Armaan & Riddhima fall in luv FF #01

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1021

Originally posted by: kvn1983
really a nice update sorry for late posting butits really a nice one please update soon

mere humnashin ko mulaqaat ki fursat nhi,
unhone aaj khat mein kal milne ko likh diya.....
wo jo kahte hai ki hume hal_e_dil bayaan karna nhi aata,
koi to unhe batlaade ke humne apne haal ko gazlo mein likh diya.... 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1022

Originally posted by: gidha
Great update Ram 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1023

Thanks for replaying every one & sorry for late update………
Now I continue it again……….
PART:-22

In Children Ward:-

Muskaan & Rahul saw a girl while she eating the chocolate.
MUS: are chocolate kha rahi ho.kyun se chocolate hai??????
RAH: oye ye kya kar rahi hai tu??
Muskaan looking towards Rahul angrily & said:oye kankjure tu fir mere se panga le raha hai .me jatti hu Punjab ki,ager mera dimag ghoom gaya na to tujhe mar mar k vaapas Punjab bhej dugi.
Rahul start laughing & said:dimag aur tujme
Muskaan get very angry & said 2 rahul: oyeeee….kyu apni maut ko bula raha hai……
.The girl,who was eating chocolate,after finished her chocolate she said 2 both of them: Tum dono ladna band karo aur treatment suru karo.aur vase bhi jis chocolate k upper tum lad rahe the vo to kab ki kha li……………………………….
RAH: ha…ha suru karte hai treatment.
MUS: oye thand rakh yaar,karte hai treatment………

Lunch Time In Canteen:-

All are present here.
AT: are! Muskaan kya baat hai,itni gusse me kyo ho??????
MUS: mat puch yaar.she looking at Rahul & said:aaj to me ek khoon karne ki soch rahi hu.aur upper se ye duty.
AT: ha yaar hum logo se aachy majdur hai.
ANJIE: I agree.kitna kaam karna padta hai aur koyi chutti nahi…….
All depressed and exhausted. AR are in their own world busy playin footsie under the table. Suddenly armaan stands up…..
ANJIE: Are armaan kaha ja rahe ho?????
AR: Vo anjie mujhe lunch k baad dr.keerti ko ek report deni hai,to bas ushe hi tayaar karne jar aha hu.ok.bye guys……..& he leave.

After 5 minutes riddhima pager is ringing.she pick up it & c,that armaan sending a message 2 her.
Massage was:-riddhima tum vaha ander kya kar rahi ho,me yaha bahar tumahra intzaar kar raha hu.
Jaldi bahar aao.

Riddhima stands up quickly………..
ANJIE: Are ridz,kya hua??kaha ja rahi ho????
RIDZ: Vo did r.keerti ka page tha.vo mujhe bula rahi he.
AT: kya baat hai.lagta hai Hitler to tumhe maar kar hi chodegi.lunch me bhi………
Ridz smile & said: I have 2 go..see u later.bye………

Then she out of the canteen & looking here & there but armaan was not present here.
RIDZ 2 HERSELF: ye armaan bhi na,mujhe yaha bula kar pata nahi kaha chala gaya??
Suddenly armaan comes from her back & put her hand into her waist….
RIDZ: huummm…kaha gaye the pata hai,me kab se tumhara intzaar kar rahi hu…..
AR: yahi tha.tumhare aas paas…..
RIDZ: to phir jab me tumhe yaaha waaha dekh rahi thi to bahar kyo nahi aaye….
AR: me dekna chahata tha ki meri jaan intzaar karte huye kasi lagti hai.
Ridz smile & said:Armaan tum bhi na kahi bhi suru ho jaate ho..aacha ye batao mujhe bahar kyu bulaya……..
AR: aase hi.lakin ager tumhe aacha nahi laga to jao waapas chali jao & he trun his face against her.
RIDZ: armaaann..she hug him behind her back & said: Me to bas mazaak kar rahi thi.
Then armaan turned 2wards her & said: aacha me bhi mazaak kar raha tha.then he smile & run.
RIDZ: kya?????????????????????????

Locker Room:-

After finishing their duty every one present in locker room.
AT: haan..chalo majduri kataam………
MUS: ha yaar sacchi aaj to bohot kaam ho gaya….
ANJIE: me to jaaker hi so jaayugi.ridz chale…….??
Riddhima looking 2wards armaan & said: ha di chaliye….
ANJIE: ok bye guys……
Then armaan give a flying kiss 2 riddhima.
Ridz blushing & said:byeee……….

AT:yaar armaan har baar tu mujhse advice maagta hai na,aaj mujhe teri advice chahiye..
AR: bol champ.kya baat hai?????????
AT: are yaar anjali mujhe ignore kyu karti hai???
AR: champ……..tu anjali ko ignore kar fir dekh kya hota hai.aacha ba me chalta hu.mujhe dher ho rahi hi kaal milte hai…bye..

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NOTE:-
Guys now my ff is going to reach 150 pages.so according to the rule it will be closed.so tomorrow I continue it Start a new ff it's title name is:-

😛 "ARMAAN & RIDDHIMA FALL IN LOVE"FF#2😛

I hope you also like it.
I am trying to improve.If u feel that any thing is wrong here plz.tell me.
I continue it from part-23….
Thanks again to all of you to read my ff & give your replays here.
Please Keep Reading……….
Love u all……. 🤗🤗🤗

~~~~~~~~~~END OF FIRST FAN FIC~~~~~~~~~~

==========continue it by starting a new ff===============

Edited by ram* - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1024

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...wonder ful continuation....sorry for my late reply...I usually dont come on weekends..so I missed part 20,21,22..today I read from part 20...n I must say its too good....very well written...great job mere yaar!! 👏

I m waiting for ur second ff............coz m eagerly waiting for the next part!! 😃 😃

Rumii

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1025

hey karan first of all congrats for reaching to 150 pages and all the best for ur next link and that title was excellent
comming to ur ff its asusual awesome and excellent 👏 tho ab atul anjie ko ignore karega par mujhe nahi lagta wo usko ignore karpaayenga because he is anjies follower right and arman was very cool he paged ridz and ridz came out saying a lie and armans dialogue was excellent
thanks a lot for ur pm
pls continue soon and dont forget to pm ur link to me

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@Karan.T

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1026

Originally posted by: Azaan_best
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...wonder ful continuation....sorry for my late reply...I usually dont come on weekends..so I missed part 20,21,22..today I read from part 20...n I must say its too good....very well written...great job mere yaar!! 👏

I m waiting for ur second ff............coz m eagerly waiting for the next part!! 😃 😃

Rumii

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@Karan.T

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Posted: 17 years ago

#1027

Originally posted by: urmila_17
hey karan first of all congrats for reaching to 150 pages and all the best for ur next link and that title was excellent
comming to ur ff its asusual awesome and excellent 👏 tho ab atul anjie ko ignore karega par mujhe nahi lagta wo usko ignore karpaayenga because he is anjies follower right and arman was very cool he paged ridz and ridz came out saying a lie and armans dialogue was excellent
thanks a lot for ur pm
pls continue soon and dont forget to pm ur link to me

Thanks for comment urmi.Don't worry i will definately send u my ff link.