer cum to sanjivani to meet sumit and sonia .Armaan is very depressed . He is walking and crashes with tia

TIA : oh Tia's god kya tum dekh ke nayi chal sakte the ? are u blind or something . Ab tia ko phir se cream or lotion lagana hoga

ARMAAN : toh laga do kya farak padta hai ? ok I am sorry meri galti thi.

He finds tia very hot and sexy & trys to flirt with her

TIA : exuse me kya tum tia ke sath flirt karma chahte ho ?

ARMAAN : hello mai TIA se nai tumse flirt kar raha hu

Tia : so you admit tum tia ke saath flirt kar rahe the

ARMAAN : arey mai flirting kar raha tha par tia se nahi tum se

TIA : hello tia ke saath sirf tia ka ranveer flirt kar sakta hai

ARMAAN: any ways tumhara naam kya hai

TIA : Tia .TIA AHUJA . u know sumit ahuja jo aj admit hue hai

ARMAAN :ha I know unka case serious nahi hai aur yeh riddhima ne unka case muje de diya . koi complicated case nahi de sakti RIDDHIMA . par nahi who kyu degi ?

TIA : oh tum DOCTOR ho ? k any ways tia unhi ki beti hai . the only child

ARMAAN : oh toh ab mai samja tum mai ki jagah tia bolti ho

TIA : rite . par yeh ranveer kaha chala gay ?

Just then a handsome looking guy comes ( not more handsome then ARMAAN )

GUY : apna kaha aur hum aa gaye

TIA : oh ranveer tum kaha chale gayye the ? tia tumhe doondh doondh kar thak gayi hai

RANVEER : hum apko chod kahi ja sakte hai tia ?

TIA : no ways kyuki tum tia se bahut pyaar karte ho

RANVEER : theek kaha apne tia hum apse bahut pyaar karte hai . vaise hum sonia aunty aur sumit auncle ke DR ko doondh rahe the . pata nahi kaha hai vo kaha hai

ARMAAN : hey . mai sumit ahuja aur sonia ray ka dr hu . actually mai basket ko doondh raha tha

RANVEER & TIA : BASKET ye basket kaun hai ?

ARMAAN : basket tum basket ko nahi jante. Oh ho mai bhi bhool gaya ki DR RIDDHIMA SHASHANK GUPTA ko sirf mai he basket bulata hu .

TIA : Oh tia's god ab yeh batao ki DR RIDDHIMA GUPTA kaun hai

RANVEER : tia ap fikar mat kijiye yeh hame bata dege

ARMAAN : Fine . Is hospital ka jo DEAN hai riddhima uski beti hai aur meri tarah ek intern.

Uski ek behen hai ANJALI who bhi intern hai

RANVEER : Dekha tia unhone hume sab kuch bata diya

Then a girl screams

GIRL : DR ARMAAN MALLIK ap kaha hai . apko apni duty nahi chahiye

ARMAAN : Oh God aa gayi basket

Who ladki riddhima hai . Atlast she found him talking with a girl and a boy

RIDDHIMA : DR ARMAAN kya flirting ki jagah kaam kar sakte hai ?

ARMAAN : listen basket mai flirting nahi kar raha tha . See this girl already has a boy friend

TIA : Oh really . abhi toh tum tia ke saath flirt kar rahe the

RIDDHIMA : armaan tum flirting ek time pe do ladkiyo ke sath karoge ?

TIA : nahi yeh sirf tia ke saath flirt kar raha tha. But when he crashed with tia wo bahut upset lag raha tha

ARMAAN : forget it . by the I am DR ARMAAN MALLIK .

TIA : as I told you TIA AHUJA

RANVEER : hum RANVEER SISODIA hai

RIDDHIMA: hi I am DR RIDDHIMA GUPTA

TIA: pata hai ARMAAN told me

ARMAAN : By the basket tum muje kyu doondh rahi thi

RIDDHIMA: urgg !!! armaan maine tum se kitni baar bola hai mai riddhima hu basket nahi. Aur mai tumhe isliye bula rahi thi kyuki muje Sonia Ray & Sumit Ahuja ki reports chahiye

ARMAAN: arey aj kitne log in do naye paients ke bare mai baat kar rahe

RIDDHIMA: Kyu aur kaun baat kar raha hai ( very rudely )

Before ARMAAN could speak tia says

TIA: Tum armaan se itna rudely kyu baat kar rahi ho . tho armaan tia se takraya tia didn't talk rudely to him

RIDDHIMA: Kyuki tum usse nahi janti . mai ise kafi achi tarh se janti hu . yeh bahut he bura insaan hai . Sab ki help karne ke liye tiar hai . lekin apni khud ke bare mai toh kabhi sochta he nahi aur apni zindagi waste kar raha hai

And she goes

TIA: lekin papa ne tia ko yeh sikhya ki phele sab ki help karo aur baad mai apni

ARMAAN : tum usse bhul jao . wo paagal hai . waise yeh rahe SUMIT AHUJA ke medication ki list

RANVEER : Sonia aunty ki medication kaha hai

ARMAAN : Who maine unki beti ko de diye

TIA : us red head punk ASHI ko

ARMAAN : nahi ANVESHA BANERJEE RAY ko

RANVEER : who hamari dost hai . hum use ashi bulate hai

TIA : uske saath aur koi tha kya ?

ARMAAN : yeah ! YUVRAJ DEV . YASHVANT DEV ka beta .

Then his pager rings

ARMAAN : oh god I.C.U mai emergency hai . got to go bye

TIA : bye . nice to meet you

RANVEER : hume ap se milke bahut acha laga

ARMAAN : muje bhi . bye

AND then he goes

TIA : ranveer tia ko aisa kyu lagta hai ki yeh basket aur armaan ek dusre se pyaar karte hai aur ab unka break up ho gaya

RANVEER : tia ab yeh unki personal life hai . hume interfere nahi karna chahiye . agar yeh help magege toh hum unki help karege

TIA : u r rite ranveer . Ab chalo sonia aunty aur papa ko milke ate hai

RANVEER : chaliye tia

The End of part 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will read it l8r n comment...I need 2 go offline nw..so just wanted 2 let u kno ina way dat i was here...my comments rreserved...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys 15 views so many views but not a single proper reply whether u liked it or not. i think nobody is liking my fan fic . i think'll discontinue writing this fan fic. c'mon guys its my MY FIRST FAN FIC
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh mix of remix and dmg gr8 updt soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goood sweety i love it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
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thank you sooo much i will continue soon pls encourge me like this

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